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Hopeless ?
A tale of a knight seeking to escape from the trials his life and find something better.
on March 26, 2015
Dragon Princess
This story is about four young friends that discover they have a whole different identity: they are dragons. I will add more to this over time. Thanks for reading! Enjoy!
on February 23, 2015
Letters to Gracie
When Gracie's best friend Felicity, moves away Gracie is crushed. They found a solution, letters! In this story emotions run high and lots of climaxes!
on February 18, 2015
The ramblings of a mad man
Welcome to my twisted mind people I hope you enjoy insanity for that's all you will find or will you find something more? Who knows! I don't that's for sure.
on December 07, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/XVWrf5/Short-Stories
These are some short stories I put together. Please, PLEASE read them, and give some critique!
These are some short stories I put together. Please, PLEASE read them, and give some critique!
Short Stories
I've decidied to put together a collection of short stories, so here it is! Read it, and I hope you enjoy!
on November 28, 2014
Colored Crayons With Tortillas
This is a story about EGGS ARE LIQUID CHICKENS. Kangaroo pony ketchup pants Rhinos with stone ghostly alarm clocks.
on November 23, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/3609/Voldemort-s-Granddaughter
Please review my story I would like to hear what you guys think of it.
Please review my story I would like to hear what you guys think of it.
Voldemort`s Granddaughter
Megan thought her life couldn't get any worse, until a mysterious figure appears at her door…
on November 16, 2014
Keildore, a strictly controlled city where passing information to another is no where near safe. Every move and breath you take someone is watching you. The lively city at day is not the same at night, patrols roam the streets as people stay inside not daring to look outside. Lysia faces the dangers of Keildore as the most powerful family in the country watches her more closely than the rest.
http://www.qfeast.com/story/ZyUOlP/Lie-Down-With-Me
http://www.qfeast.com/story/ZyUOlP/Lie-Down-With-Me
Lie Down With Me
Keildore, a strictly controlled city where passing information to another is no where near safe. Every move and breath you take someone is watching you. The lively city at day is not the same at night, patrols roam the streets as people stay inside not daring to look outside. Lysia faces the dangers of Keildore as the most powerful family in the country watches her more closely than the rest.
on August 23, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/D9jFQp/I-Can-t
This was my first story on qfeast. Opinions?
This was my first story on qfeast. Opinions?
I Can't
Lucy's best friend has fallen in love with her. He makes her choose. Choose between being his girlfriend or not being his friend at all.
on August 17, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/hUG3Yz/My-Minecraft-Life please read and no hate!
My Minecraft Life
This is my Minecraft moments from my first day to current please no hate
on August 06, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/3601/Rose-s-Early-Years-A-Hogwarts Roses Early Years at Hogwarts
It's not my best but I need reviews!
It's not my best but I need reviews!
Rose's Early Years A Hogwarts
What happened after Rose arrived at Hogwarts? Read to find out about Rose Weasley's adventures!
on July 13, 2014
Thanks in advance! http://www.qfeast.com/story/ZfyC70/Imaginaries
Imaginaries
"We protect. We defend. We fight. Why? To be remembered."
Captain Malton was Dreamed only twelve years ago, but has excelled in fighting the Nightmares - creatures of fear that threaten Second Earth. But after a deadly attack on the front lines, the Captain's return to the Dreamers may reveal an unseen force, just waiting to infiltrate the City...
Very intense, thrilling, edge-of-your-seat page-turner. This is amazing writing!!! A very creative idea that brings a new perspective to light, something unlike anything ive ever read. I hope to see more soon!
on August 07, 2014
on July 01, 2014
Please check out my story at http://www.qfeast.com/story/YWprPl/A-Week-In-the-Life
Thanks!! :)
Thanks!! :)
A Week In the Life
Dive into a normal week for six eighth graders. Actually, I lied. Nothing about this week is normal, because Friday is the 8th grade dance! Peek into the perspectives of Avery, Emma, Lexi, Aaron, Cliff, and Ian! Updates every day!
on July 01, 2014
I wrote this story after reading the end of Allegiant. Allegiant made me cry at the end, which then hit me to write an alternative to it so I'd feel better about it. The main changes are in the 2nd chapter in this:
http://www.qfeast.com/story/2fuPcs/My-Alternative-Ending-to-Allegiant
http://www.qfeast.com/story/2fuPcs/My-Alternative-Ending-to-Allegiant
My Alternative Ending to Allegiant
As we all know, Veronica Roth gave us a rather tragic ending for Allegiant, which left millions of initiates heart-broken. But I took it into my own hands to start writing an alternate ending to it. So yeah, here it is.
It made me happy too when I wrote it.
Now whenever I think Allegiant, I think of this ending. UP YOURS VERONICA ROTH!
Now whenever I think Allegiant, I think of this ending. UP YOURS VERONICA ROTH!
on July 01, 2014
on June 29, 2014
I made this when I was in 5th grade.... XD Please give a honest opinion.
http://www.qfeast.com/story/qx0AOo/2-BFF
http://www.qfeast.com/story/qx0AOo/2-BFF
Being honest, it was slightly confusing. With all the speech and characters not being described too well, it was hard for me to follow. Other than that, it was a great story, with a great story line!
on June 14, 2014
on June 10, 2014
"Harry shut it..."
When characters from all different books step through a portal, they all come into one world: Hogwarts.
on June 10, 2014
Rise of the Paragon Parabolic
My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal
on June 03, 2014
Fear of the End
Ik' than kon lok' (a character I made up) faces the end of his draconian race as he knows it. The humans of the town of Farwind believe that the draconians are evil and have been stealing from their town, and have decided that they are done with all of their half dragon neighbors and wish to slaughter all of them.
on June 03, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/4135/The-war-of-life I am not sure if my story is that good and need some advice on it
The war of life
Zero a warrior of Knightingale banished from his home he must slay the Dragon king Valunce in order to be given his home and here are his adventures along the way.
on June 01, 2014