Pack

Pack

I give credit to Erin Hunter for inspiring me to write this story. It is similar to the Warriors series. I wrote it when I was younger, so it isn't as good as my others.

published on November 20, 201345 reads 22 readers 14 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Prologue

There is four packs in the forest, my pack, Lifepack, Stormpack, Deathpack, and Waterpack. We border Waterpack and Darkpack. The packs Waterpack and Stormpack border each other. As well as Darkpack and Stormpack. Among the four packs, each one perfers a certain territory. For example, Stormpack likes the open moorland and Darkpack likes the pine forest. Waterpack likes the territory that is beside the river, and we like the woodland territories.
Pack rivalries have gone on for generations, ever since the great leaders,  Seastar, Stormstar, Darkstar, and Lightingstar started up the four packs.
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Two words Continue it!!!!!!!!
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Mcdazzle2000
Lol thanks, but I don't think that I will. It was just something that I wrote when I was younger. Anyway, the author wrote a series based around a similar idea after I wrote this, so I definitely don't think I'm going to write any more in it. Sorry. :/
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
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on January 31, 2017
Mcdazzle2000
Yea... sometimes stuff like that just happens :P
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on January 30, 2017
WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
It's ok. When I was writing Killer on a heart beat the idea came from Chara and her backstory but then I realised that everyone knew her and someone asked if I got the idea from 'Angels book' so since I never really finished it beacuse of that but the original name was killer with a heart. I was super excited about it toO ? Oh well
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 25, 2017
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on December 14, 2016
Darky_the_Wolf_Dog
This is awesome so far!
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Darky_the_Wolf_Dog
You welcome! ;)
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Mcdazzle2000
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on November 24, 2015
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on November 23, 2015
Mcdazzle2000
Thanks. I doubt I'll be adding more to it though. Im focusing purely on Dragon Princess right now. :) I want to get it published.
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on November 23, 2015
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on November 10, 2015
Mcdazzle2000
aw thx!!!!!
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on June 06, 2014
gonebitches
Your a good writer
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on June 06, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
It is not my best piece.
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on January 03, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
I wrote this a long time ago, when I was 11, so I accept your rating.
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on January 03, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
Can you tell me why you rate it this?
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on November 26, 2013