Under the moonlight

Under the moonlight

Disclaimer: If this story seems like Twilight(as some people said it has before) then that was unintentional. Anyways with that said I hope you enjoy, please do not copy my idea as I have put in a lot of effort for this. If there is a lack of updates its usually because 1. I am busy, I do have a life of my own to deal with or 2. I have writers block or 3. I am away or have no wifi/internet access.

published on May 19, 2014113 reads 27 readers 49 not completed
Chapter 1.
Prolouge

Prolouge

Don't have a photo yet so enjoy this random one.

120 years..thats how much time has passed since that day, what day you may ask? Well..It started on the 15 of January, 2000..A few days after my birthday. I remember it so clearly as it seems like only yesterday even though time has flown by. It was a average day and my friend, (ok fine, maybe more then a friend)Jaden and I were taking a walk in the local park. Jaden suddenly stopped and said he needed to go, he seemed worried and ran off but, something was different.His skin seemed paler then normal..I had just shrugged it off and headed home.

My family's not the richest around but we manage to get on. Our house(if you would call it that) is kinda a old one, its two stories but the second floor is..well a mess and quite small. My bedroom is up there since there wasn't enough room on the first floor.For some reason we don't have any garlic or mirrors! Well..I have a mirror in my room but thats like it.Dawn said it was because dad was allergic.

My mother Dawn has long dark brown hair that looked black and blue eyes..although I could of sworn they looked a bit silverish.Vladimir, my father has shadowy black hair  and dark brown eyes.I always thought they had tints of red though..My family was kinda odd in a way as we all had sharper teeth then normally.

Dad was almost always out or asleep.He slept during the day and at night when he woke up he would have black triangles under his eyes, as if he doesnt get enough sleep already! At night he always went for LOOOOONG walks and when he came back the triangles would always disappear. One time I saw a bit of blood on his face and when I asked about it he said he was shaving and cut himself with the razor.Its strange because he doesn't even have a beard but I just ignored it.

Mum was the one I could always talk to most of the time, though whenever it was a full moon she just disappeared but she would always return the next day.She has like the best hearing and smell that i have ever seen! One time we went shopping and I found a dog whistle and ran up to mum and showed it to her as well as demonstrating it.She cringed as if in pain and growled at me telling me to put it back.

Anyways back to the day. I had felt exhausted and decided to take a good long rest...when I got a text from Jaden.The text said to meet him at the park even though we were just there.I went there anyway and saw him in the distance.He looked different, he had black triangles under his eyes just like how dad would and sharper teeth as well as..blood red eyes. My eyes widened and I wondered if that was really him. I started to back off before breaking into a run hoping he didn't see me.Too late..

Jaden smiled showing two sharp fangs and..flew?..well whatever it was he was so fast! Next thing I know he was infront of me so I had to skid to a halt. I looked at him slightly terrified."Going ssssomewhere Aria" he said hissing.I looked at him and picked up a rock and threw it at him..which he dodged. "Get away from me! Whatever you are..and what did you do with my friend?!" I yelled backing away slightly." But I am your friend.And what I am issss for me to know and you to find out." He hissed again before disappearing in a black aura.I scanned around searching for him but saw nothing.I felt a sharp pain in my neck and the next thing I saw was the back of my eyelids.
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ThatRandomGirl33
Awesome story
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on December 11, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Love the update!
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on October 03, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I LOVE IT!!
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Cristallite
That may be the last chapter published on here for two weeks and a half. See the update on my wall to know why.
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Cristallite
^.^
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on September 19, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
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on September 19, 2014
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on September 19, 2014
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on September 18, 2014
Cristallite
Yeah I kinda have writers block ATM,
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on July 03, 2014
celtickittkatt
You should really finish this
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on July 03, 2014
JeweledOwl812
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on July 01, 2014
Cristallite
^.^
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on June 24, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
OMG I love the authors note! I'm glad you mentioned me and Crystal. I can't wait to read The Celestial Born!!!
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on June 23, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Awww! Thanks, the new story sounds awesome
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on June 23, 2014
Cristallite
@Crystal thanks
@MJ district ^.^ and np
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on May 31, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Yay you wrote more!!!!!! This is really good, thanks for including Gwen!
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on May 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
awesome!!!
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on May 31, 2014
Cristallite
Working on it
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on May 27, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
:0 please write more!
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on May 27, 2014
Cristallite
I was bored so i did that, and i'm working on it
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on May 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
LOL I like the thing at the end! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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on May 25, 2014
Cristallite
I just put it there randomly :3
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on May 24, 2014
Frostgoddess
XD I went through the note! :P
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on May 24, 2014
Cristallite
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on May 24, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
OMG this is amazing
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on May 24, 2014
Cristallite
I try :D
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on May 24, 2014
BobDaCool
Amazing so far!
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on May 24, 2014
Cristallite
Its fine
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on May 24, 2014
Cristallite
I have not been working on it much to be truthful..:( I will work on it today..hopefully, irl I have my life to deal with..
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on May 24, 2014
BobDaCool
Awesome!
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on May 23, 2014
Cristallite
You will see :3
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on May 23, 2014
Cristallite
Character form in chapter one
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on May 23, 2014
Cristallite
Oh sorry for that for having the mom named dawn I mean..just seemed to go and those are the normal names I use for Crimsons or aria parents..I don't mind and just p.m me the details
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on May 23, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I love it! I know you said you may or may not accept OC characters, but can I have an OC? I would normally chose the name Dawn, but that's the mom's name in the story.
*thinking*
*STILL thinking*
Gwen maybe?
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on May 23, 2014
Cristallite
^.^
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on May 22, 2014
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