The Story Writers' Circle - Page 4
Writers, come in. Talk about your stories, writing and the technicalities of writing, any advice you need, critique
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Taking over
In a post-apocalyptic world were gangs compete for authority a teenage girl decides to join the fight to become the dictator of her country. She has to build a gang, and compete against other gangs in a world full of violence, and crime.
on July 20, 2015
The Visitors
A teenage girl suddenly developes the ability to see, and talk to ghosts. She learns she has several ghosts living in her house. This is part of an ongoing series to continue for a while.
on July 10, 2015
Help write a scene in a story
I'm writing a scene were this guy in my story is being to Arizona by foot. He isn't feed, is forced to walk even when he can't, and his hands have rope burn on them. I want some other details added in so you can see how much pain his' in forced journey. Please help by giving my ideas and details needed. If you need any already details then just ask me and I'll tell you.. Star this question to receive answer updates
Dry cracked lips. He is so utterly exhausted he cannot even muster up the energy or will to cry.
on June 13, 2015
on May 28, 2015
I have two stories that are fairly new, chances are you've heard of Luck Star. My other one is Out Of The Dark. They're both a drama mixed with romance
on February 27, 2015
This isn't about a story on here,
At school I'm one of the top writers in my class but all my freechoice stories are based on 5 of the same characters but it keeps being 'continued'... Is that a good idea for when I go to Secondary? o.o
At school I'm one of the top writers in my class but all my freechoice stories are based on 5 of the same characters but it keeps being 'continued'... Is that a good idea for when I go to Secondary? o.o
on January 16, 2015
http://www.qfeast.com/story/4wlgw8/The-Damaged not sure about continuing this story. Lemme k ow what you guys think.
The Damaged
I would be sixteen in just one year, in 4782, and I wish people would stop treating me like a kid. I would get my right to own a house in a year, even if I did have to build it myself. Its not like I minded; I wasn't weak or lazy at all. If I was, I would have been voted off already. This was the last year I had to survive, then they couldn't take me off anymore. I would be free to do the voting. Sadly, last year, I was put into the running. I had really stepped up my game when I narrowly escaped. I hoped that was enough to keep me in this year.
[Copyright: Please do not use my ideas, quotes, the setting, the characters, or any of the terms of my story without asking me permission first.]
on July 24, 2014
What do you think of my short story?
http://www.qfeast.com/story/1EAXAn/Day-of-the-Dog
http://www.qfeast.com/story/1EAXAn/Day-of-the-Dog
Day of the Dog
Cassidy has just lost her mom, and is really, really hurting. On November 7th, her Dad and her visit Cassidy's mom at the graveyard. Later, when she's walking around the forest behind he house, she hears the wounded cry of an animal that just might help heal her heart. Enjoy! Rate, Follow, and Comment your suggestions!
on June 17, 2014
This story isn't finished yet... Can you guys give me some feedback Please!
http://www.qfeast.com/story/lt000I/The-Matchmaker
http://www.qfeast.com/story/lt000I/The-Matchmaker
The Matchmaker
Lindsay started her 9th grade year as a regular student, but then she starts a blog that helps people in her school find their true match, but she has a secret... She has never been in a relationship.
on June 03, 2014
Rise of the Paragon Parabolic
My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal
on June 03, 2014
on June 03, 2014
Chosen
Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.
on May 31, 2014
Hola, I was wondering if anyone had any comments on my stories; please be honest otherwise it won't help me very much! Thanks!
on May 27, 2014
Working on a new story. Called The Roses of Doom. Still a work in progress.
on April 23, 2014
What do you guys think of a story about a girl who is obsessed with herself and gets cursed by a witch and turned into a Jaybird, only an act of love can set her free from the curse!
on March 27, 2014
I added a chapter to my story: Wolves of The Ravine
And I also added a little note to add OC characters into the story, if you could sign up an OC character and read my new chapter, thank you very much! :D
And I also added a little note to add OC characters into the story, if you could sign up an OC character and read my new chapter, thank you very much! :D
on March 12, 2014
What do you guys think about my Creepypasta story, The CherryBlossom Siblings? Please comment good and bad ideas, thoughts, and advice on it!
on March 11, 2014
have you read the story the power of magic? if so did you like it if not READ IT then tell me!!!
on March 11, 2014
can i join?
on March 11, 2014
I've been working on a story: 'Wolves Of The Ravine' And I'll really like it if you could have a look at it and give me a compliment and suggestion. :)
Awesome! I totally love it because of the wolves. Adding a very old, wise, creepy medicinal wolf would be my suggestion.
on April 23, 2014
on February 26, 2014
I've been working on 3 stories before I joined feast but i m not sure wether to upload them, one is really long, they're not finished and I need to maybe combine them to make one big awesomer story
its ok if they're not completed!! upload them!! we will read them ;) oh and i had many stories in my drafts too!! its ok if you take your time to add chapters in your stories :) i'll read them!!
on February 05, 2014
on February 04, 2014
MY STORIES WILL BE ON HOLD FOR A FEW MONTHS!!!! I'M SORRY!! :((
Aww... but at the same time... yaaay!!! I get to read them without you adding on so I have even.more to catch up on!!! :p ;)
on February 01, 2014
on February 01, 2014