Zecora's New Potion

Zecora makes a new potion by the recipe of an old book she finds in a secret room of her house. It is suppose to make a clone of the drinker, and Rainbow Dash volunteers. She gets cloned, and everything is going well... or is it?

published on December 10, 201327 reads 19 readers 4 not completed
Zecora's New Potion
Chapter 1.
Zecora

Zecora

"Phew-whee!" cried Applejack as she wiped sweat off her muzzle, "Finally finished buckin' ma way through this whole apple plantation! Im as tired as a, well, horse!" She shoved the last crate of apples into place. Suddenly her ears twitched. "Big Mac, do you hear that?" she asked. "Yep," he answered. They had hear a soft droning noise, like an engine failing, and saw Rainbow Dash hurdling through the sky straight at Sweet Apple Acres. "Look out below!!!" she cried. "Oh no you don't," Applejack said, narrowing her eyes, "Big Mac and I just spent 3 days fixin' up the barn, and there ain't no way you gon ruin it all!" Too late. A crash, a boom, a rainbow explosion, and 3 days work goes down the drain. "Oh... you... Rainbow!" Applejack cried gritting her teeth, "What in the hay do you think you're doin'?" Rainbow got up and groggily flexed her wings. "Ahh, you know, just another trick gone wrong..." Applejack cut her off. "JUST another trick gone wrong! Dash! Oh you are gonna GET it!" Rainbow took an uneasy step back. "Uhh.. AJ? That look in your eyes... are you ok?" Applejack just growled. "Ok... I should really get going. I have to... do... stuff..." Rainbow flapped her wings and took off. "Oh come back here missy! Where do you think you're goin'! You are helpin' us fix the barn and you are helpin' us NOW. RD! I said come back!" Rainbow let out an uneasy laugh. "Ya sorry AJ no can do. Like i said i gotta do... well, stuff. See ya later!" and zoomed off. "Wait! Rainbow!" AJ called, real concern in her voice, "You're flying straight into..." CRASH! "...the Everfree Forest... Hey Big Mac can you lend me a hoof here?"
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Rainbow Dash shook her head, still dizzy from the impact of colliding with Zecora's hut. She saw AJ, no, 2 AJs standing over her. "Oh... Applejack, do you have a twin sister?" Applejack rolled her eyes. "Uhh, no. That's Big Mac." Dash shook her head and soon everything became clear. There was AJ, Big Mac, and... Suddenly the door flew open and Zecora came out. "Who goes there at the fade of light? You have made such a racket and caused me quite a fright." She looked at Rainbow Dash. "Oh no my dear are you okay? Please come inside, I'll let you stay.
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CrystalWings
Perfecto! I approve @animegirl301
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on December 07, 2014
animalgirl301
Cool! I could hear the character's voices in my head! :p Zecora' s rhymes were really good!
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on December 29, 2013
Obese_Doggo_boi
Omg! Cool!
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on December 10, 2013
Kisume
Yes i know i spelled zecora wrong in the title and introduction...:"> gonna try to fix dat
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on December 10, 2013