The Land of Hedoka

The Land of Hedoka

In the land of Hedoka, mermaids, elf's, faeries, pixie, witches, warlocks, spirit animals, deamons and Kemi ( people with elemental powers) roam free. That is until a dark force comes over and create chaos over the land. It's up to Isabelle light and her friends and family of the Kemi to form alliance and destroy the evil forces lurking in the shadows! A story that was made by my otaku friend who wanted me to post it on q feast!

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Chapter 2.

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

As I walk down the cobble stone path, towards the Academy, I make some last minute studies. Sadly, I didn't have much time as we entered the school grounds. For the first time I looked up from my textbook and saw the familiar iron black fencing covered with ivy and the enormous school before me. It's stone walls shone like gold in the morning sun. Well, it was called the Golden Hedoka Academy for a reason. “Nervous?” asked Matty as he put his arm around me. “Well, I do have the smartest girl at the school as a sister and as a tutor so I should be fine... right?” I replied. “You'll be ok” he said has he put his arms behind his head. “You've been preparing for this exam for what now, five or six years? You'll be fine.” I pray that I will be.

I walk in to class and see my best friends of all time, Zoey,Nicole,Christina, Shannon and Jamie. I sit in the middle of the five and muffle a small “Hey good morning!” to all of them. I look over at Zoey's tanned skin and she's basically beaming with light. “I'm soooooooo exited!” she says, trying to cheer everyone up but with no prevail. “Guys” Shannon said nervously “Guy I'm gonna fail” I looked over at Shannon with sympathy in my eyes. Her fair skin is not very pale and she's playing with the lace on her turquoise dress and her long wavy dirty blond hair. In her grey eyes, a small tear starts to take form. “Aww it's ok Shan. You're not gonna fail. You've been studying so hard!” said Nicole comforting her. “Guys” whispered Christina “Mrs. Dallian is here!” “Hello children. As you know today it's the start of a very long exam.” she said with horrible smile that creeped upon her face. “So, let's get to it and do the roll call. Samantha Argo?” “Here” “Isabel Light?” “Here” I responded lazly. “Shannon Bell?” “Here!” “Jamie Cor?” “Here” “Nicole Ironfist?” “Here!” “Abbigail Von Grimm” “It's Abby thank you very much” she replied as she looked at her persinal small mirror and applied some lipstick. “Very well Abby. On to the next name... Christina Snow?” “Here!” and as she called out to the other names I look out the window  dreading for the test to come.

I looked down at the first of the many tests on my desk.

1. What are the 9 Main Kingdoms and what race occupies that kingdom?
Answer: Forelsra-Fairies, Elvenhem-Elves, Atlantis-Mer folk, Dorami-Witches and Warlocks, Chamazel-Pixies, Shadow Land-Demons, Perlor-Spirit Animals, Eternal Kingdom-Kemi and Kem, Athenel-Giants.
2. Explain how a Kemi or a Kem uses his/her power.
Answer: When a Kemi/Kem are of age then he/she will fight for an element that he/she wants. When he/she gets the element, they will be able to unlock the power inside them called 'Elemental energy'. When they learn to control that power, they can do several new techniques that will determinate what carrier they get in the future.

Wow.... just 2 questions? Why was I even scared? I'm getting my elemental powers! This should be fun. As I got up to hand in my test, I felt a sharp pain in my nose and I saw that there was blood. Blood. I looked up and saw the woman. The woman with the knife and she said “You killed her!” and the world went dark and fuzzy as I fell to the floor.
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Drago101
Hope you make a third chapter!!!
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MagentaHusky
hi this is Caelyn, the author of land of Hadoka I want to say THANK YOU!!!
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