I Can't

I Can't

Lucy's best friend has fallen in love with her. He makes her choose. Choose between being his girlfriend or not being his friend at all.

published on August 08, 2014108 reads 44 readers 32 completed
Chapter 1.

Admitting the Truth

Drops of water landed on Lucy's face as Dylan jumped into the freezing lake water. "Hey!" She exclaimed. "You could've gotten my book wet!" Lucy set her book down on the grass. "How do you read anyway?" "It's the middle of the night!" Dylan pointed out. "Whatever.." Lucy mumbled. "Come on in! The water's great!" Her best friend exclaimed "Fine! What have I got to lose?" She ran up to the edge of the water, feeling it with her bare toes. The cold water splashed onto her feet just before she dove into the dark liquid.

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An hour passed before Dylan held Lucy's head in his hands. "Lucy, I have to tell you something." He said "Sure, anything!" Lucy replied. "I love you." "Aww, that's sweet! I love you too!" She said "No, Lucy!" Dylan yelled. "I really, really love you." Lucy just sat there, astonished. She couldn't speak. All she could feel was the grass between her fingers and Dylan's hands on the sides of her head. "I...I..." She stammered. Dylan didn't give her a chance to speak. He slowly moved his mouth towards hers. Soon they were kissing. Full on kissing. This wasn't what Lucy wanted. She didn't have a boyfriend, but she didn't want her best friend to be her boyfriend! He was like her brother. She didn't move through the whole kiss because she was too surprised. How did this happen? How? Dylan was French kissing her. Dylan. Of all people.

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The two sixteen year old's just sat there until they finally pulled away from each other. They just sat there, until Lucy ran. Ran far from there.
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Ravenclaw3243
write more, earthling
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kittenswag
Hehe, I'm writing one right now, it might take a while because it's going to be longer than this one.
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Ravenclaw3243
Yayayaya
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MockingjayDistrict
Awesome!
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kittenswag
Thank you!!
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DiamondTheHedgehog
omg!! Please comtinue it becuse sequels don't get attention
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kittenswag
Ok :D I'll either finish it today or tomorrow :D
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kittenswag
I already am :D
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on August 09, 2014
DiamondTheHedgehog
Just make a swquel theb
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kittenswag
i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it
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JeweledOwl812
COOLZ!
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kittenswag
Thanks :D
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BlueTurkey
Cliff hanger!! OAO
Please add more and not let this be a story with a cliff hanger and they never continued.
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kittenswag
i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it
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on August 09, 2014
kittenswag
Should I continue it onto that story or make a part 2 story?
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kittenswag
oh... i just tried again and its still not working :( @JeweledOwl812
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JeweledOwl812
I usually works for me...:(
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kittenswag
but it wasnt letting me :( @JeweledOwl812
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JeweledOwl812
@kittenswag go to the last thingy and you can change it back to uncompleted
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kittenswag
i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it @JeweledOwl812
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kittenswag
Okay :) @JeweledOwl812
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JeweledOwl812
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE
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getsherlock
continue the story, dont let it end here
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kittenswag
i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it
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getsherlock
Yay :D
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on August 09, 2014
kittenswag
okay :D
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getsherlock
Sequel sequel sequel (chanting)
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kittenswag
Let me know if I should write more stories!
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BasicCactus
FIRST READER LIKA BOSS X3 This is REALLY amazing :D
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kittenswag
Fewf! I'm glad it's okay :) LIKE A BOSSS
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BasicCactus
:P lol
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