My creepy pasta fanfic

My creepy pasta fanfic

I am currently writing a series, but looking at more creepy pastas and many other personality quizzes (I'm either getting along, in love, or I am one =3), I wondered: What would happen if she... Well, the prologue will reveal. Hope you enjoy my first series on here ^_^, I REFUSE TO SAY WHAT HAPPENS; all I can say is a hint: I am now free, where others have failed to the goal.

published on December 05, 201567 reads 30 readers 29 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologuel

   I listened to the night, curled up in my room. How many more hours until I'm insane? How many unanswered questions will hide? Never, I thought, the only sound the silence of the night consuming my pain. No more will the monster in me scream for freedom, no more trauma will be caused. How will it? I wondered, my questions screaming in my head, the ones that allways have taunted me.
   "ALICE, WERENT YOU SUPPOSED TO PUT UP THE DISHES!?!?" My mother screamed, slamming my door open. "S-sorry, I'll do better... " I stuttered, noticing the knife in her hand. She never has used a knife.... Had she? "NEXT TIME!? You said that last time, and you failed again. There is no next time!" She shouted, about to stab the knife somewhere in me.
   I grabbed the knife, along with the towel around the handle, defending myself. I swept her off her feet, followed by jamming my foot into her face repeadetivly, memories of her never ending abuse flashing in my head. "I- I'm sorry..." She had stated, emotions filling her eyes. All I saw was pain, mischief, and sorrow. No grief, no forgiveness in her blue eyes. I kicked her again, making blood fountain from her eye. "Sorry? Didn't you say sorry isn't an option? Geez... I thought you were supposed to raise me. You deserve it anyway." I sneered, jamming my foot deeper in her gashing eye, watching the blood splatter.
    "I'm sorry... I really am.." She moaned, the pain weakening her. "What is seen cannot be unseen. What is done can not be undone. You created me right? Shoulda raised me right." I stated, slowly driving the knife into her head, watching her life go away. Funny; I never thought pain was humorous.
    I realized what I did, dropping to my knees. I was about to grieve, no idea what I did, but I heard rustling in the bushes. I turned, seeing someone climb through the window. I got the knife ready, scared of my life becoming worse. The person looked up, his head now visible under his grey hoodie. His face was pale, as if bleached, or burned by alcohol. He had a smile on his face, as if it was framed there for eternity. What I wasn't surprised at was the fact he was holding a knife, also.
   His beady eyes was locked onto mine, as if he didn't know what to expect. He then saw the body, then looked back to me. A thought struck my mind. "Aren't you supposed to tell me to go to sleep or something?" I asked, realizing what I said. He laughed. "Seeing that mess, I'm scared to find out what happens if I did. So, you do know us." He said.
  "Y- yeah, but I never heard of them saving others..." I studdered, surprised of his reaction. "Well, it's rare. If you want to meet more, follow me." He offered, jumping out the window.
   That's when I discovered myself.
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Comments (29)

Olivia_Lillian_Snape
Great so far!When's the next update?
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sodagalactics
Hey uh bad news I'm probably not updating it as I cannot get into this account anymore
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on May 17, 2020
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on May 17, 2020
wxtch.bxtch
Hi Torie (:
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on April 19, 2019
Toga1
Nooo I need more
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Orange.Soda
This is shitty and old and I'm not planning on continuing it any time soon
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Toga1
I know I’m going to soon
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on February 19, 2019
Orange.Soda
You can make your own, writing horror is fun
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on February 19, 2019
Toga1
Nooooo??????
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on February 19, 2019
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on February 18, 2019
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on February 18, 2019
Bloodred.sunrise
G O LD
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Orange.Soda
This is one of the reasons why I hate myself
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Orange.Soda
I WAS NEW TO THE FANDOM
AT LEAST I LATER ASKED TO MAKE SURE??
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on January 20, 2018
Bloodred.sunrise
but itsso lovely
i lowkey cant believe you thought, hoodie, eyeless jack and masky were the same person tho smh
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on January 20, 2018
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on January 20, 2018
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on January 20, 2018
Kinnare
1. Who's miss Japanese brunette?
2. Can BEN~Senpai be in more chapters?
3. Can I kick Jeff in the nuts?
4. Is the 'boss' Slendy? Kuz we cool.
5. Is Sally gonna be in this?
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Orange.Soda
The Japanise brunette is an old friends oc
And to the rest, no. I am discontenuing the story. I apologize for the inconvinience if you enjoy this. However. I may be re-creating a different "horror" story, but it is not creepypasta.
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Kinnare
Okeh. I have google for BEN~senpai reader inserts
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
All_hail_Melon_King
Keep it up. I desperately want more
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Orange.Soda
I CONPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT THIS STOEY TBH
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All_hail_Melon_King
YES YOU DID TEDDY BEAR PART WAS BAD ***
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on January 29, 2017
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on January 29, 2017
tans_daddy_SaNs_da_meme
I love it is so good???
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on September 07, 2016
Orange.Soda
Just wondering, isn't hoody and Eyeless Jack (aka Masky) the same person!?
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tans_daddy_SaNs_da_meme
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on February 12, 2017
SUGAR0BABY
Those are three different people! In fact their 3 out of many of Slendermans proxies, if you need to know more just chat with me! Okay?
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on April 16, 2016
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on December 05, 2015
Orange.Soda
Really!?
It's so short Dx
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Orange.Soda
Becides, IDK WHAT YOUR CHARACTERS NAME SHOULD BE DX
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on December 05, 2015
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on December 05, 2015
Orange.Soda
Ok, I have masky =3
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on December 05, 2015
breann.west.5
I like this story. But BEN is mine. :33
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Kinnare
I must disagree. I'm a yandere weeaboo-otaku.
BEN~senpai is mine.
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on February 12, 2017
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on December 05, 2015
Orange.Soda
Thanks ^_^ I'll be sure to include you.
I still don't think I'm a good writer.
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Orange.Soda
You. What's your characters name? ^_^
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on December 05, 2015
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on December 05, 2015