Wolves Of The Ravine

Wolves Of The Ravine

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014209 reads 21 readers 42 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue

Water clouded Ferone's eyes, he felt himself being dragged by the current of water, rays of light beamed down on him, it felt as if that was the last he was going to see. He held out his paws in front of him, they were merely silhouettes in the darkness of the stream.

He heard mocking laughing and gloating as if Ferone had just lost the battle of his life. "Given up - cub?" The same voice taunted. The words were a blur in his ears, but he heard them, despite being dragged deep down beneath the stream.

'What's happening? Why do I feel so let down?' Ferone thought to himself. He had no clue of what was happening around him, he felt overwhelmingly discouraged. 'My lungs can not take it... How can I stop my suffering?...'
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The_Panda_Otaku
Another chapter!
~Reading~
That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Dei_Dei
Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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The_Panda_Otaku
Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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Sliversplashthecat
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Dei_Dei
Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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The_Panda_Otaku
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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Dei_Dei
I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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The_Panda_Otaku
Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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The_Panda_Otaku
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Dei_Dei
Crimson! You're back ^_^
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The_Panda_Otaku
Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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QuackieMackie
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Dei_Dei
Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More▼
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QuackieMackie
YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! ILY BEST FRAND
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Dei_Dei
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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QuackieMackie
I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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Queen_of_Narnia
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Dei_Dei
Thank you! More coming soon!
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Dei_Dei
@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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Queen_of_Narnia
Yay! ^_^
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Dawnstar
The title of the story's awesome!
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Dei_Dei
Thank you
My story titles are usually never this good
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Dawnstar
(Just to let you now, wolves can't sheath and unsheathe claws.) But great story! The best!
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Dei_Dei
thanks loads!
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Dawnstar
:3
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Dei_Dei
This was a story I started writing yearsr ago, I haven't done much research xD
Thank, you a lot though! I'll fix the sheathing and unsheathing claws thing. (I guess they keep their claws out all the time?)
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Dawnstar
(Yes, they can't really, you know, force their claws into their paw. XD)
But, yeah, great story!
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Dei_Dei
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story.
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The_Panda_Otaku
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The_Panda_Otaku
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
Dei_Dei
@Crimsonthehedgehog
Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it
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on April 29, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Dei_Dei
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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The_Panda_Otaku
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More▼
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The_Panda_Otaku
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Dei_Dei
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Dei_Dei
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
love it
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on April 19, 2014