The Red Snow

The Red Snow

Once there was a town in the middle of know where. In thi town on the sixth day of the sixth month for six weeks the fountain in town square would turn on. That was when it was believed the nightmare came out to hunt. Kami, is five when she first moves here and is bullied, but when she befriends Jake, they pull pranks on her enemy's. Ten years later though, it all goes bad when her previous bullies end up missing or found horribly disfigured. Read to learn more.

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Chapter 5.
The Night Time Visit

The Night Time Visit

The picture is of Kami


CHAPTER 5 THE NIGHT TIME VISIT


As Kami undressed for her shower she began to think about earlier.
Her and Jake both loved horror movies allot. She wondered what he has to do that was so important to skip out on it. Maybe if she requested SAW then he might of canceled his plans.

Now Kami wasn't being possessive or anything she just liked spending time with him.
He also made it easier to watch horror movies. She hated watching them alone, but that didn't change the fact that she still liked them. Even as a child she felt giggles bubble up inside her when she watched movies like the wrong turn, or the grudge... Why? You ask, she doesn't have an answer for that. All she knows is that it's always been her number one in both books and movies.

Kami changed her mind about a shower and decided on a bath instead. She grabbed her favorite Stephen King book " Salems Lot". She turned on the hot water and pored some bath rocks into the tub, mixing in cherry blossom scented bubble bath soap. Once the hot water was at least five inches deep she slowly sunk into the well scented scolding hot water. She didn't mind though. The hot water was nice. She decided to rest in the tub a bit before reading. She slowly closed her eyes and relaxed in the tub...


Kami awoke suddenly with something, or someone watching over her. Kami didn't scream though. Because she already knew who it was. The handsome figure with a Disturbed shirt and black skinny jeans. His Emerald eyes full of lust swept over her body. The figure then slowly leaned in giving her a kiss on the forehead.
" hey Jake." She mumbled patting his head.

" I'm here for my bath" he said giving her his crocked grin... Kami could of sworn there was something red in his teeth... Whatever... It was probably beets. She thought. Jake loved eating beets.

Jake silently stripped down, while Kami looked away, her face blushing at the fact she had almost seen him.
He then slipped into her bathtub, the water almost turned a pinkish maroon color.

He was facing in the same direction as Kami. This way she could see his back. And nothing else. Kami reached out for a cup and soaked his hair. He leaned back to make the job easier on her. She reached up for shampoo and rubbed it between her fingers.

" we need to stop doing this, where not children anymore" Kami sighed massaging his scalp with her fingers.

" so. I like taking baths with you." He replied smiling.

She looked into the water noticing how dark the water was... It was reddish pink now and growing darker.

" I was putting red hairspray in my hair a few times this week."

" oh" she replied. She began to twirl his hair in her fingers. She started to think about an event two years ago. Jake would bring her a rose, everyday until her birthday came. Each rose had a piece of paper taped to it giving her a hint of what she was getting. Oh the look on her face when he handed her a Ds.

She smiled at the memory but quickly wiped it off when Jake started to chuckle.
" what, got your head in the gutter, don't you!" He said chuckling.

" n-no, I was thinking about those flowers you gave me. And the Ds." She mumbled looking away. She felt her face heating up and knew she was blushing.

" your so beautiful when you blush." He whispered stroking her cheek.

" sweety, time for bed!" Kami's mother shouted.

" you should go now." She whispered.

He nodded his head in agreement and gave her a peck on the cheek. Getting out of the tub, drying off, and getting dressed, she watched him. He gave her a cocky smile and walked out of her bathroom. Once more she blushed. She pulled out her book and tried to get into it. But could not. She decided on reading tomorrow and quickly finished her bath. She then got dressed and collapsed on the bed. She fell into a dark abyss full of red glowing eyes, and a cricked smile.
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EyelessIngrid
:O. So Creepy
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on April 15, 2015
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Anyways, umm in suggest re reading my story :) I re wrote the whole thing and am now starting over. Anyways I finished all the chapters showing now so @Beaster4life56 you should re read it and sorry for not updating soon
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on April 29, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Hey guys! Thanks so much for reading my story, right now I'm editing it and re writing some chapters. Once that's finished I'll continue it for sure. Thanks for reading my little children of the night :3
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on April 25, 2014
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
plz write more!
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on April 17, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
i read the first chapter and i already think this story is awesome. (:
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on April 16, 2013
emeraldstone
hello love its me i love it
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on April 15, 2013
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
you spelled my name wrong -_-
but yes i do love you
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on April 07, 2013
XXXkittycobainXXX
Casandra!!!!...i guess this is why you kill for ME cause you love me??<3
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on April 07, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Cool but whatch your spelling. =]
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on March 05, 2013
mikycamry
hes obviously in love with her to kill over her
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
i love the bloody romance there but unseen
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
adorable
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on March 04, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love it. Please write more soon!
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on February 11, 2013
twilightfan
Want more. Please write more
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on February 07, 2013
traslia
Woa creepy but awesome!
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on December 13, 2012
leprechuan24
omg!! i ador it!!! you should get it published...really published!!
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on December 11, 2012
midnightshine8
cool wait no great wait no INCREDIBLE
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on December 06, 2012
SnowThaProduct
Amazing :)
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on December 05, 2012
Mythsandlegends
so cool again!
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on November 22, 2012
Runaway
Scary! I like it but could you do some spell checking?? :D :) Great Story
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on November 16, 2012