Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published on November 04, 2016437 reads 30 readers 139 not completed
Chapter 1.

Arrival

The bus jumped and rattled on the way to Qfeast Lake Camp while the campers sang their hearts out to the song 99 bottles of beer on the wall but everyone knew they lost the tune 28 bottles ago. The only campers who weren't 'singing' along were Sapphire, Maria and Victoria who were chatting. Sapphire plopped down on the empty seat behind Victoria and Maria and leaned over the back of their seat.
"I have confirmation on the dark, dark secret of Qfeast Lake! The story I heard is the story they heard! Ready to be scared out of your wits?"
"But of course! Bring it!" Maria said blowing her hair out of her face. The windows of the bus were open so wind gushes inside the bus making its own mini tornado. Sapphire launched into her oh so terrifying story.
"Okay, so, this homicidal maniac-"
"A what?" Victoria asked cupping her ear. "Sorry, can't hear you"
"It's about a homicidal maniac!" Sapphire repeated raising her voice. Trading excited looks Victoria and Maria leaned even further over the seat to listen. "I originally heard this from an old friend of mine" Sapphire began. Then she frowned when she saw that they were still straining to hear. She figured that it would have been best to unravel, her creepy tale of death in a hushed, spooky tones, but the bus was sill determined to count beer bottles backwards in song. "Maybe I should wait to tell this" she ventured, but both Maria and Victoria made sad puppy eyes.
"You can't stop now!" Maria insisted. "We will die of curiosity"
"You will not!" Sapphire said laughing. "I haven't even started yet"
"Okay, maybe we won't die but we will get really sick" Maria insisted. "Please please pretty please?" Victoria raised her eyebrows in silent request.
"All right" Sapphire relented. She paused and held up a finger. "So my friend, I don't want to mention names, used to come here too! Every year. Then, six years ago. Something terrible happened and she never came back again."
"Why not?" Maria asked her eyes wide. Beside her Victoria gestured for Sapphire to continue. Sapphire paused for dramatic effect.
"She never came back because that summer Cropsy, tried to kidnap her bunkmate and cut off her arm!"
"Ouch!" Maria cried.
"Who's Cropsy?" Victoria asked her jaw dropping. Sapphire cleared her throat.
"Cropsy. The one armed monster of Qfeast Lake. When the fog rises he-"
"Okay Campers!" Vector said into a microphone as he got to his feet and planted himself in a wide stance in the aisle. He waited for the singing to die down before he spoke again.
"Later" Sapphire said to Maria and Victoria.
"Aw!" Maria scrunched up her face. Beside her Victoria bit her lip and thumped her head on the cushioned seat. "Bookmarking this conversation" Sapphire promised and the two girls nodded.
"A lot of you already know me" Vector went on. "For those of you who don't, I'm Vector, sometimes counsellor, and for the last few years, your humble cook"
"Oh please tell us you'll be out humble counsellor this year!" Surge shouted from the back and half the bus started laughing. Sapphire, Victoria and Maria giggled. On a scale of one to ten the camp food was maximum a four. But if you think the food was bad, the weak but way to sugary bug juice was worse.
"Haha, no, I'm cooking again this year" Vector informed them. Everyone groaned. "Now that's settled, let's move along because speaking of moving along we are almost at camp!" Cheers, applause and foot stomps blared throughout the bus.
"Woohoo!" Maria and Sapphire yelled while Victoria laughed and threw her fist in the air.
"Once you get off the bus pick up your stuff and find your counsellors at your bunk." Vector checked his watch. "You have about an hour to unpack then meet by the lake for the cookout"
"Alright! Vectors not cooking today!" Surge yelled again. Everyone cheered again.
"You need to finish your story about Cropsypoo as soon as possible okay?" Maria asks with a wink. She was teasing this Cropsy's name.
"I will" Sapphire nods. "But you won't sleep tonight."
"I won't be able to sleep tonight anyway" Maria said. "We will be too busy talking after lights out"
"If we have a cooperative counsellor" Victoria reminded them. "Sometimes we actually have to follow the rules" she giggles.
"Maybe we will get one who's a heavy sleeper" Maria suggests hopefully.
"We might want a light sleeper" Sapphire said. "In case Cropsy tries to break into our bunk" The girls soon caught sight of the green sign planted on a white post that read QFEAST LAKE 1 KILOMETRE.
"Look guys! We're almost there!" Maria cries climbing over Victoria to get to the window.
"Where Cropsy will be waiting, Mwahahahaha!" Sapphire promised.
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Rarely
Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24
Lilythehedghog
O dang this lit, U could always slap my Oc in there to ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD I’m actually thinking of creating another story’s like this, well, with peoples OCs anyway
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Lilythehedghog
Ahh well do whatever u want with my OC's, I'm not really frequent on Qfeast anymore
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on December 26, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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sapphirethehedgehog
yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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sapphirethehedgehog
Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
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on December 26, 2017
Lucky_the_whatever_26
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
Rarely
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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sapphirethehedgehog
You haven't seen most of it yet
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
Rarely
I am excited to read the rest of it
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on August 15, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice chapter! :3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you! :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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on August 04, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sorry! D:
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sapphirethehedgehog
Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied
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on August 03, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
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on July 28, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter!
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JustAThought
woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
JustAThought
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
JustAThought
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
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on August 12, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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on July 28, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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sapphirethehedgehog
It couldddddddddd
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sapphirethehedgehog
Only time will tell
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on July 24, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 23, 2017
Kinnare
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE
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sapphirethehedgehog
IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 08, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Can't wait for the next chapter ๐Ÿ˜„
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on March 30, 2017
Kinnare
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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sapphirethehedgehog
The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
Kinnare
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yeah ^.^U
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Orange.Soda
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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sapphirethehedgehog
But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 26, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Kinnare
Please update soon Sapphire!
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on January 08, 2017
Orange.Soda
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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sapphirethehedgehog
Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yes, but no one notices it
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on January 09, 2017
Orange.Soda
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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Kinnare
Also really great*claps*๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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on January 07, 2017
Kinnare
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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Kinnare
๐Ÿ˜…
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on January 07, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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ThatAnimeGirl
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
Orange.Soda
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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sapphirethehedgehog
Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time
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on January 06, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
What's gonna happen? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
Yamilettethehedgehog101
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on December 19, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
He might be~
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on December 19, 2016
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Cropsy coming?
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on December 19, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie )
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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on December 11, 2016
Orange.Soda
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly
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sapphirethehedgehog
Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
Orange.Soda
I see her doing that, actually...
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on November 29, 2016
Yamilettethehedgehog101
The new chapter is good!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks! X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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