Illusion

Ok so this is supposed to be a horror story, my first time writing something like this. Also it is a choose your own fate story. Please do not read it in order of chapters as it won't make any sense then,Sorry if chapters are short and please do not get angry if you die, you can always try again. Also I am planning to maybe make this into a game or book so please do not copy. Thanks ^.^

published on July 20, 2014189 reads 17 readers 23 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Chapter 2.

You walk back into the forest hoping to to find your way out, bad move.
You get completely lost and can't even find the mansion again! You give up, theres no hope, your trapped in a forest, no food, its in the middle of a storm and have no idea how to escape.
Nice try, but its game over for you.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Whoa! I just read the whole story and I am still alive :D
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on November 22, 2014
Cristallite
http://www.qfeast.com/poll/wZfvKi/What-should-my-next-to-story-be-It-s-a-CYOA

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Cristallite
For those who liked Illusion so far..
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rue2160
Okay
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on November 05, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Still alive :p
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on August 08, 2014
Cristallite
I wont post the next chapters until I have written more,
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on July 23, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I'M STILL ALIVE
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on July 22, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome!
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MockingjayDistrict
I haven't died yet :)
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CrystalDiamond2323
Were survivirs!!!
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on July 23, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
rue2160
PLEASE UPDATE
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Cristallite
Sorry I was out for most of the day but I will update ASAP
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 21, 2014
rue2160
There isn't chapter 11 so far I'm good!
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on July 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
So far i'm still alive!!!!
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Cristallite
Congrats!
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CrystalDiamond2323
:D i'm a survivor
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
rue2160
I died when I chose to go back outside.
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Cristallite
Well you can always try again ^.^
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rue2160
Yep!
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
Cristallite
So when i finish if you did get Game over please say how many tries it took you to survive. I will try to update in 3's and i currently have about.. 11 chapters.
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on July 20, 2014
EverymanHABIT
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this so far! :D
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on July 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Awesome! I love these kinds of stories
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on July 20, 2014
Cristallite
Like i said this is my first time, i was thinking about this last night but i dont think turned out as well as i wanted it too..this was more of a scrap story..
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on July 20, 2014