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Anyone can take this idea:

The story is about a man that was frozen in time. He was isolated inside a chamber that slows time down in it, while the rest of the world moves in its regular motion. He escapes the chamber and is now in the modern world. What he experienced was 5 minutes, while the world experienced 500 years. As the world and the rest of its people change, he did not. Will he change to fit in the modern day society, or will he refuse to change?
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15 days ago
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so any thoughts as to how i could make this better would be great. I need ideas for events. Im good with characters, i just need events
https://www.qfeast.com/story/8LxRAM/Impure
Impure
Impure
Once, long ago, three factions ruled over the nation of Alma. The Kendred, Shedan, And Morphis, each with its own god. Under the fires of an ancient war, the Morphis died off, and their god disappeared. One thousand years later a dark curse has swept over the land, transforming Alma and her people. It is now up to Martin Dunshire and his friends, Leo Wallace and Linda Baroo, to free the land from a never ending nightmare. As the threat of war is on the doorstep, A dark truth comes to light.one that will forever change Alma. Can they do it before time runs out? (feel free to rate, add to favorites, or comment. All criticism is helpful)
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19 days ago
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Ok so no one has read this and it's bothering me I stayed up half the night writing it
Please read it
https://www.qfeast.com/story/wTC1HV/Escape
Escape...
Escape...
My pain was growling at me trying desperately to escape. I smashed my fist against the wall again. And again, angry at what seemed mother to most but the pain was did not go unseen..
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
No reads... hmmm m not surprised really. I guess I'll just delete it...
18 days ago
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
20 days ago
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Also Mother is supposed to be nothing idk why that happened but I was really tored
20 days ago
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20 days ago
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Hey, I need some help with this story. For those who know Kpop or are just very fanfic minded, could you please help? I'm not really sure about how my writing is, and I would appreciate some critique.
https://www.qfeast.com/story/s75YPs/A-Difference-in-Genders-A-BTS-Story
A Difference in Genders (A BTS Story)
A Difference in Genders (A BTS Story)
This is my first BTS fic ever, so please comment what you think about it, I'd love feedback so I can improve! ^^
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on February 04
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A brand new story I wrote where Vocaloid songs are given a story twist.
Only songs with stories and secrets hidden within the lyrics will make this story, however.
https://www.qfeast.com/story/FrBX0P/Vocaloid-Songs-as-Stories
Vocaloid Songs as Stories
Vocaloid Songs as Stories
I've done some digging into Vocaloid songs I really adore, and I've found that some songs have hidden stories behind them. As such, I've managed to construct these songs into stories that convey the song's meaning as best as I could. If you feel there's a song that should be added in this story, feel free to request it, and I will try my best.
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on January 27
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Right...
You know that feeling when you've got a good story idea but you can't think of a name for it?
Yeah, I'm stuck in that feeling right now! HELP!
If you think you can help, just reply to this, and I'll PM you the idea.
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Bookworm10
I would love to help!
on February 04
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Anime_Lover2234
I'd like to help!
on January 19
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on January 19
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I'm struggling for story ideas, guys.
Any help to contribute would be GREATLY appreciated.
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on January 11
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Wolf Winter
Wolf Winter
A society, where 3 boys and 3 girls are pulled from their villages to compete in the winter games where only the survivors of the 2 teams are married, lives 2 people. Tylan Donovan, and Alexandra Varvara. Together they lead their teams to achieve victory. Only one female survivor, and one male survivor. Who will win?
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on January 05
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Thanks for the 7 thumbs on my post guys
I'm gonna post my story idea here, since... well, you know, it's gonna make more sense.
But the 10 thumbs up are still needed if you want those peaks!

