The Story Writers' Circle - Page 3

Writers, come in. Talk about your stories, writing and the technicalities of writing, any advice you need, critique

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https://www.qfeast.com/story/Q8e0GU/A-Tail-Tale Since a few others are presenting their stories as well... If anyone would like to read my story, rate and critique it as much as you want, here it is.
A Tail Tale
A Tail Tale
They say conflict drives people away, and prejudices are made to splinter us. What happens to a society that has long lived united against struggles of revolutionary war, civil war, world wars, depressions, and terrorism when disease strikes. When the very places we gather in become quarantine zones, or our graves? When one day your neighbor could be fine, friendly, and happy, but then become ravenous, becoming something else. When society is struck by two similar plagues that either turns you into a "freak" or a dangerous feral like creature that loses all intelligence and humanity. While both types look exactly the same, society divides itself to defend, or attack against this threat.
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on July 26, 2016
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https://www.qfeast.com/story/g9opsC/Blood-of-Dragons?ref=sl Please have a read and I welcome any pointers
Blood of Dragons
Blood of Dragons
Abandoned at the doors of the Arcane tower, a little babe cries, eyes of brass and hair of gold, a half breed, between elf and man... And the blood of ancient fire running through his veins. The fate of the land rests on him, but where he leads it, no-one knows...
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on July 26, 2016
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https://www.qfeast.com/story/8LxRAM/Impure rate and critique pls, i want to male it better
Impure
Impure
Once, long ago, three factions ruled over the nation of Alma. The Kendred, Shedan, And Morphis, each with its own god. Under the fires of an ancient war, the Morphis died off, and their god disappeared. One thousand years later a dark curse has swept over the land, transforming Alma and her people. It is now up to Martin Dunshire and his friends, Leo Wallace and Linda Baroo, to free the land from a never ending nightmare. As the threat of war is on the doorstep, A dark truth comes to light.one that will forever change Alma. Can they do it before time runs out? (feel free to rate, add to favorites, or comment. All criticism is helpful)
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on July 25, 2016
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Horror stories.
Horror stories.
This is a collection of horror stories, I do not own any of these either. Also trigger warning. Hope you enjoy.
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on June 14, 2016
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Versions to the Core
Versions to the Core
Characters singing their own versions of these songs I'm familiar for a few of my characters. So enjoy.
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on June 11, 2016
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Murderer's Hide and Seek
Murderer's Hide and Seek
In this story, you are the main character. You are an insane murderer, lurking in the shadows, wondering who's your next victim. Your family is dead and you know who killed them.. It's yourself. You're a monster. So far you've murdered half the town, the other half is hiding. To you, it's a game of hide and seek, however, to them, they're running for their lives.. TRIGGER WARNING! DISTURBING CONTENT! CONTENT WARNING!
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on June 11, 2016
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Mirror, Mirror
Mirror, Mirror
Um, hey. I wrote a Twilight Princess fanfiction. It's a sequel to the actual game. Enjoy.
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on June 11, 2016
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Guardian's Flame.
Guardian's Flame.
Please read. In a world where society is differentt, and universal, humans posses magic, and the strong rule a this fantasy comedy focuses on a group lead by an very strong female protagonist. New chapter will be put out on a regular basis. Has lots of action (violence),.and a slow.paced.romance.
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on May 25, 2016
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Hey everyone, if you have time, I'd like you guys to give me some advice on my story.
https://www.qfeast.com/story/4209/Wolves-Of-The-Ravine
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on March 31, 2016
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Star Wars Episode VII 1/2: The Love of Ren - Chapter 1 - AssortedHeroes - Star Wars Episode VII: The Force Awakens (2015) [Archive of Our Own]
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
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Kanya888
WARNING: NOT COMPLETE YET
on March 01, 2016
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on March 01, 2016
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I have a couple stories on my page, but they're mainly poetry and none of the actual stories are done, my main focus right now is impure
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on January 21, 2016
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Go,check out meh stories,they are truly works of art,go! XD
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on January 21, 2016
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I have some stories on my wall.
Ones sonic, another's creepy pasta.
I hope y'all read and suggest any ideas!
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on December 07, 2015
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I just need to know if I can post fanfics.
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Drake23
Hi.
on December 04, 2015
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Karissawilliams
Hii im Kahrisma
on December 03, 2015
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on December 03, 2015
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I'm starting of a story but because it is only one my wall so far no one has read it! Please do read!
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on October 10, 2015
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Help needed to write a proposal scene?
Help needed to write a proposal scene?
I need help writing a marriage proposal scene in my story. For details: The boy's name is Troy Robinson and the girl is named Sarah. The setting is a park in the early part of November, kind of cold. They have know each other for 4 to 5 years. Any other kind of details i can give you. Star this question to receive answer updates
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on September 27, 2015
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Hey, I need some reads on my story to see if it is ok
http://www.qfeast.com/story/k1e0mS/Rise-of-the-burning-man?ref=sl
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on September 10, 2015
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Um, I don't really have much to say but plz read my story, Children Of Olympus, in the comments of the story plz tell me if u want me to continue it. Also I'm working on another story, Star Reader
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on September 10, 2015
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Read any of my M.O.S.A.T. stories if you want to (Masters Of Space And Time) :-)
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on August 30, 2015
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