Ami and Rose

Ami and Rose

(Please don't think I'm babyish! I had to write a fairy-tale for school! LOL) This story is about two fairies named Ami and Rose. They go on a adventure... Will they save their village?

published on December 04, 201227 reads 18 readers 15 completed
Chapter 1.

The First Adventure.

Once upon a time there were two beautiful fairies named Ami and Rose. They were best friends, as you probably could guess. But they were VERY different from each other, like the exact opposite. Ami loved adventure and was the daydream type whereas Rose liked to stay at home and she was a smart, straight-forward person. Something that they had in common was that both of them were considered as the two most beautiful fairies in that village!
           
Even though they have lived in their village, Fairy Flutter, for a long time, they never knew about an evil witch who, before they were born, came to Fairy Flutter and said that unless the two most beautiful fairies in that village came and work for her she would destroy the whole town! Everyone else knew about that scary day but they never had told Ami and Rose because they didn’t want them to go and work for the evil witch! They decided to let them figure it out by themselves, which might have been a good idea!
          
So one day Ami and Rose decided that they would like to go to the forest to pick some berries and flowers and surprisingly their mothers said yes! Everything was cleared out that Ami and Rose would come home at exactly 3 o’clock in the afternoon. And then they were off!

“You know Rose, have you ever imagined being the most powerful fairy in the whole village? Wouldn’t that be exciting?” Ami said, imagining what she had just asked.
“Ami, I don’t mean to pop your bubble but we all know that the most powerful fairy in the village is Chelsea!” Rose corrected.
“Yes, I know Rose but I said can you imagine?” Ami said in a dreamy voice.
“No not really. All I can imagine is Chelsea being the most powerful fairy in the village.” Rose ended the conversation.
             
Finally they arrived in the middle of the forest where the best flowers and berries grew. They were having a brilliant time but there was someone watching them with a sly look. Usually, it would be a spy, but no, it wasn’t a spy, it was a sidekick.
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Avienexjel
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on July 17, 2014
Avienexjel
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on July 17, 2014
Avienexjel
NOOO...
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on July 17, 2014
Beauty784
Thanks.
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on March 26, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Ok, this isn't babyish. This is actually pretty good, but be aware hun, watch your grammar and also, you don't need to capitalize words that don't need to be capitalized, but other than that, very good and very well plotted out.
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on March 26, 2013
Beauty784

Hehe thanks.
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on January 03, 2013
justinlilsis
I love it
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on January 03, 2013
Beauty784
Thank you!
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on December 08, 2012
mikycamry
kinda its fantastic
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on December 07, 2012
Beauty784
I used some layouts of other fairy-tales, you guys can see that, eh?
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on December 07, 2012
Beauty784
Hehe
Thanks.
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on December 07, 2012
Clove
This is cool!
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on December 06, 2012
Beauty784
Thanks.
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on December 05, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
Epiccc!!!!!!
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on December 05, 2012
Beauty784
Hope you guys enjoy it!
I'll post another story I wrote later!
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on December 04, 2012