Anyway, here's the idea:
If you guys remember a while ago, I created a page for a story idea I had called "Eternal Dusk". However, I never actually got round to writing that story, and ended up scrapping the idea. The only thing is that I forgot to delete the page.
But now, I actually See More▼
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The_Astute_Potterhead
THAT SOUNDS AMAZING
on December 30, 2016
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on December 30, 2016
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I have 2 story ideas but I have no idea of I should write them or if anyone would actually be interested in reading them... Advice?
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Bookworm10
Yeah I understand. Keep writing bro!
on February 04
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Purinsesu_Sereniti
@Bookworm10 I've decided not to write any stories her because they never get noticed sooo yeah; I have them on Watt.pad tho
on February 04
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Bookworm10
Write both of them
on February 04
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Guest
Make a funny story!!
on December 28, 2016
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on December 28, 2016
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Maybe can someone please review what I have so far?
https://www.qfeast.com/story/NWK91O/Heroes-of-Holovor
Heroes of Holovor
Heroes of Holovor
This story takes place many years into the future, In a galaxy, the Cyberplex, where all planets have advanced technology. However, this story is only focused on one of the planets in this galaxy; Planet Vortice. But that's not the point. In the country of Holovor, a new school has been built, but with many advanced classes, Many teenagers from the ages of 13 to 18 had been sent to this school. Why? They must learn to defend themselves from Viridi, the evil sorceress. This school is the only place that is safe from her. The story focuses on 4 girls, 13 year old Mintra Timons, 15 year old Estela Purana, 14 year old Taro Cahiira and 16 year old Corrin Hadden. Together, they form a team that might possibly save their world.
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on November 28, 2016
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Any ideas for a new book? I need help because I'm stuck on what I should write about.
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Lady_Artemis
When in doubt, write FANFICTION!!!
on October 26, 2016
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on October 26, 2016
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Alice in Cyberland
Alice in Cyberland
Yes. Another Alice in Wonderland fanfic, but it's different. After a cyborg named Phoenix goes into Wonderland, she realizes how different this one is from the origonal. The queen and Alice are dead , with the prince gone. People are in a battle for control, and everything is... advanced. And she joins one group to get things back in order.
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on October 19, 2016
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I need a review on one of my most unnoticed stories on here, please!

https://www.qfeast.com/story/LLIw8b/Butterfly-Kisses-Zelink-Friendship
Butterfly Kisses [Zelink Friendship]
Butterfly Kisses [Zelink Friendship]
Some great things don't always go as planned; Sometimes, things happen. But Zelda refuses to let life spoil her day with Link. (Zelda, Link, Friendship. Prior to game)
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breann.west.5
Thankssssssss
on October 19, 2016
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
I allready read it. It's great.
on October 19, 2016
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on October 19, 2016
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any ideas? huge writers block rn
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on September 15, 2016
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Okay, I actually want to take a turn away from my regular stories, and work on something dark, and gory.
So come at me with ideas, people! Tell me what you've got, and I'll see what I can make
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tylnapp
Oh...I can come up with many gore filled stories....dark as well....At least I think I can....

What about a story about an affliction within the scenario world, where the afflicted gain something...regular scientists try to make a cure for said affliction...thinking it is a problem...when all reality, some of the afflicted started using their new found additions See More▼
on September 15, 2016
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on September 15, 2016
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https://www.qfeast.com/story/Mseinv/Lurking-Nightmares-The-Return Can I have some critique on this even though it's not yet finished and it may have a few spelling errors.
Lurking Nightmares: The Return
Lurking Nightmares: The Return
Remember the day those teens died and became the animatronics that vowed revenge? If so, they've been relocated to another place but this time they won't be on the stage no more. Those animatronics were locked away in storage decaying from missing parts and than there are the newer animatronics who are the best attractions for "Funtime City" it may seem fun but what's the story behind them that creates their forms. Are they also young teens who've suffered like Ellie and her friends? Find out in Lurking Nightmares: The Return.
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Unix1
@luckpup There is a first story that I have made before this one. It is completed and you may read it if you want.
on August 31, 2016
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luckpup
@LilGaster Your welcome. Reviewing it was my pleasure, I'll be sure to read any more chapters that come out.
on August 31, 2016
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Unix1
@luckpup Alright thanks. It's still a work in progress though.
on August 31, 2016
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luckpup
I think this is going pretty good.You asked for it to be critiqued, so make sure to keep your reader engaged, don't get too cliche, or confusing. I just think you should show more character, and scenario detail.
on August 31, 2016
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on August 31, 2016
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Need Critique on this bit.

Blackness poured itself onto the empty desert. Blood spilled from the young woman's injured head, dribbling onto the grains of sand below and staining them a crimson hue. She glanced over at the prince who treaded beside her. "M-Matthew..." She winced. "Can we rest here...?"
Prince Matthew sighed and shook his head. "We're in the middle of the desert, Bean. We'll freeze to death!....Bean?"
Breathing a sigh of exhaustion, she collapsed onto the sandy See More▼
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luckpup
I know I'm late, but this sounds great just make sure to keep your readers engaged, and don't get too cliche, or confusing.
on August 31, 2016
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on August 01, 2016
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Personal Story Ideas
Personal Story Ideas
Just a list of story ideas for me to look back on, it's my personal list written as a private story, so this begs the question: How tf are you reading this? ya hacker! (Well, maybe you're a part of the underground, so i guess you're excused... this time...)
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on August 01, 2016
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