The Red Snow

The Red Snow

Once there was a town in the middle of know where. In thi town on the sixth day of the sixth month for six weeks the fountain in town square would turn on. That was when it was believed the nightmare came out to hunt. Kami, is five when she first moves here and is bullied, but when she befriends Jake, they pull pranks on her enemy's. Ten years later though, it all goes bad when her previous bullies end up missing or found horribly disfigured. Read to learn more.

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Chapter 3.

The Game

CHAPTER 3 THE GAME



Some where away from our heroine is a tall young man walking home. His jacket isn't thick but still comfy for warmth. He has blue jeans on and his hair is cut that makes him look like Justin Bebier. He walks along the side walk stoping every so often to check out a girl and ask for her digits. Little does he know, that he's being followed.

He walked on and on just fooling around. The sun was setting with puffs of pinks and orange, it looked identical to cat barf. The shadow figure followed the teen around some more before deciding to lure him out.

" help me!" A female screamed in distress. The guy, hoping to get laid ran in the direction of the distressed voice, only to find no one was there. He heard it again farther away. This time she let out a high pitched scream of that of a banshee. He followed the sound until it led him to an ally. He looked around and noticed a tall figure standing in the center.
" I wanna play a game" it said in a demonic voice with both hint of female and male in the voice. The teen slowly backed away and turned to run watching in horror as a dumpster flew in the direction of the exit, blocking his path. He turned back to face the figure. It was smiling. The smile wasn't human. The smile looked as if the nerves in its face where horribly ruined and his teeth where practically raisers. But the rest of it. The rest of the creature was human. The thing took a step forward using a female voice saying " what? Isn't that what you wanted in the beginning? " it took the teen long enough to realize that the female voice belonged to Kami monstrosi. Then that must mean...

" leave me alone Kami." He said rolling his eyes.
" who said I was Kami?" The figure said using a deep male voice.

That's when the boy remembered today's date.
He then realized he was in deep shit.

And with that.... The game began.
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Comments (20)

EyelessIngrid
:O. So Creepy
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on April 15, 2015
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Anyways, umm in suggest re reading my story :) I re wrote the whole thing and am now starting over. Anyways I finished all the chapters showing now so @Beaster4life56 you should re read it and sorry for not updating soon
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on April 29, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Hey guys! Thanks so much for reading my story, right now I'm editing it and re writing some chapters. Once that's finished I'll continue it for sure. Thanks for reading my little children of the night :3
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on April 25, 2014
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
plz write more!
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on April 17, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
i read the first chapter and i already think this story is awesome. (:
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on April 16, 2013
emeraldstone
hello love its me i love it
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on April 15, 2013
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
you spelled my name wrong -_-
but yes i do love you
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on April 07, 2013
XXXkittycobainXXX
Casandra!!!!...i guess this is why you kill for ME cause you love me??<3
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on April 07, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Cool but whatch your spelling. =]
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on March 05, 2013
mikycamry
hes obviously in love with her to kill over her
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
i love the bloody romance there but unseen
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
adorable
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on March 04, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love it. Please write more soon!
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on February 11, 2013
twilightfan
Want more. Please write more
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on February 07, 2013
traslia
Woa creepy but awesome!
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on December 13, 2012
leprechuan24
omg!! i ador it!!! you should get it published...really published!!
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on December 11, 2012
midnightshine8
cool wait no great wait no INCREDIBLE
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on December 06, 2012
SnowThaProduct
Amazing :)
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on December 05, 2012
Mythsandlegends
so cool again!
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on November 22, 2012
Runaway
Scary! I like it but could you do some spell checking?? :D :) Great Story
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on November 16, 2012