Chosen

Chosen

Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.

published on May 04, 2014577 reads 63 readers 114 completed
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Chapter 3.
I choose...

I choose...

DAWN'S POV

I almost didn't sleep the night before I was chosen.
I, being an only child, was guaranteed to be able to control an element. I probably would never see my family. Ever. Even after the chosen ones, including me, practiced and all that stuff, I still haven't gotten my mind off that. At practice I could NEVER concentrate. There was this guy next to me that was horrible in every single element. I'm really confident that I'm going to get picked. After all the exhausting practice, the Elementor of Water said he had decided. "I choose..." He lingered on the word "choose." Melody Shire." He said. A girl I have never seen in my life stepped up next to him. I held my breath. Next, It was Earth's turn to choose. He chose a young kid of about 11 years old. I was surprised. Wind and Fire went on too. Then it was Water's turn. "I pick... Dawn Moonstone." His words echoed in my mind.  

AMETHYST'S POV

Water had called all twenty. Earth had called all twenty. It was Fire's turn. "The fore Elementor hesitated. He scratched his chin and spoke. "My final choice is Amethyst Brite!" I gaped. Everyone heartlessly clapped and looked at me as I trudged forward. I stood behind the Elementor. I was relieved and happy at that moment that I almost forgot about my brother. "Airion!" I thought. My brother looked equally as worried. He bit his lip. The wind Elementor sighed. "Airion Brite. I choose Airion Brite." I almost started jumping up and down in excitement. I looked over to the Water section. A girl smiled at me. I think she was Dawn Moonstone.

AIRION'S POV

I was scared for a moment. I breathed out a sigh of relief. My sister smiled at me. I smiled back. The Elementor stared at me from now and then, as if he where regretting his decision. Once the Elementors where finished examining their choices, giant gates closed in, separating the chosen ones from the others. I wasn't the most confident, being picked last and all, but I had bragging rights, didn't I? I scratched my head and walked up to a random girl. "So..." I said. She walked away before I could even finish my sentence. I was to happy to even CARE! I would see my sister. I would live.
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Celia_Bowen
Is anyone else reminded of Divergent?
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CrystalDiamond2323
I wrote this before I knew divergent existed
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Celia_Bowen
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on September 29, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
not anymmore. its marked as completed
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on September 28, 2014
Celia_Bowen
You know you can actually edit what's alredy there, right?
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on September 28, 2014
Celia_Bowen
Cool
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on September 28, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
thanks! i'm gonna make an edited version that's longer and has no pov switches and is less cheesy
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on September 28, 2014
Celia_Bowen
Wow. So basically you came up with a storyline as good as one that millions of people have read, that's really amazing. Great job! All the switching POVs are kind of confusing
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CrystalDiamond2323
-CHOSEN-
remembering Chosen with 72 readers, but only 20 chapters. Released's first chapter is in!

@Aliyss @Animefan224 @BlueWatermelon @BobDaCool @Coolcass22 @Creator3000 @Crimsonthehedgehog @Me1234 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict @SC_Q.13 @The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
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BobDaCool
yay!who thumbed this down btw
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The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
Awesome story! Though you might want to add some paragraph breaks in the first chapter ;)
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CrystalDiamond2323
:3 thanks and yea
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SC_Q.13
Love this story!
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SC_Q.13
Reply to comments here. You can even reply to replies, but it will look weird. Qfeasters have to get used to it.
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CrystalDiamond2323
Ok then...
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on July 12, 2014
SC_Q.13
sorry. recording this
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on July 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
What? I'm confused
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on July 12, 2014
SC_Q.13
see?
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on July 12, 2014
SC_Q.13
Like this
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Coolcass22
I Loved the Whole Thing, its so fascinating and like a proper book. I hope you become an author when you become older because I would surely read your books
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CrystalDiamond2323
Aww!! Thanks
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BobDaCool
Awesome
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on June 24, 2014
Animefan224
I really like this! This is pretty much exactly what I want in a book!
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CrystalDiamond2323
Thanks :D
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JeweledOwl812
Super cool! It was awese from the beginning!
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JeweledOwl812
*awesome
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CrystalDiamond2323
Thanks! :)
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CrystalDiamond2323
:D I hope you enjoyed it
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on June 08, 2014
BobDaCool
Awesome!
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on June 04, 2014
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on May 31, 2014
Cristallite
I must say, that you had a amazing beginning makingdreaders(like me) want to read more, the chapters between were full of actions si readers didnt get bored. The chapters were quite long (which I like) and you also had a amazing finish
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Wolfleader117
My first ones are about my roleplay characters/my friends' characters, biographies, last known locations, that sort of thing. Then after I'm done with all that, I will be writing the roleplay out (Some character's names were forgotten, so I had to create new names for the forgotten ones, lol)
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on May 26, 2014
SC_Q.13
yay Magic is there!!! :D
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on May 26, 2014
BlueWatermelon
amazing finish!
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on May 24, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
Coolcass22
Honestly crystal, these are amazing!
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on May 22, 2014
Coolcass22
Wow o_o Take me a couple of days to read then x
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on May 22, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
20 it think
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on May 21, 2014
Coolcass22
How Many Chapters Is There Crystal? x
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on May 21, 2014
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on May 21, 2014
Coolcass22
Amazin' x
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on May 21, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
:D anytime
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on May 20, 2014
Cristallite
^_^ Np
I'm just grateful that you added me in it etc
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on May 20, 2014
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Cristallite
Nah its fine
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on May 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Srry, just that sequels don't really get as much attention as the actual story
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on May 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
No sequel
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on May 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE.A.SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CrystalDiamond2323
SEQUEL TIME XD XD XD
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CrystalDiamond2323
Sometimes i did want to make a sequel, but meh
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