Creepypasta Poem of detail and death

Creepypasta Poem of detail and death

I came up with this at school and all of my friends liked the ryms. Some didn't like creepypastas though. PLEEAASSEE tell me how I did. It is my first poem about creepypastas so don't be mean but please be honest. Comment, rate, and please favorite if you think it's worth it.

published on March 02, 201339 reads 29 readers 22 completed

Creepypastas

Oh, how I love creepypastas. They're my favorite kind of horror!
Sure I like other things but compare and they're a borer!

Oh there's Ben Drowned, The Rake, Jeff the Killer, and Slenderman!
If you ask if I'd survive 'em I'd reply, "YES I CAN!"

If you haven't played Illusion or Slender well guess what!
You're a whiny little baby! Now go play 'em and SHUT UP!

Jeff the Killer's a killer who'll make you go to sleep!
If he comes to your house ya' better go in the corner and weep!

Eyeless Jack likes kidneys and yours will do just fine.
He watches you 'til you awake. Your kidneys his no matter how much you whine!

Red Mist is what'll be next and I believe Squidwards suicide is what it's about.
He'll watch you with hyper-realistic eyes. DON'T JUST SIT THERE AND POUT!

Slenderman has a forest. Don't you dare go and trespass!
Ya' better gather all 8 pages and GET LOST real fast!

Ben is really awsome. Yah, the poor boy drowned.
If you don't know the story look up Jadusable! It gets around.

You'll find Tails Doll in the game Sonic R but don't ever try his curse!
If you happen to get wrapped up in it ya' might wanna' find a nurse!

Smile Dog's a Siberian Husky who wants you to 'spread the word'.
If ya' see his origional snap-shot he'll haunt your dreams is what I heard.

The Rake is what's dangerous! You're a big bloody blob once he's done!
He's faster than a cheetah! You can hide but you can't run!

Creepypastas are INCREDIBLE, different, and dangerous at the least.
I know I'm crazy to have met 'em! Thanks for reading this on qfeast!
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Comments (22)

creepypastaHAWT
AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on July 07, 2014
Frostgoddess
IT AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
I LOVE IT! ITS AWESOME
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on April 26, 2014
EverymanHABIT
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT THAT I LOVE IT IS I LOVE IT ALL I LOVE IT I I LOVE IT CAN I LOVE IT SAY I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
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on May 12, 2013
LexiCha
Thank you all.
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on March 03, 2013
thatsssanicequizzzyouhavethere
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on March 03, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
I'm reading this again and this is probably like my 13th reading it lol I love how u came up with this and made it all rhyme so good =)
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on March 02, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Great job!!!!!!Make more!!!!! =]
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
OMG!! Thank you all so VERY, VERY MUCH!!! *hugs everyone*.
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on March 02, 2013
BlueStripedFox
This awesome! yeah smiledog!
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
How does this sound, I'll make many seperate poems each about a creepypasta that I know about (mostly the ones listed above)? How's it sound? Then I could start other poems, too. I was thinking a bout coming up with part of the Slenderman poem idea you came up with tomarrow.
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on March 02, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
Please do write more creepypastas poems :-) because this was really good. If you do make more please let me know =) thank u
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
THANK YOU!! XD Sorry I JUST NOW replyed. I was reading Silent Hopes story, 'A New Killer Is Born'.
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on March 02, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
No problem You deserve it
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
Thank ya. I can't believe how many comments it already has!! It gives me lots of self-confidence so THANKS!
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on March 02, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
This is an awesome poem It's very nice!!!
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
Thanks, I will if I have time. I'll try and make it a bit detailed, put alot of heart into it, long, and slendy.
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on March 02, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
Yes it is really good=D I loved it and hope u create more poems about the creepypastas maybe u can write a poem just for slenderman alone maybe? I love slenderman u should write a poem about him next if u got time =)
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!! Is it really good?! Maybe my friends were right. Thanks.
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on March 02, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
Haha, I absolutely loved this and thought u really did an excellent job on your first poem. I love it!!! I rate it five, and now Imma favorite =D xoxoxox
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on March 02, 2013
LexiCha
HOW IS IT!?!? I know it's not really good but just PLLLEEAAASSSEE tell me how I did.
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on March 02, 2013