Illusion

Ok so this is supposed to be a horror story, my first time writing something like this. Also it is a choose your own fate story. Please do not read it in order of chapters as it won't make any sense then,Sorry if chapters are short and please do not get angry if you die, you can always try again. Also I am planning to maybe make this into a game or book so please do not copy. Thanks ^.^

published on July 20, 2014210 reads 20 readers 24 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue

You live in a town thats near the edge of a supposedly haunted forest. Rumor has it that one day a mansion suddenly appeared. Three young girls went to go check it out- they never returned. Many others also tried but they too never returned. The protective force a.k.a the police declared the forest was banned so no one would ever go there again. It didn't work, one year another group headed out and finally we made a bit of progress on the mansion. Only one of the group members returned- he was scratched and kept muttering three words. The police tried to ask him about it but he only was saying those three words. The next day he passed away due to a unknown illness and that was the end of that.

One day your playing truth or dare with two of your best friend. (Just going to call them friend 1 and 2) Friend 1 dares the others to go into the forest. (Shout out to Jackie the hedgehog) You being dauntless were about to accept but friend 2 shouted that it would only be fare to risk lives if friend 1 was also coming, Friend 1 said fine and then you said we leave tomorrow morning. You went home to prepare for the journey, you grabbed rope, a flashlight and other provisions.The next morning you and your friends went into the forest, the sky was clear and it went perfectly! Until you got separated from you friends.

You don't know how many hours of passed since then, but its now night,-and a dark and stormy one too- You have been wandering around for ages, your food ran out ages ago and still have not seen any sign of your friends, you just hope they are alright. Suddenly you come to a clearing and there it is, the mansion.

Do you
1. Walk back into the forest hoping to find you way out?
(Go to chapter 2)
2. Walk inside, it may be haunted but at least its shelter right?
(Go to chapter 3)
A/N sorry if chapters are short..
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sapphirethehedgehog
Whoa! I just read the whole story and I am still alive
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on November 22, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
http://www.qfeast.com/poll/wZfvKi/What-should-my-next-to-story-be-It-s-a-CYOA

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The_Panda_Otaku
For those who liked Illusion so far..
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rue2160
Okay
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on November 05, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Still alive
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on August 08, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
I wont post the next chapters until I have written more,
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on July 23, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I'M STILL ALIVE
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on July 22, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome!
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MockingjayDistrict
I haven't died yet
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CrystalDiamond2323
Were survivirs!!!
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on July 23, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
rue2160
PLEASE UPDATE
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The_Panda_Otaku
Sorry I was out for most of the day but I will update ASAP
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 21, 2014
rue2160
There isn't chapter 11 so far I'm good!
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on July 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
So far i'm still alive!!!!
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The_Panda_Otaku
Congrats!
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CrystalDiamond2323
i'm a survivor
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
rue2160
I died when I chose to go back outside.
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The_Panda_Otaku
Well you can always try again ^.^
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rue2160
Yep!
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
So when i finish if you did get Game over please say how many tries it took you to survive. I will try to update in 3's and i currently have about.. 11 chapters.
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on July 20, 2014
EverymanHABIT
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this so far!
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on July 20, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Its awesome! i love it crimson! luckily i made the right choice! >:3
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on July 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Awesome! I love these kinds of stories
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on July 20, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Like i said this is my first time, i was thinking about this last night but i dont think turned out as well as i wanted it too..this was more of a scrap story..
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on July 20, 2014