Ami and Rose

(Please don't think I'm babyish! I had to write a fairy-tale for school! LOL) This story is about two fairies named Ami and Rose. They go on a adventure... Will they save their village?

published on December 04, 201225 reads 16 readers 15 completed
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Ami and Rose
Chapter 2.

The Sidekick

“Hello little fairies!” a loud voice made Ami and Rose freeze.
             
They swung around and they trembled with fear. And they had a right to be trembling because the person who had just spoken was a wolf! But somehow, this wolf didn’t seem so mean! He came forward and gave them a welcoming smile.

“Ah, don’t be scared girls. I ain’t no nasty wicked wolf. I’m just here, looking for friends to invite over for tea.” The wolf said.
“Oh sorry, Mr but Ami and I have to be back home at 3 o’clock, we can’t be late, our mum’s would be worried about us.” Rose immediately replied.
“Oh, I see. Well, I guess I’ll go and ask someone else.” The wolf said with a sad look on his face.

Ami pulled Rose backwards so they can have a quick conversation.

“Rose, come on! Look at his expression! He looks so sad! How about we tell them that we can’t come for tea but we would happily join him for lunch?” Ami tried persuading Rose.
“Ami, listen, we can’t just go and have lunch with a complete stranger! He might be a bad guy!” Rose replied smartly.
“I know, but if he is a bad guy, we could always fly away. We’re fairies!”  Ami tried again.
“Fine. But if something happens to us I have the right to tell our mums that it was all your idea.” Rose gave in.
“OK, sure. Let’s go and tell him!” Ami happily said.
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Avienexjel
:-&X-(
>:)
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on July 17, 2014
Avienexjel
:-&
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on July 17, 2014
Avienexjel
NOOO...
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on July 17, 2014
Beauty784
Thanks.
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on March 26, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Ok, this isn't babyish. This is actually pretty good, but be aware hun, watch your grammar and also, you don't need to capitalize words that don't need to be capitalized, but other than that, very good and very well plotted out.
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on March 26, 2013
Beauty784
:)
Hehe thanks.
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on January 03, 2013
justinlilsis
I love it
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on January 03, 2013
Beauty784
Thank you!
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on December 08, 2012
mikycamry
kinda its fantastic
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on December 07, 2012
Beauty784
I used some layouts of other fairy-tales, you guys can see that, eh?
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on December 07, 2012
Beauty784
Hehe
Thanks.
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on December 07, 2012
Clove
This is cool!
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on December 06, 2012
Beauty784
Thanks.
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on December 05, 2012
SONAMY12345
Epiccc!!!!!! :D
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on December 05, 2012
Beauty784
Hope you guys enjoy it!
I'll post another story I wrote later!
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on December 04, 2012