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Read any of my M.O.S.A.T. stories if you want to (Masters Of Space And Time) :-)
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on August 30, 2015
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Creepypasta series: Spirit Maiden
Creepypasta series: Spirit Maiden
An ongoing creepypasta about a girl who can morph into her spirit animal. I don't know much about creepypasta, but I really wanted to write one
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on July 28, 2015
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Journey through Darkness
Journey through Darkness
A story based on a comic book I wrote. 4 Teenage girls in a magical land travel through the land, and deal with life. It gets pretty dark at times.
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on July 25, 2015
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Taking over
Taking over
In a post-apocalyptic world were gangs compete for authority a teenage girl decides to join the fight to become the dictator of her country. She has to build a gang, and compete against other gangs in a world full of violence, and crime.
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on July 20, 2015
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The Visitors
The Visitors
A teenage girl suddenly developes the ability to see, and talk to ghosts. She learns she has several ghosts living in her house. This is part of an ongoing series to continue for a while.
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on July 10, 2015
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Help write a scene in a story
Help write a scene in a story
I'm writing a scene were this guy in my story is being to Arizona by foot. He isn't feed, is forced to walk even when he can't, and his hands have rope burn on them. I want some other details added in so you can see how much pain his' in forced journey. Please help by giving my ideas and details needed. If you need any already details then just ask me and I'll tell you.. Star this question to receive answer updates
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Celia_Bowen
Dry cracked lips. He is so utterly exhausted he cannot even muster up the energy or will to cry.
on June 13, 2015
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on May 28, 2015
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I have two stories that are fairly new, chances are you've heard of Luck Star. My other one is Out Of The Dark. They're both a drama mixed with romance
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on February 27, 2015
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I love writing SO much! I hope some of you guys check out some of my stories. My favorites are Dear Alison, Dear Love (Sequel to Dear Alison), and The Experiment. The Experiment is more futuristic and I really like it.
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on February 14, 2015
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This isn't about a story on here,
At school I'm one of the top writers in my class but all my freechoice stories are based on 5 of the same characters but it keeps being 'continued'... Is that a good idea for when I go to Secondary? o.o
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on January 16, 2015
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http://www.qfeast.com/story/4wlgw8/The-Damaged not sure about continuing this story. Lemme k ow what you guys think.
The Damaged
The Damaged
I would be sixteen in just one year, in 4782, and I wish people would stop treating me like a kid. I would get my right to own a house in a year, even if I did have to build it myself. Its not like I minded; I wasn't weak or lazy at all. If I was, I would have been voted off already. This was the last year I had to survive, then they couldn't take me off anymore. I would be free to do the voting. Sadly, last year, I was put into the running. I had really stepped up my game when I narrowly escaped. I hoped that was enough to keep me in this year. [Copyright: Please do not use my ideas, quotes, the setting, the characters, or any of the terms of my story without asking me permission first.]
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on July 24, 2014
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What do you think of my short story?
http://www.qfeast.com/story/1EAXAn/Day-of-the-Dog
Day of the Dog
Day of the Dog
Cassidy has just lost her mom, and is really, really hurting. On November 7th, her Dad and her visit Cassidy's mom at the graveyard. Later, when she's walking around the forest behind he house, she hears the wounded cry of an animal that just might help heal her heart. Enjoy! Rate, Follow, and Comment your suggestions!
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on June 17, 2014
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This story isn't finished yet... Can you guys give me some feedback Please!

http://www.qfeast.com/story/lt000I/The-Matchmaker
The Matchmaker
The Matchmaker
Lindsay started her 9th grade year as a regular student, but then she starts a blog that helps people in her school find their true match, but she has a secret... She has never been in a relationship.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I like it!
on July 24, 2014
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StarMoon
I've read it! It's really good!
on June 16, 2014
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on June 03, 2014
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Rise of the Paragon Parabolic
Rise of the Paragon Parabolic
My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal
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MEGS0316
Kk :3
on June 05, 2014
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Parabolic
from what I have been told it is good
on June 04, 2014
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MEGS0316
K para this will be my first fanfic from a dude so I'm hoping its good
on June 04, 2014
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Parabolic
but from what I have been told by my readers it is pretty good they keep asking for more
on June 03, 2014
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Parabolic
who else am I to advertise?
on June 03, 2014
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on June 03, 2014
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Can you please write feedback on my story?

http://www.qfeast.com/story/5099/Chosen
Chosen
Chosen
Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.
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JeweledOwl812
REALLY interesting and amazing!
on June 17, 2014
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Cristallite
ITS FREAKIN AWESOME
on May 31, 2014
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on May 31, 2014
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Hello! Im a fellow writer! And can you please put feedback in my writing?
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JeweledOwl812
I'm all for it!
on June 17, 2014
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CrystalDiamond2323
Of course!
on May 31, 2014
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on May 27, 2014
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Hola, I was wondering if anyone had any comments on my stories; please be honest otherwise it won't help me very much! Thanks!
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on May 27, 2014
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Plz review my story silent pain
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on April 29, 2014
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Working on a new story. Called The Roses of Doom. Still a work in progress.
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on April 23, 2014
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What do you guys think of a story about a girl who is obsessed with herself and gets cursed by a witch and turned into a Jaybird, only an act of love can set her free from the curse!
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CrystalDiamond2323
Like a blue jay.. Bird... Idk.. XD
on August 18, 2014
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JeweledOwl812
Sounds interesting...but what's a Jaybird?
on June 17, 2014
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Parabolic
sound more like a parody of the princess and the frog to me
on June 03, 2014
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Parabolic
I didn't say the whole thing did, just the last part does
on May 31, 2014
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CrystalDiamond2323
Haha! I agree as well, but it can be an interesting story!
on May 31, 2014
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on March 27, 2014
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