The War Of The Raiders

I was six when the war came. The raiders took over my fathers kingdom and my family was forced to move to Ardianl. A small unnoticed village in a far away place. The war is back and things are coming back, dark magic, and death.

published on December 19, 201515 reads 8 readers 2 not completed
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Chapter 2.

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I ride through the dark woods on my White Horse named sugar.  The wind blows through my dark black wavy hair and the moon catches my unusual purple and blue eyes.  My hands grip the horse's harness and I am soon at my home castle that is glittering beautifully and almost make we like it, but childhood memories of war come flooding in.  The one peaceful kingdom has become a home of the most dangerous murders and war lords.  I walk in with my horse and tie Sugar to a near by pole.  I walk into the corridors where three scary men look at me.  I ignore them and their creepy toothless smiles.  I Walk into the throne room where a huge man with a fur coat and chained armor is sitting.  He is talking to a man and soon the man quickly runs off to a room just in the right corner of the room.
"What do ya want" The man spits out in a deep voice
"I am here for my father, i come with a message" A shudder goes back through my back and i swallow.
"And what might your message be"?
"A trade"
"A trade"? he says with a little laugh.
"this castle for a different one"
"I like this one"
"The other one is better"
"I doubt it"
"Our people are starving in the land in Ardinal"
"I don't care for your people"
"Please I-"
"Do you remember what happened what happened last time me and your father met up"
"A war started, i remember"
"And who won"?
"You" i say getting quiet.  I put my hands behind my back.  Memories of that year flash back.  I was only six, a girl who lived by getting what i wanted.  After that day i changed.  I knew what war looked like, nothing can prepare you for that.
"Countries once friends now against each other"He says with a small smile.  "And all because he wanted money...he was a stupid man" He gives out a laugh.  My eyes burrow and anger fills my mind.
"He wasn't stupid" I say furiously.
"Oh wasn't he"?
"You see here" I yell "He was a good man"! I walk up to his throne "He needed the money for the village so don't you DARE say bad things about him, do you want the castle or not"
"GET OUT"! he yells and two mean looking guards walk in.
"I can walk myself" i say storming out of the room.  I jump on Sugar and ride out. I ride all the way to the village my father use to rule over.  It is a nice village, but as i ride in i can tell it has changed.  I go to the local fruit cart that my dad use to take me to when i was younger.  I walk up to the cart and look at the fruit.  All the fruit is rotten so i casually slip away.
"They need us more then i thought" i tell my sugar, but she just keeps walking.
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
AWESOME so far! I love your stories! You've been really doing AMAZINGLY with spelling and grammar, too!! :D :D
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on December 22, 2015
vive_la_revolution
Good story!
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on December 19, 2015