Undertale - A New Beginning - Part 2

Undertale - A New Beginning - Part 2

Hey this is my second story to an ongoing series call Undertale A New Beginning. Please leave comments so I know if you guys like the series and if I should keep making more but even still I hope you guys enjoy.

published on April 04, 201750 reads 11 readers 8 not completed
Chapter 1.

Waterfall

I keep walking with Toriel through the snow and we eventually feel the air get warmer and we start to hear water flowing. "Water, there's water nearby." I said. "Then we're close to the waterfall, and we're not alone." Toriel said. Then All of a sudden I See a blue, glowing spear, fly towards me and Toriel. "Look out!" I yelled and jumped in front of Toriel and caught the spear. The spear disappears and I say "Run.".
Me and Toriel start running as more Spears are being thrown at us, and as we run I see where the spears are coming from and I take a knife I have on my belt and throw it at the attacker but I just miss and it makes the attacker stop for a second so Toriel and I can escape into some tall grass. Toriel and I stop running as soon as we get into the tall grass. "Toriel, stay low." I said.
Toriel and I crouch in the tall grass and wait for the attacker to walk by then we stand up and I ask "Are you alright Toriel?". "I'm fine, but what about you?" Toriel asks. "Yeah, but we need to go before whatever that was comes back". Toriel nods and we continue walking. After walking through seemingly endless caverns we reach a entrance to a tunnel and hear someone running right at us.
"Toriel, stand back." I said and pulled sword hilt from my belt and pressed the button and the blade springs out to full length. After a few seconds The attacker comes charging into the light and right at me with a spear and I tighten my grip on my sword and deflect the attack and grab the attacker and pick them up and fling them over me and into the wall.
The attacker is stunned by the counter and doesn't move as I step closer and ask "Who are you?". "I-I am Undyne, head of the royal guard, who are you?" Undyne asks".
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MusicKat
I love Undertale so this is great! :3
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AmazeStark
thank you
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MaylatheGalacticWolf
Awesome story
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AmazeStark
what was it
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AmazeStark
did you get the reference
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AmazeStark
thank you
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MaylatheGalacticWolf
Your welcome
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