The Dark Desent

The Dark Desent

This Is A Story That I've Been Writing For Writing In School. It's Based Off Of An Internet Game Called Amnesia: The Dark Desent.

published on October 28, 201254 reads 31 readers 12 not completed
Chapter 1.

Our Story Begins

Might I Say That This Is Dedicated To My Friends Jaden And Preston At School
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I Looked Around The Room, Nothing Seemed Unusual But Then Something Came At Us! The Horrified Look On Our Faces Was To Much To Bear! We Ran As Fast As We Possibly Could, But Then I Tripped.


                                                                                  3 Hours Earlier

Chris And Sophia Had Just Arrieved House, And We Were All In My Room Exept For Sophia Who Had Just Arrieved At The Door.  I Heard The Door Bell Ring And Walked Over To Answer It. When I Opened The Door I Saw Sophia. "Hi!" Sophia Said Sweetly. "Hey. Chris Is Already In My Room." I Told Her. "Lets Go." She Said As We Began Down The Hall And Into My Room Inwhich Chris Was Waiting. "Hey Sophia!" Chris Said Loudly. "So This Is The Game?" Sopia Asked. "Yep. I Never Really Turned It On Though." I Said. "Lets Get Started Then." Chris Said With Confidence.
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Lara_Laufeyson
cool! Amnesia the dark descent!
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on February 03, 2013
Lance
graeT!
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on December 07, 2012
SnowThaProduct
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on December 04, 2012
Veronica
Whoa.....hey you should check out the stories on youngwriterssociety.com and missliterati.com those are writing websites with thousands of people you can get story advice from.
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on November 26, 2012
youfunnyz
xD
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on November 24, 2012
Megan3636
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on November 23, 2012
youfunnyz
you need to make more !!!!!!!!!!! xD
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on November 23, 2012
Teamcato
hey every one add it on you favs!
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on November 22, 2012
Teamcato
cool story!
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on November 22, 2012
Runaway
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on November 18, 2012
Megan63
so cool you mean clove!!!!
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on November 08, 2012
Clove
This is cool!
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on October 30, 2012