My creepy pasta fanfic

My creepy pasta fanfic

I am currently writing a series, but looking at more creepy pastas and many other personality quizzes (I'm either getting along, in love, or I am one =3), I wondered: What would happen if she... Well, the prologue will reveal. Hope you enjoy my first series on here ^_^, I REFUSE TO SAY WHAT HAPPENS; all I can say is a hint: I am now free, where others have failed to the goal.

published on December 05, 201536 reads 14 readers 49 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologuel

   I listened to the night, curled up in my room. How many more hours until I'm insane? How many unanswered questions will hide? Never, I thought, the only sound the silence of the night consuming my pain. No more will the monster in me scream for freedom, no more trauma will be caused. How will it? I wondered, my questions screaming in my head, the ones that allways have taunted me.
   "ALICE, WERENT YOU SUPPOSED TO PUT UP THE DISHES!?!?" My mother screamed, slamming my door open. "S-sorry, I'll do better... " I stuttered, noticing the knife in her hand. She never has used a knife.... Had she? "NEXT TIME!? You said that last time, and you failed again. There is no next time!" She shouted, about to stab the knife somewhere in me.
   I grabbed the knife, along with the towel around the handle, defending myself. I swept her off her feet, followed by jamming my foot into her face repeadetivly, memories of her never ending abuse flashing in my head. "I- I'm sorry..." She had stated, emotions filling her eyes. All I saw was pain, mischief, and sorrow. No grief, no forgiveness in her blue eyes. I kicked her again, making blood fountain from her eye. "Sorry? Didn't you say sorry isn't an option? Geez... I thought you were supposed to raise me. You deserve it anyway." I sneered, jamming my foot deeper in her gashing eye, watching the blood splatter.
    "I'm sorry... I really am.." She moaned, the pain weakening her. "What is seen cannot be unseen. What is done can not be undone. You created me right? Shoulda raised me right." I stated, slowly driving the knife into her head, watching her life go away. Funny; I never thought pain was humorous.
    I realized what I did, dropping to my knees. I was about to grieve, no idea what I did, but I heard rustling in the bushes. I turned, seeing someone climb through the window. I got the knife ready, scared of my life becoming worse. The person looked up, his head now visible under his grey hoodie. His face was pale, as if bleached, or burned by alcohol. He had a smile on his face, as if it was framed there for eternity. What I wasn't surprised at was the fact he was holding a knife, also.
   His beady eyes was locked onto mine, as if he didn't know what to expect. He then saw the body, then looked back to me. A thought struck my mind. "Aren't you supposed to tell me to go to sleep or something?" I asked, realizing what I said. He laughed. "Seeing that mess, I'm scared to find out what happens if I did. So, you do know us." He said.
  "Y- yeah, but I never heard of them saving others..." I studdered, surprised of his reaction. "Well, it's rare. If you want to meet more, follow me." He offered, jumping out the window.
   That's when I discovered myself.
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Comments (49)

Kinnare
1. Who's miss Japanese brunette?
2. Can BEN~Senpai be in more chapters?
3. Can I kick Jeff in the nuts?
4. Is the 'boss' Slendy? Kuz we cool.
5. Is Sally gonna be in this?
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
The Japanise brunette is an old friends oc
And to the rest, no. I am discontenuing the story. I apologize for the inconvinience if you enjoy this. However. I may be re-creating a different "horror" story, but it is not creepypasta.
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Kinnare
Okeh. I have google for BEN~senpai reader inserts
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on February 12
Mataways
Keep it up. I desperately want more
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
I CONPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT THIS STOEY TBH
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Mataways
YES YOU DID TEDDY BEAR PART WAS BAD ***
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on January 29
Ticcitoby12346
I love it is so good😝😄😃
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on September 07, 2016
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Just wondering, isn't hoody and Eyeless Jack (aka Masky) the same person!?
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on February 12
SUGAR0BABY
Those are three different people! In fact their 3 out of many of Slendermans proxies, if you need to know more just chat with me! Okay?
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on April 16, 2016
Insane_feline
No
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sapphirethehedgehog
🤗 heehee
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on December 11, 2015
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Rp thing... Usually ends up romantic x3
I'm only doing them because the awnseres and I need inspiration... A bit addictin tho..
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
What is WWFFY i think i might know but still...
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
=o
I'm kinda addicted on a WWFFY series because the awnseres x3
Saphirethehedgehogs.... X3
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
Yep... Im pretending to be nyan cat on qfeast. Like the ciel and alois thing. I need someone to be tac nayn
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Nya in English- MEOW x3
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
Nyanyanyanyanyanyanya!
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
I am nyan cat!
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
I CANT TYPE TODAY
BAAA XD
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
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on December 06, 2015
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
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on December 06, 2015
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
Im finding them
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
I see no picks
=/
*sad face*
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
I'm writing a Sonic OC btw if ur interested... I'm kinda lost right now.
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on December 06, 2015
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
I'll post pics of them on my wall ^^
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Ej and Masky are the same person...
He's called Eyeless because he looks to have no eyes...
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on December 06, 2015
Insane_feline
Idk. Hoodie, masky, and ticci toby are proxies for slenderman. And eyeless jack is a whole different creepypasta
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
W- what's the difference?
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on December 05, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Really!?
It's so short Dx
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Becides, IDK WHAT YOUR CHARACTERS NAME SHOULD BE DX
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on December 05, 2015
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on December 05, 2015
Insane_feline
I love this!
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on December 05, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Ok, I have masky =3
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Insane_feline
Kay!
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on December 05, 2015
breann.west.5
I like this story. But BEN is mine. :33
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Kinnare
I must disagree. I'm a yandere weeaboo-otaku.
BEN~senpai is mine.
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on December 05, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Thanks ^_^ I'll be sure to include you.
I still don't think I'm a good writer.
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Insane_feline
My characters name is Sweet Revenge
Age: 12 and a half
Description: Wears a black tank top, a hoody sometimes, black jeans and black combat boots. She has black eyes, that leak blood when she's mad. She has dark brown hair with purple streaks. That she wears in two pony tails. Shoulder length hair.
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Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
Ok I'll add you in the next chapter 🐱
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on December 06, 2015
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on December 06, 2015
Forever_Great_Bohemian_Rhaspody
You. What's your characters name? ^_^
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on December 05, 2015
Insane_feline
Who? And you're a great writer!
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on December 05, 2015
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on December 05, 2015
Insane_feline
I love it! You should continue! But Hoodie is mine! Ok!? You can have whoever but him!
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on December 05, 2015