Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published 29 days ago181 reads 17 readers 61 not completed
Chapter 1.

Arrival

The bus jumped and rattled on the way to Qfeast Lake Camp while the campers sang their hearts out to the song 99 bottles of beer on the wall but everyone knew they lost the tune 28 bottles ago. The only campers who weren't 'singing' along were Sapphire, Maria and Victoria who were chatting. Sapphire plopped down on the empty seat behind Victoria and Maria and leaned over the back of their seat.
"I have confirmation on the dark, dark secret of Qfeast Lake! The story I heard is the story they heard! Ready to be scared out of your wits?"
"But of course! Bring it!" Maria said blowing her hair out of her face. The windows of the bus were open so wind gushes inside the bus making its own mini tornado. Sapphire launched into her oh so terrifying story.
"Okay, so, this homicidal maniac-"
"A what?" Victoria asked cupping her ear. "Sorry, can't hear you"
"It's about a homicidal maniac!" Sapphire repeated raising her voice. Trading excited looks Victoria and Maria leaned even further over the seat to listen. "I originally heard this from an old friend of mine" Sapphire began. Then she frowned when she saw that they were still straining to hear. She figured that it would have been best to unravel, her creepy tale of death in a hushed, spooky tones, but the bus was sill determined to count beer bottles backwards in song. "Maybe I should wait to tell this" she ventured, but both Maria and Victoria made sad puppy eyes.
"You can't stop now!" Maria insisted. "We will die of curiosity"
"You will not!" Sapphire said laughing. "I haven't even started yet"
"Okay, maybe we won't die but we will get really sick" Maria insisted. "Please please pretty please?" Victoria raised her eyebrows in silent request.
"All right" Sapphire relented. She paused and held up a finger. "So my friend, I don't want to mention names, used to come here too! Every year. Then, six years ago. Something terrible happened and she never came back again."
"Why not?" Maria asked her eyes wide. Beside her Victoria gestured for Sapphire to continue. Sapphire paused for dramatic effect.
"She never came back because that summer Cropsy, tried to kidnap her bunkmate and cut off her arm!"
"Ouch!" Maria cried.
"Who's Cropsy?" Victoria asked her jaw dropping. Sapphire cleared her throat.
"Cropsy. The one armed monster of Qfeast Lake. When the fog rises he-"
"Okay Campers!" Vector said into a microphone as he got to his feet and planted himself in a wide stance in the aisle. He waited for the singing to die down before he spoke again.
"Later" Sapphire said to Maria and Victoria.
"Aw!" Maria scrunched up her face. Beside her Victoria bit her lip and thumped her head on the cushioned seat. "Bookmarking this conversation" Sapphire promised and the two girls nodded.
"A lot of you already know me" Vector went on. "For those of you who don't, I'm Vector, sometimes counsellor, and for the last few years, your humble cook"
"Oh please tell us you'll be out humble counsellor this year!" Surge shouted from the back and half the bus started laughing. Sapphire, Victoria and Maria giggled. On a scale of one to ten the camp food was maximum a four. But if you think the food was bad, the weak but way to sugary bug juice was worse.
"Haha, no, I'm cooking again this year" Vector informed them. Everyone groaned. "Now that's settled, let's move along because speaking of moving along we are almost at camp!" Cheers, applause and foot stomps blared throughout the bus.
"Woohoo!" Maria and Sapphire yelled while Victoria laughed and threw her fist in the air.
"Once you get off the bus pick up your stuff and find your counsellors at your bunk." Vector checked his watch. "You have about an hour to unpack then meet by the lake for the cookout"
"Alright! Vectors not cooking today!" Surge yelled again. Everyone cheered again.
"You need to finish your story about Cropsypoo as soon as possible okay?" Maria asks with a wink. She was teasing this Cropsy's name.
"I will" Sapphire nods. "But you won't sleep tonight."
"I won't be able to sleep tonight anyway" Maria said. "We will be too busy talking after lights out"
"If we have a cooperative counsellor" Victoria reminded them. "Sometimes we actually have to follow the rules" she giggles.
"Maybe we will get one who's a heavy sleeper" Maria suggests hopefully.
"We might want a light sleeper" Sapphire said. "In case Cropsy tries to break into our bunk" The girls soon caught sight of the green sign planted on a white post that read QFEAST LAKE 1 KILOMETRE.
"Look guys! We're almost there!" Maria cries climbing over Victoria to get to the window.
"Where Cropsy will be waiting, Mwahahahaha!" Sapphire promised.
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Rebel_Assasin
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly
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sapphirethehedgehog
Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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Rebel_Assasin
I see her doing that, actually...
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
The new chapter is good!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks! X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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sapphirethehedgehog
I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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sapphirethehedgehog
I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Wym its getting confusing?
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Maria: Wait a minute... WHERE THE HELL IS SHADOW?!
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sapphirethehedgehog
030 idk yet lol
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Maria: *growls*
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
I love the part you wrote for Yamilette I loved how you put the running race involved in the story I'm going to screenshot it
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Rebel_Assasin
Yes GO TO THE ANTI SOCIAL DORK TO SPY ON SOMEONE XD
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Kinnare
OMG AMY IS SUCH A BISH POOR LILI!
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD poor Lili..
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Lili: im going to kill that bish. *growls* Negro. Is. Mine.
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Lady_Artemis
Is it too late to add a second character in?
I want someone who shares an interest with Jackie (Vocaloid XD)
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hmmmmmm I'll see what I can do :3
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sapphirethehedgehog
I don't think I'm able to :/ unless I have them appear, like, once ^.^
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Lady_Artemis
You made the decision yet?
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Lili: NEGROOOOOO U BETTER NOT BE CHEATING ON ME MISTER!!!
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Loved it but I didn't see Yamilette in the story I hope she gets in the next chapter
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Lady_Artemis
XD I love it when Sonic's all teasy like this
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sapphirethehedgehog
Heehee, I figured, seems a few people quite liked it XD
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Lady_Artemis
I would like to see a Sonackie moment though?
I'll PM you why.
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Lol Sonic's teasing in the story XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD ikr
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Keep going XD
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Rebel_Assasin
I love how Victoria is basically the "I'm tired of all this drama. See ya." And just hides in the backround.

(By the way it's a great story)
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD yeah, you said she's like Sherlock so I'm trying to think what he would be like in these senorios, just like 'nope' and thank you! :3
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Kinnare
OMG. Great story I love it please keep going!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Will do ^.^
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Loved the story hope you add more also I'm curious who said my mum? Was it Electra?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Huh??
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Okay I wrote you in pm
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh okay hey remember that roleplay we were doing in pm? I was wondering if we could continue it
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yes, she said her mum sent some cupcakes for everyone to share and you called her mum a goddess XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh okay I'm still a bit confused so Electra was talking about her mum sent cupcakes? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
You did XD you were the one saying her mum was a goddess
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
In chapter 4 sorry its kinda hard for me to know who's talking in the story
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Lady_Artemis
Don't make me be mean to Amy DX
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sapphirethehedgehog
Don't worry, we're all gonna be mean >:3 hehehe XD i'm just joking everything gets...better...yes...better >:3
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Lili: YAY
Maria: F*cling Amy...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: YAYA and I feel bad
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Lili: neggy..
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD
Sapphire: Negro was being a douche -3-
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
(Sent that before I read all the other chapters)
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Chocolate_And_Cheese
Maria: Oh sis don't! *giggles*
Lili: Where's neg?
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AnimatronicHeart
Love it! Keep it going
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AnimatronicHeart
Your welcome
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sapphirethehedgehog
Will do, thank you!!
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