Pack

Pack

I give credit to Erin Hunter for inspiring me to write this story. It is similar to the Warriors series. I wrote it when I was younger, so it isn't as good as my others.

published on November 20, 201350 reads 23 readers 14 not completed
Chapter 1.

List of Cats in Clans

LightingPack
Leader: Crystalstar
Deputy: Whitebramble
Fighting dogs:
Runningflower
Morningblossom
Spottedpool
Shrewpelt
Stonepaw
Oaktail
Dewclaw

Queens (she-dogs nursing pups):
Dawnheart ( Blackpup, Nightpup)
Brightfur (Ashpup, Patchpup)
Goldenheart (Willowpup)
Apprentinces (pups six moons and older, training to be fighting dogs)
Flowerlight
Redlight
Stormlight
Graylight
Silverlight
Pups
Patchpup
Blackpup
Nightpup
Willowpup
Ashpup
Elders:
Dewclaw
Mornnigblossom
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Two words Continue it!!!!!!!!
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Mcdazzle2000
Lol thanks, but I don't think that I will. It was just something that I wrote when I was younger. Anyway, the author wrote a series based around a similar idea after I wrote this, so I definitely don't think I'm going to write any more in it. Sorry. :/
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
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on January 31
Mcdazzle2000
Yea... sometimes stuff like that just happens
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on January 30
WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
It's ok. When I was writing Killer on a heart beat the idea came from Chara and her backstory but then I realised that everyone knew her and someone asked if I got the idea from 'Angels book' so since I never really finished it beacuse of that but the original name was killer with a heart. I was super excited about it toO 😔 Oh well
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on January 26
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on December 14, 2016
Darky_the_Wolf_Dog
This is awesome so far!
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Darky_the_Wolf_Dog
You welcome!
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Mcdazzle2000
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on November 24, 2015
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on November 23, 2015
Mcdazzle2000
Thanks. I doubt I'll be adding more to it though. Im focusing purely on Dragon Princess right now. I want to get it published.
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on November 23, 2015
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on November 10, 2015
Mcdazzle2000
aw thx!!!!!
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on June 06, 2014
gonebitches
Your a good writer
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on June 06, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
It is not my best piece.
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on January 03, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
I wrote this a long time ago, when I was 11, so I accept your rating.
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on January 03, 2014
Mcdazzle2000
Can you tell me why you rate it this?
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on November 26, 2013