Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

This is the story of a young girl who has always been interested in the stars of our night sky. She longs to find out what is written in the stars and she will not stop until she does. Her best friends help her in this journey of discovery.

published on February 23, 201723 reads 4 readers 22 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Chapter Three

During the whole of work, I couldn’t take my mind off Surge and the stars. Customers were telling me that I wasn’t more vacant than usual and where asking me if there was something wrong. Of course, I was telling them that I was fine and that I just had a bad night. No more questions were asked after that.

I was on my break when Surge came into the coffee shop and asked a member of staff if I was there, I was immediately grabbed by the arm of one of my colleagues, Hikari, and dragged into the coffee shop. The minute my eyes fell on Surge, my mouth was agape.

“Hey. I saw you walking here today and you looked distant. You okay?” This was the first thing he said after sitting me down in a chair and buying me a hot chocolate. He looked so concerned and worried about me. His gentle gaze was upon me all the time and I could see the worry in his eyes.

“Yeah… I’m fine. I was just thinking about something that’s all” I took a gentle sip of hot chocolate just to try and hide the blush that was starting to appear on my cheeks.

“Want to share? I have all day to talk about it.”

“I was thinking about the stars… There’s something written in them, I know that. I was just trying to figure out what it read” And I was thinking about you and how—

“I get that too sometimes. You think they are saying something to you, but you can never make out what. They are such pretty things stars are”

The conversation carried on about stars until my break ended and when I was back at work, I could not concentrate. The guy that I had a crush on, asked me if I wanted to have a walk with him tonight at midnight. Obviously, I said yes because it would mean being with Surge and watching the stars that I love go by, just minding their own business.

An hour later and I was walking home, when I suddenly got a call from my boss. My boss Usagi was a very kind woman and looked after her employees well. It turns out that I was daydreaming too much at work and that I was now fired. Great. Now I won’t be able to pay the rent and Sapphire and I are going to be kicked out.

On the verge of tears, I scrolled through my contacts until I found Surge’s number. I took a deep breath and then pressed dial. He picked up almost immediately.

“Hey, What’s up Maria?” His soft gentle voice rang through my ears and I burst out into tears.

“I need to talk to you…”
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Weiss_Schnee
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CAN I SHIP THESE TWO NOW?!?!?!
*squealing so much*
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ThatAnimeGirl
*giggles*
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on March 10, 2017
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on March 10, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
Oh man you better take shelter from Sapph!!!
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ThatAnimeGirl
I better?
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ThatAnimeGirl
*screams and runs into a bush, leaving my tail hanging out*
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on February 24, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
She wanted Surge and now he asked you out...
HIDE WOMAN!!!
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on February 24, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
AWWWWW WE ROOMIES
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sapphirethehedgehog
I LOVE IT (thoughsurgeismine >:3 le grrr) XD Seriously though this is really well written, I can imagine why no one is hiring Sapphire.

Interviewer: So, tell me about yourself
Sapphire: Well, I'm- IS THAT A SQUIRREL?!
Interviewer: Sapphire-
Sapphire: LOOK AT ITS TAIL See More▼
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yea!! and omg xD
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on February 24, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
XD omg Sapph I was like that with the red squirrel news this morning! :D
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on February 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Do you like it though?
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on February 23, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
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on February 23, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Ha ha!
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on February 23, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
O.o I meant to put *is wait I'll change that XD sorry!!
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on February 23, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
What do you mean "Isnt really well written"?!
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on February 23, 2017
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ThatAnimeGirl
WE AREEE!!
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Weiss_Schnee
Already deep, daaaaamn!!!
You know how to hit emotions better than I can!
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ThatAnimeGirl
Thanks... :">
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ThatAnimeGirl
My English teacher loves it. I'm writing it In word and then C&Ping it. I didn't tell her it was going on here, but we had do to a creative writing piece for a mini assessment and I asked if I could carry this on, she asked what it was about and then said I could do this. I asked her to read over it and she loves it
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on February 23, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
Read it, nice job :)
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on February 23, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
wow... next chapter will be up in a second ^^
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on February 23, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
It's true, though. I normally have to force it out.
With you it's natural.
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