The Story Writers' Circle

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on July 25
Hey all!
I'm open to ideas for a new story. I'm not exactly sure what genre I'd like to write it in, so any ideas are open at the moment.
However, I would like to say I AM NOT GOING TO WRITE ANYTHING INAPPROPRIATE!
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The_Half_Glaceon_Girl
You could write a romance where two people, of any gender, get stranded in a zombie appocolipse forest and have to help eachother to survive and eventually fall in love.
on July 23
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Everty
Fantasy. I like fantasy. You could write about siblings who grew up knowing that they were mermaids or something (instead of them finding out at 16 which is cliched)
on July 23
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on July 23
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Obliterate Nemesis: Enigma Arc
Obliterate Nemesis: Enigma Arc
In a future world that's slowly being torn apart by despair, there is very little hope left for those who haven't been brainwashed with the strong negative emotions. When students that haven't been taken over by despair are brought to a new school by the name of Bright Future Academy, they think they'll finally be safe. What they don't know, is their "bright future" at this school is nonexistant, and they've put themselves in the hands of the mastermind.
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on July 06
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The Silent Orchestra
The Silent Orchestra
It's been seven years since Alexandria has seen her best friend. Ever since, she's been searching, but with no avail. During her travels, she falls for a strange soldier, clad in red, black, and gold. There's something strange about this man; Alexandria is not sure if she can trust him...
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on June 08
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man this is cool sonic the hedgehog cool
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on April 09
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I hope y'all like them of y'all read them
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on April 06
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Undertale - A New Beginning - Part 3
Undertale - A New Beginning - Part 3
Hey guys in this story The undertale cast and I have left the underground and we're now living on the surface and have started our new lives and Toriel and I have a little something unexpected.
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on April 06
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Undertale - A New Beginning - Part 2
Undertale - A New Beginning - Part 2
Hey this is my second story to an ongoing series call Undertale A New Beginning. Please leave comments so I know if you guys like the series and if I should keep making more but even still I hope you guys enjoy.
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on April 06
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Undertale - A New Beginning
Undertale - A New Beginning
Hey guys this is my first story and it's somewhat a crossover from assassin's creed and the main character is my oc and he is an assassin furry and i hope i don't offend any undertale fans because i haven't played the game so don't leave hate comments and i hope you guys enjoy
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on April 06
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hey guys I wrote three stories already and I want to share them with everyone
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on April 06
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Hi there! I wrote a story and would be ecstatic if you guys told me what you thought of it!
https://www.qfeast.com/story/dowox3/The-monster?ref=sl
The monster
The monster
Siblings, Azai and Zara, venture to the mountain, where they are hunting the monster that has been attacking people.
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on April 05
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I write comics, and whenever I get to a good part, I always get writer's block and don't know how to move the story along without adding terrible jokes and pointless filler. Any ideas?
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Bookworm10
Well one thing you could do is take a break. It might be easier to think of ideas when you're not forcing yourself.
If you can, write down the basic frame of what you want to happen, which should make it a bit easier.
It's ok to change what's happening in the next panel or page if the characters are going or doing something different.
Lastly, to avoid the jokes See More▼
on April 05
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on April 05
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Ok, i have writers block on my story. I am COMPLETELY out of ideas.
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xXEmo_KingXx
Thanks. Ill try that.
on April 05
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Bookworm10
If you have writers block, I have two suggestions.
1. Just start writing a random scene with some of your characters
2. Get a random word generator, and write a paragraph about that word.
on April 05
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xXEmo_KingXx
on April 05
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on April 05
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I have 2 stories, both about a cursed night princess and 2 of her adventures. It has romance, fights, magic, etc. I'm currently making a story on her background, so... the character is named Lunar Aisha ( weird name right?), and she has a guy best friend who is part wolf ( name's Full Moon).

Lunar aisha is more than an ordinary girl, she's an angel from a different world,who is cursed with a moon spell. She has long black hair, black eyes, a present moon clip, an amulet, black See More▼
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on March 27
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Anyone can take this idea:

The story is about a man that was frozen in time. He was isolated inside a chamber that slows time down in it, while the rest of the world moves in its regular motion. He escapes the chamber and is now in the modern world. What he experienced was 5 minutes, while the world experienced 500 years. As the world and the rest of its people change, he did not. Will he change to fit in the modern day society, or will he refuse to change?
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on March 08
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so any thoughts as to how i could make this better would be great. I need ideas for events. Im good with characters, i just need events
https://www.qfeast.com/story/8LxRAM/Impure
Impure
Impure
Once, long ago, three factions ruled over the nation of Alma. The Kendred, Shedan, And Morphis, each with its own god. Under the fires of an ancient war, the Morphis died off, and their god disappeared. One thousand years later a dark curse has swept over the land, transforming Alma and her people. It is now up to Martin Dunshire and his friends, Leo Wallace and Linda Baroo, to free the land from a never ending nightmare. As the threat of war is on the doorstep, A dark truth comes to light.one that will forever change Alma. Can they do it before time runs out? (feel free to rate, add to favorites, or comment. All criticism is helpful)
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on March 03
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Ok so no one has read this and it's bothering me I stayed up half the night writing it
Please read it
https://www.qfeast.com/story/wTC1HV/Escape
Escape...
Escape...
My pain was growling at me trying desperately to escape. I smashed my fist against the wall again. And again, angry at what seemed mother to most but the pain was did not go unseen..
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
No reads... hmmm m not surprised really. I guess I'll just delete it...
on March 05
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
on March 03
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Also Mother is supposed to be nothing idk why that happened but I was really tored
on March 03
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on March 03
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Hey, I need some help with this story. For those who know Kpop or are just very fanfic minded, could you please help? I'm not really sure about how my writing is, and I would appreciate some critique.
https://www.qfeast.com/story/s75YPs/A-Difference-in-Genders-A-BTS-Story
A Difference in Genders (A BTS Story)
A Difference in Genders (A BTS Story)
This is my first BTS fic ever, so please comment what you think about it, I'd love feedback so I can improve! ^^
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on February 04
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A brand new story I wrote where Vocaloid songs are given a story twist.
Only songs with stories and secrets hidden within the lyrics will make this story, however.
https://www.qfeast.com/story/FrBX0P/Vocaloid-Songs-as-Stories
Vocaloid Songs as Stories
Vocaloid Songs as Stories
I've done some digging into Vocaloid songs I really adore, and I've found that some songs have hidden stories behind them. As such, I've managed to construct these songs into stories that convey the song's meaning as best as I could. If you feel there's a song that should be added in this story, feel free to request it, and I will try my best.
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on January 27
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Right...
You know that feeling when you've got a good story idea but you can't think of a name for it?
Yeah, I'm stuck in that feeling right now! HELP!
If you think you can help, just reply to this, and I'll PM you the idea.
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MooseInATrenchCoat
I'd likie to help as well, If you still needed it.
on April 05
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Bookworm10
I would love to help!
on February 04
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Anime_Lover2234
I'd like to help!
on January 19
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on January 19
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