The Red Snow

The Red Snow

Once there was a town in the middle of know where. In thi town on the sixth day of the sixth month for six weeks the fountain in town square would turn on. That was when it was believed the nightmare came out to hunt. Kami, is five when she first moves here and is bullied, but when she befriends Jake, they pull pranks on her enemy's. Ten years later though, it all goes bad when her previous bullies end up missing or found horribly disfigured. Read to learn more.

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Chapter 4.

Let's have some fun

CHAPTER 4 LETS HAVE SOME FUN.



They teenager soon awoke from his deep sleep. At first he thought he was having a twisted dream, but looking around he noticed that what he saw proved his dream reality.
There where flys and carcasses and blood draping the walls and floor. There was jars of eyes, and teeth. Skin sown together with bob wires. The room stanched of death. In a corner sat a fridge. Curiosity over took the boy and he opened it almost gagging at what he found.

The fridge was filled with jars of blood and a bowl of intestines sat in one corner. There was a heart on a plate that looked to have been sitting in there for a year or two... And when he closed the fridge almost gagging at the smell he saw something that was even more horrid. Along the walls where pictures apron pictures of not his victims. But someone else all entirely. Each photo was of Kami. Sweet innocent Kami, with her wavy blond hair and rosy cheeks. There where even photos of her sleeping, eating, raising her hand in class, laughing, frowning, walking into stores. Anything she would do was recorded here apron this wall.

" I see your finally awake."

The boy turned around to lay eyes on an unclean smiling figure. The Nightmare that the boy new would be his ender.
The figure took a few steps closer to the shaking teen.

" don't look scared I'm not going to kill you... Yet." It mumbled sniffing the boy.

" well then Robert lets get started."
" h-ho-how do you know my name?" Robert asked.

" oh Robert I know everything about you, so here's the game" it said pulling out a few knifes.
They looked to have just been sharpened by a wet stone. ( tool used to sharpen knives)

" what are you going to do with those?" Robert asked looking around for an exit. He saw I window, but this window was high up and small, proving he was in a basement.

" there's no way out, trust me." It said, giving it's deformed smile. This time though, the teeth where covered in blood.

Next thing Robert knew a knife was flying at him and imbedded itself into his shoulder. Robert screamed in pain clutching the knifes handle and kneeling to the ground.
The thing started tossing knifes in the air and catching it by the blade.
" I wouldn't pull it out if I where you..."

Robert ignored his warning and did so anyways. The pain was so umber table Robert began sweating and moaning from the pain.
Once the knife came out Robert screamed once more while the blood gushed out of his fresh wound.

" know this one is my favorite" the figure said looking at the small blade in his hand.

" the rules are simple... If you survive the knifes and still live after not wrapping the wounds I'll let you go and you can seek all the medical treatment your heart desires... But if you get sick, loose to much blood, or anything along those lines..." It leaned in real close to Robert chara sing his cheek and whispered " you'll be my pray" before licking his shoulder would to collect some of the blood.

" wh-why are you doing this?" Robert cried whimpering from the pain of his wound.

" remember when you through those rocks at a certain little girl?" It asked twisting its head sideways almost inhumanly.

Robert looked at the collages of photos.

Oh shit

" yeah..."

" she told me it felt like blades hitting into her flesh"

Oh shit Robert thought again. Panicking.

" so know you get to feel her pain."

With that being said the monster of a man, if it was a man slung his favorite knife, it flew into the chest of Robert.
Robert let out a ear piercing scream. The knife was electrical. It sent shock waves throughout Roberts body.
The sensation was numbing pain and he could feel it in his chest, pulsing throughout his body.
Soon he was hit by the same type of blade into his arm, and then leg. Robert screamed and moaned for help, but nobody could here him. He was utterly alone.

That was when he had enough and his vision blurred... Until he was out completely.

His body was soaked in blood. The figure gave out a spine chilling laugh that would give anyone goose bumps.
He grabbed the body and dragged it to a table. Sourcing out each body part, from edible to none edible.
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EyelessIngrid
:O. So Creepy
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on April 15, 2015
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Anyways, umm in suggest re reading my story :) I re wrote the whole thing and am now starting over. Anyways I finished all the chapters showing now so @Beaster4life56 you should re read it and sorry for not updating soon
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on April 29, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Hey guys! Thanks so much for reading my story, right now I'm editing it and re writing some chapters. Once that's finished I'll continue it for sure. Thanks for reading my little children of the night :3
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on April 25, 2014
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
plz write more!
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on April 17, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
i read the first chapter and i already think this story is awesome. (:
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on April 16, 2013
emeraldstone
hello love its me i love it
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on April 15, 2013
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
you spelled my name wrong -_-
but yes i do love you
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on April 07, 2013
XXXkittycobainXXX
Casandra!!!!...i guess this is why you kill for ME cause you love me??<3
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on April 07, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Cool but whatch your spelling. =]
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on March 05, 2013
mikycamry
hes obviously in love with her to kill over her
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
i love the bloody romance there but unseen
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
adorable
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on March 04, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love it. Please write more soon!
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on February 11, 2013
twilightfan
Want more. Please write more
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on February 07, 2013
traslia
Woa creepy but awesome!
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on December 13, 2012
leprechuan24
omg!! i ador it!!! you should get it published...really published!!
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on December 11, 2012
midnightshine8
cool wait no great wait no INCREDIBLE
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on December 06, 2012
SnowThaProduct
Amazing :)
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on December 05, 2012
Mythsandlegends
so cool again!
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on November 22, 2012
Runaway
Scary! I like it but could you do some spell checking?? :D :) Great Story
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on November 16, 2012