Chosen

Chosen

Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.

published on May 04, 2014577 reads 63 readers 114 completed
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Chapter 6.
Professional Trouble-Makers

Professional Trouble-Makers

AMETHYST'S POV

At practice the next day, I found myself talking to the cute earth guy a lot. His name was Zane. He told me a bit about himself, and it wasn't that bad because he was last picked for Earth as I was for fire. I have to admit, the training room isn't the most romantic place in the world, but it was enjoyable. Moving on from that, I'm falling behind on training. Everyone can at least do something with fire, but all I have to prove I'm a fire controller is the mark in my hand, and the reddish specks starting to appear in my eyes. The Elementor had to give me a private session to learn how to make a flame. Once I got back to my dorm, my roommate, Ashe, who is also in fire with me, was sound asleep. It was the middle of the night. I looked at the mark on my hand. Suddenly a bright flame sparked out of it. I fell of my bed in surprise. The reaction left a throbbing pain in my hand. "Ouch!" I whispered.

ARIA'S POV

I woke up extra-early in the morning to go out and train. I thought it would be a great use of time to practice a bit before breakfast time. I got up from my bed and slowly stepped out and got changed. I didn't notice that I had awoken Dawn too. By the time I got to the practice room, the sun was beginning to rise. I almost walked into the training room, when I heard voices. It sounded like an argument. I peeked my head out the door. Two Elementors, Fire and Earth, where arguing over what element had a better uniform for duel days. I sighed. That was the most stupid argument I had ever heard in my life. "ARIA!" Exclaimed Dawn who had caught up. "Shush!" I said, but it was too late. The Earth Elementor cocked his head to the noise and started walking towards us. "Run!" Whispered Dawn. We both sprinted through the halls with the angry Elementor after us.

DAWN'S POV

We ran through the main meeting room. The Elementor almost got us, but I made a wall of water and Aria evaporated it into heavy fog. We laughed as the Elementor shouted after us. We run through the first story if dorms. By now, the Elementor was far behind. I giggled and made a small pool of water, which I then froze. We watched from a corner as the Elementor, so caught up in his anger, flipped backwards on the ice and fell with a THUNK! I covered my mouth to keep from laughing, but then someone grabbed Aria and I from behind and said: "What do you think you're doing?" It was the Earth Elementor.
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Celia_Bowen
Is anyone else reminded of Divergent?
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CrystalDiamond2323
I wrote this before I knew divergent existed
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on September 29, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
not anymmore. its marked as completed
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on September 28, 2014
Celia_Bowen
You know you can actually edit what's alredy there, right?
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on September 28, 2014
Celia_Bowen
Cool
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on September 28, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
thanks! i'm gonna make an edited version that's longer and has no pov switches and is less cheesy
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on September 28, 2014
Celia_Bowen
Wow. So basically you came up with a storyline as good as one that millions of people have read, that's really amazing. Great job! All the switching POVs are kind of confusing
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CrystalDiamond2323
-CHOSEN-
remembering Chosen with 72 readers, but only 20 chapters. Released's first chapter is in!

@Aliyss @Animefan224 @BlueWatermelon @BobDaCool @Coolcass22 @Creator3000 @Crimsonthehedgehog @Me1234 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict @SC_Q.13 @The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
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BobDaCool
yay!who thumbed this down btw
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The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
Awesome story! Though you might want to add some paragraph breaks in the first chapter ;)
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CrystalDiamond2323
:3 thanks and yea
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SC_Q.13
Love this story!
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SC_Q.13
Reply to comments here. You can even reply to replies, but it will look weird. Qfeasters have to get used to it.
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CrystalDiamond2323
Ok then...
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on July 12, 2014
SC_Q.13
sorry. recording this
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on July 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
What? I'm confused
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on July 12, 2014
SC_Q.13
see?
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on July 12, 2014
SC_Q.13
Like this
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Coolcass22
I Loved the Whole Thing, its so fascinating and like a proper book. I hope you become an author when you become older because I would surely read your books
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CrystalDiamond2323
Aww!! Thanks
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BobDaCool
Awesome
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on June 24, 2014
Animefan224
I really like this! This is pretty much exactly what I want in a book!
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CrystalDiamond2323
Thanks :D
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JeweledOwl812
Super cool! It was awese from the beginning!
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JeweledOwl812
*awesome
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CrystalDiamond2323
Thanks! :)
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CrystalDiamond2323
:D I hope you enjoyed it
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on June 08, 2014
BobDaCool
Awesome!
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on June 04, 2014
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on May 31, 2014
Cristallite
I must say, that you had a amazing beginning makingdreaders(like me) want to read more, the chapters between were full of actions si readers didnt get bored. The chapters were quite long (which I like) and you also had a amazing finish
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Wolfleader117
My first ones are about my roleplay characters/my friends' characters, biographies, last known locations, that sort of thing. Then after I'm done with all that, I will be writing the roleplay out (Some character's names were forgotten, so I had to create new names for the forgotten ones, lol)
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on May 26, 2014
SC_Q.13
yay Magic is there!!! :D
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on May 26, 2014
BlueWatermelon
amazing finish!
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on May 24, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
Coolcass22
Honestly crystal, these are amazing!
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on May 22, 2014
Coolcass22
Wow o_o Take me a couple of days to read then x
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on May 22, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
20 it think
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on May 21, 2014
Coolcass22
How Many Chapters Is There Crystal? x
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on May 21, 2014
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on May 21, 2014
Coolcass22
Amazin' x
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on May 21, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
:D anytime
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on May 20, 2014
Cristallite
^_^ Np
I'm just grateful that you added me in it etc
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on May 20, 2014
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Cristallite
Nah its fine
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on May 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Srry, just that sequels don't really get as much attention as the actual story
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on May 20, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
No sequel
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on May 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE.A.SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CrystalDiamond2323
SEQUEL TIME XD XD XD
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on May 19, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Sometimes i did want to make a sequel, but meh
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