Crimson the hedgehog

Crimson the hedgehog

I decided to make a story about my OCs Crimson and Dusk.I may add other peoples OCs if they allow me to which they may not.I am only a mild Sonic fan so sorry if things are not that good.Making the prologue then anything else.

published on April 01, 2014136 reads 25 readers 36 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Chapter 1: New friends

I walked back to where we were staying.As I neared my destination I saw a blue blur rushed past me. "Sonic?" I asked to myself.The blue blur mustn't of heard me since it kept going.I shrugged and walked back."Wheres Sonic?" i asked Amy who was busy doing something like acting for who knows what."He went out" Amy replied continuing doing whatever she was doing.I nodded saying thanks as I ran to my room.

It had black walls with a crimson red door and crimson red curtains that were currently covering the lake view glass doors that led to the balcony.It had a dark grey bed with a black and red zebra pattern pillow.It was a queen sized bed that had a black curtain around it, you know the ones you see in the princess movies and stuff.There was a grey dresser next to it with a lamp that had a black base and grey lamp shade. A bit further away next to the window was a red desk with a few papers and pencils on it as well as my white laptop that had a crimson red cover. I walked out onto the balcony  and leaned on the railings.

I heard a shout below me and saw Amy and a light blue hedgehog arguing.Sonic approached the two and I saw them both blush a bit but trying to hide it.Amy glared at the other hedgehog before looking back at Sonic.I could hear talking but I could not understand what they were saying.Sonic walked inside and Amy and the light blue hedgehog headed inside.

I wondered who it was and headed downstairs.As I reached the bottom I bumped into the light blue hedgehog from before.We both fell down but I got up first and helped her up."I don't think I have seen you around here before.Are you new?" The hedgehog asked me. "I could say the same about you" I replied." I'm Sapphire, one of the freedom fighters." Sapphire said looking at me. "Crimson" I replied ."Dinners ready!!" Silver shouted from downstairs."Shall we?" I asked grinning slightly and holding out my arm for Sapphire.She rolled her eyes but took my arm and we walked well more like marched down stairs.

I saw a hedgehog looking thing that had bat wings sitting next to Shadow.There also was a pink hedgehog and a fox that i had never seen before.I shook it off deciding to see them after and took a seat next to Sapphire who was next to Sonic with Amy on the other side.Everyone dove in eating dinner hastily which was spaghetti.When I looked up I could tell something was wrong.Sapphire and everyone else burst out laughing. "What?" I asked confused.The hedgehog/bat handed me a pocket mirror.I knew what everyone was laughing at.A piece of spaghetti was hanging just above my mouth like one of those mustaches that went across and then dropped down that sensei's  would have in the movies.I started laughing as well.After 10 seconds of laughing I ate the spaghetti.

Everyone started telling  stories and jokes and basically having a good time for the next minute and 50 seconds.I picked up my plate and rinsed it off before putting it back.I headed to the lounge and turned on the T.V to the news.
I looked at the screen and read the heading: BREAKING NEWS!! Dr Egg man strikes again at Chaotech inc.
"The only stolen thing was a new prototype of a strange machine that was one out of the only five in the world.Apparently it was one of the parts of this secret weapon. Where will he strike next?. Back to you Wendy." Mark said.
"Thank you  Mark. Well that certainly is a worry.Anyways here is Sunny with the weather." Wendy replied.

I turned the T.V and headed to the main room.After telling everyone about what the news had said, I sighed."We need to do something" Knuckles said."Well I am going to go to my room and have a early night.There is enough on my mind already" I interrupted before heading up stairs.I entered my room but then heard a knock on the door.I opened it revealing the pink hedgehog and the fox, Sapphire and the hedgehog/bat thing."Hi, I am Alexis,Alexis the hedgebat.Sapphire told us about you" Alexis said."I'm Gina, Sapphire made us come up here" The fox said."Rose" The other hedgehog said. "Is everything ok Crimson?" Sapphire asked with worry in her voice.

"Don't worry about it"I said.Sapphire shrugged and she and the other girls walked downstairs.I closed my door and lay on my bed staring into nothingness.It was probably late by the time I actually got some decent sleep.I couldn't stop thinking of Dusk and the day.

Sorry if its short and sorry if characters and ocs are not themselves.
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Jason_the_hedgehog
I love this no matter how old this is
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Cristallite
Working on the rewrite.
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Cristallite
Thank you, though.
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on January 15, 2018
Noescaping
Can't believe this was so long ago, god damn
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Cristallite
Lol, I know xD I'm planning a partial rewrite xP.
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Cristallite
Mm, the rewrite may or may not mention other OC's, and it's more of a series of short drabbles based on Crimson's life. It's not a full out chapter kind of story, unfortunately. In it, Crimson's a Demoness, though, as she's in Mobius, she takes the form of a hedgehog.
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on January 09, 2018
Noescaping
If you do my oc isn't a hedgebat anymore, she's a phantom and her brother is a Lucicriphilis. I hope you do rewrite it, I'd love to read it
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sapphirethehedgehog
It's been ages since you updated this, and left it with a cliffhanger?! Come onnnnn XD I want moreeeee
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Noescaping
Ikr
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sapphirethehedgehog
It's fine XD
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on April 01, 2017
Cristallite
Sorry. But uh, not really that into the Sonic fandom anymore. I mean, I may rewrite thid dtiry entirely. I wouldn't want to ruin the fandom though because I know next to nothing about it.
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on April 01, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
aaaAHHHHHHH Kay
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on March 31, 2017
Cristallite
This story is possibly on hiatus. Or being discontinued. Sorry.
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on March 31, 2017
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on March 31, 2017
Cristallite
Sorry Sapphire. There is this other story I am working on as well and I have been on Quoted more then Qfeast but I will try.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hiiiiii! :D
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on October 02, 2015
Cristallite
Hey Sapphire!
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on October 02, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
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on October 01, 2015
cassiesanime
my cousins name is saphire lol
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on October 01, 2015
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on May 31, 2015
Noescaping
Thanks. :D
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on May 29, 2014
Cristallite
Your welcome
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on May 26, 2014
Noescaping
Yay you added my cousin Julie. :D
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on May 25, 2014
Cristallite
Im working on it, also you mean a character for this story?
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on May 02, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more! How do I create a character?
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on May 02, 2014
Cristallite
thanks
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on April 28, 2014
Cristallite
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on April 18, 2014
Cristallite
I know how I want the story to end
But I dont know where to start
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on April 18, 2014
Noescaping
:D
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on April 18, 2014
Cristallite
Aww thanks
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on April 18, 2014
Noescaping
:P this is so good. 8D
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on April 18, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks
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on April 14, 2014
Cristallite
I try it's probably not the best story out there and chapters may not come out fast but yeah
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on April 06, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks.I am trying
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on April 06, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks
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on April 02, 2014
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on April 01, 2014
Stars_In_The_Sky
Nice story so far!
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on April 01, 2014