Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

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Summer Camp Story
Chapter 2.

A Great Start

Qfeast Lake Camp 2

Standing with Electra, Trinty, and Yamilette in the Qfeast Lake parking lot was Jackie who could smell the preparations from the cookout soon to come. It was opening day and they were waiting for the bus bringing Sapphire, Maria and Victoria to a summer of fun and friendship...or so Jackie hoped.
"They're late" Electra fretted looping her hair in her fingers.
"They're not late" Jackie insisted, shaking her head. "It's like this every year. On the first day people show up at all different times. There's no such thing as late just...last"
"I just wish they'd show" Electra said bouncing on her heels. She grabbed Als wrist and checked the face of her watch.
"They are too late! Five whole minutes late"
"Her watch is fast" Trinty told Electra.
"Six minutes late" Electra huffs.
"Will this torment ever end?" Yamilette cried making a show of resting on the back of her hand on her forehead and fake fainting. Jackie silently chuckled at Yamilette's antics. Arriving throughout the day, Yamilette, Jackie, Trinty, and Electra had reunited in their new bunk, hugged and chatted while they waited for everyone else to show. Everyone already knew Rouge, their CIT but their counsellor, Blaze. She was new and sort of...strange. She was friendly enough but seemed awfully nervous. The four bunkmates had exchanged glances when she had greeted them. It was fairly standard but when she told them her cheeks reddened and she looked down at her clipboard refusing to make eye contact. A low deep rumble loudened until a large white and red bus arrived and rolled towards the girls.
"It's them!" Yamilette threw her hands in the air. "The long wait is over!" Electra bounced on her heels and waved her arms as if she was guiding a plane to an airport. Trinty clapped her hands with excitement straining to see the girls they were looking for.
"Look! Maria! Dead ahead!" Electra called pointing with both hands at the approaching bus. "Yo Maria!" Peering through the grimy window Maria waved excitedly at the four girls in the parking lot. Sapphire and Victoria crowded into the same window and Jackie felt her sour. She missed those guys. The bus chugged to a stop.
"Maria! Sapphire! Victoria!" Yamilette cried. She flung open her arms and raced towards the bus. Jackie found herself running to catch up. Sprinting along, Electra and Trinty crashed into each other, laughed, and hurried along too. The bus door slammed open with a rush of air. Maria, Sapphire and Victoria hopped down the three stairs and raced for the others. Their feet barley touched the ground before the hugging began.
"You're here!" Electra cried
"We're here!" Maria high-fived her. "What bunks are we in? I swear, if I'm not with at least some of you guys-"
"We're all together" Jackie told her. Sapphire and Maria squealed while Victoria grinned big time.
"Awesome!" Sapphire cried.
"Who else is in our bunk? Anyone we know?" Maria asked as she collected her bag.
"Yeah, we know all our bunkmates" Jackie replied. "No one new"
"Wow" Victoria said slipping her arms into her backpack. "Really?"
"Well, there's seven of us" Jackie said indicating the group in the parking lot. "Plus Lilli and Red"
"That's a total of nine" Maria said slowly. "But there's usually eleven in a bunk" There was a moment of silence where no one asked the question that immediately sprang to mind. Jackie answered anyway.
"Amy Rose is in our bunk. And Wave. We haven't seen them yet but our counsellor told us" The girls took it as well as Jackie would have expected. Amy could be snarky and mean spirited and Wave was a bully and bossy.
"I'm sure it'll be fine" Maria muttered throwing her arms around her duffle bag.
"Yeah, right" Electra muttered. "Who hates us enough to give us Amy and Wave?"
"Yes, I'm happy to see you too" said a sour voice. Jackie winced. Amy stepped into view scowling. It appeared she had been walking towards the group from the other side of the lot hidden by the bulky bus. Without another word she turned her back and stomped away. Everyone stared after her too numb with shock to speak.
"That went well" Sapphire finally said. Everyone groaned.
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ChocolerryPOP
Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
ThatAnimeGirl
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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sapphirethehedgehog
yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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sapphirethehedgehog
:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
Lucky_the_whatever_26
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
ChocolerryPOP
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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sapphirethehedgehog
You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
ChocolerryPOP
I am excited to read the rest of it
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice chapter! :3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you! :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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on August 04, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sorry! D:
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sapphirethehedgehog
Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome! :D
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on July 28, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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dogboy
woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
dogboy
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
dogboy
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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sapphirethehedgehog
It couldddddddddd
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sapphirethehedgehog
Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 23, 2017
Kinnare
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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sapphirethehedgehog
IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 08, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Kinnare
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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sapphirethehedgehog
The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
Kinnare
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yeah ^.^U
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Orange.Soda
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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sapphirethehedgehog
But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Kinnare
Please update soon Sapphire!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Will do :)
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on January 09, 2017
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on January 08, 2017
Orange.Soda
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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sapphirethehedgehog
Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
Orange.Soda
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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Kinnare
Also really great*claps*???
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on January 07, 2017
Kinnare
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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Kinnare
?
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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ThatAnimeGirl
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
Orange.Soda
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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sapphirethehedgehog
Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
What's gonna happen? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
Yamilettethehedgehog101
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on December 19, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
He might be~
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Cropsy coming?
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Weiss_Schnee
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome! :D
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on December 11, 2016
Orange.Soda
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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sapphirethehedgehog
Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
Orange.Soda
I see her doing that, actually...
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
The new chapter is good! :D
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks! X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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ThatAnimeGirl
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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sapphirethehedgehog
I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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sapphirethehedgehog
I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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on November 28, 2016
ThatAnimeGirl
Wym its getting confusing?
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