Cancerian

Cancerian

In this world, your fate depends on your birthday. The world revolves around zodiac signs, and everything about you depends on when you were born. Once you turn 15, you get all kinds of cool, special privileges, and Celine is totally ready for her 15th birthday. What will happen when she finally turns 15?

published on October 06, 2014173 reads 40 readers 56 not completed
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Chapter 4.
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When The Races finally finish, I meet up with my parents and we go home. I know what will be happening on TV. They'll announce the next Festival, and I hope beyond anything else it's tomorrow night. Each month, there is a Festival held for each Zodiac sign, and on the festival day all the people turning 15 that month are official 15 year-olds. We're given our access passes to the 15+ areas, and the Council member representing that Zodiac is introduced. My mother's voice interrupts my train of thought.

"We're home Celine, hurry or the doors will close on you." I step out of our car and walk into my house. My parents can tell I'm waiting for the Festival date to be announced, so they don't reprimand me when I dash over to the TV and turn it on without looking at anyone else. I tap buttons on the remote until I find the news channel. A handsome announcer stands there, his eyes on the camera.
"I'm Kaleem, and I can sense the anticipation for the announcement of this month's Festival date. But first..."

So of course, the news caster Kaleem launches into useless tidbits I already know. What time the Festival is (Starts at 6:00 p.m. and ends at 1:00 a.m.)
Where it is (The same place for every Cancerian festival, by the beach) and of course, the fact that the new Council member will be announced. Finally, the time comes.
"Now, I hope you don't have any plans for tomorrow night, because you'll have to cancel them to go to the Festival!"

At first the words don't register. Then I know exactly what he said. "OH MY GOSH THE FESTIVAL IS ON MY BIRTHDAY!" I squeal and run up to my room. I have to HoloChat Taylor ASAP. By the time I run up the stairs, My HoloChat platform is already glowing, obviously someone's trying to contact me now. I double tap the center to answer the message, and Taylor's form appears on the platform.

"Did you hear? Did you hear?!" Taylor asks excitedly, jumping up and down causing her holographic image to become blurry. I nod, and jump up and down with her happily. "The way we're acting reminds of those people we learned about in Has-Been History, they were called Windgirls and Windboys or something?" I say. Taylor laughs.
"FANgirls and FANboys Celine," Taylor tells me and rolls her eyes.
"I can't believe I forgot! That was my favorite lesson," I say and giggle. Taylor and I resume our excited jumping.

"We need to get ready! We need to pick out outfits! Oh my gosh there's so much to do!" I say. "Taylor nods. "I'll HoloChat you tomorrow when we're both ready, I can't wait to see how you look!" Taylor makes the moves forward to hang up, and her image disappears.

I'm feeling pretty shallow at the moment really, obsessing over hair. But maybe I'll meet a Sagittarius while I'm there! I remembering learning in Has-Been History that guys asked girls "What's your sign?" as something called a "pick-up line" sounds kind of cheesy to me, but it makes me laugh whenever I think about it. People of all Zodiac signs will be at the Festival, and I'm determined to look half-way decent. Maybe a guy might ask me what my sign is. I hope I don't laugh in his face...
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zGamezKonichiwanz
Ur birthdays a say after mine.. yea boiii (I no ur female)
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on December 14, 2020
angelzx3
Update!
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on January 01, 2015
Sombra
I like this!!!!
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on November 06, 2014
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on November 02, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Name: Riley
Status: Alive
Sign: Virgo
Birth Date: August 24
Male Parent: Michel See More▼
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MockingjayDistrict
So basically you, but as an OC :)
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JeweledOwl812
Oh right sorry
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on October 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I might have to change some things, bit I'll try to keep your character close to your description. (She can't be a Racer in the story because she's a Scribe)
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on October 26, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Yup :D
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on October 26, 2014
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on October 26, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Cool story!
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
Uh, cool, except for the Fangirl thing....
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Nightcat @Ravenclaw3243 @Saltednuts @JeweledOwl812 I updated! Sorry it took me like a week! I'll try to update more often! :D
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Fearless
love it!
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on October 25, 2014
Bookworm10
Cool! Thanks! :D
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
angelzx3
When will the next chapter be updated
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MockingjayDistrict
Soon, I'm just busy with school and whatever, so I can't update really often.
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on October 24, 2014
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on October 24, 2014
Fearless
cool!
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on October 23, 2014
angelzx3
Btw its really good so far :D
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MockingjayDistrict
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
angelzx3
Did I mention I was a girl? XD
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MockingjayDistrict
I know :D I'll include your OC soon.
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
angelzx3
Sorry wasnt on for a long time ill start reading :D
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on October 23, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I love it!
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on October 19, 2014
Nightcat
I'd rather just watch the Racers speed along the track than think to hard. *too
catching his breathe at the top of a hill *breath
Only things I minded :) nice writing ;) I love the idea of hover shoe racing
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MockingjayDistrict
Thanks! I'll have to edit that
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Nightcat
No prob :)
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on October 19, 2014
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on October 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Nightcat @Ravenclaw3243 @SaltedNuts I updated Cancerian!
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Ravenclaw3243
cool
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on October 19, 2014
Nightcat
Yus :)
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on October 19, 2014
Bookworm10
Cool! Thanks for letting me know! :D
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on October 19, 2014
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on October 19, 2014
Nightcat
Why did they switch to the zodiac system, why is it so important?
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MockingjayDistrict
It will be explained later
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Nightcat
Ooooooooooooooh yay :)
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on October 17, 2014
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on October 16, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
oh vcool!!!
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on October 10, 2014
Bookworm10
This is a great story so far! I can't wait for more chapters! :D
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on October 10, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Ravenclaw3243 @Saltednuts I updated! (@JeweledOwl812 can you check out this story?)
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Ravenclaw3243
uh course
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on October 10, 2014
Bookworm10
Sure!
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on October 10, 2014
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on October 10, 2014
Saltednuts
Im Taurus
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on October 09, 2014
Cristallite
Name: Jade
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on October 07, 2014
Fearless
name: Taylor
status: alive
sign: cancer
birth date: July 7th
male parent: Bracken See More▼
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on October 07, 2014
Bookworm10
I love chapter 2. XD
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MockingjayDistrict
Thanks :D
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
angelzx3
Name: Angel
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Sign: Leo
Birth Date: July 27
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MockingjayDistrict
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on October 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I accept Oc's just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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on October 06, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
Im Ariean!
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MockingjayDistrict
Awesome! I accept Oc's just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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Ravenclaw3243
Name: Amber
Status: Alive (and healthy! xD)
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CrystalDiamond2323
i'm cancerian too XD
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MockingjayDistrict
Cool :D
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MockingjayDistrict
I accept OC's btw just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I'm going to write more soon!
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on October 06, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
the chapter is teeny weeny though. and 15 is the age b) lindsay is 15, amethyst is 15 and all the peeps in ma new story are 15 :d
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