Mobius High

Mobius High

Well, I've already made a character book and a page. Now here is the actual story! Sorry if OCs and Sonic Characters are not acting like themselves, this is my interpretation of them. Not all the characters will be mentioned in each chapter. Thank you for reading!

published on April 21, 2014152 reads 35 readers 34 not completed
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Chapter 3.
Kacey the Hedgehog

Kacey the Hedgehog

*Kacey's P.O.V.* I finished my food and walked outside to the playground. Active games aren't really in my interest, so I decided to use my lunch recess to get started on my report for Professor Silver.
The playground has a row of trees lining the edge. I sat down at the base of one and began writing. After a while, I heard someone singing. I didn't recognize the voice, but it was the best singing I had ever heard. The song was unfamiliar, though. I believe some of the words were:

I'd like to make myself believe,
that the planet turns,
slowly.
It's hard to say that I'd rather
stay awake when I'm asleep,
'cause everything is never as it seems.

'Cause I get a thousand hugs,
from ten thousand lightning bugs,
as they try to teach me how to dance.
A foxtrot above my head,
a sock hop beneath my bed,
a disco ball is just hanging by a thread.    *some of the words have been modified slightly*

It was a beautiful song, even though it was sung by a boy. I turned towards the sound to see who it was. It was Mark the Hedgecat. What? I didn't know he had such a nice voice! He was sitting against a tree with his earphones in, singing along. Herald was leaning against another tree, listening. When the song was over, he spoke.
"That's one good thing you inherited!" Mark stood up and took his earphones out. "You sound better then Mom and Dad put together!"
"No I don't" Mark replied.
"You sing a lot better then I do!"
"Yeah right, you're the best."
"Just admit it! You're great, I suck!"  Herald looked a little annoyed, but didn't act on it.
"But it's not true!" The hedgecat complained, "I can't do anything well, or even correctly! The girls are right....I'm just a worthless halfbreed...."
Herald was shaking with anger, then he punched Mark in the head. I gasped. He hit his own brother when he knows how insecure Mark is!
Mark's ears flattened and he held his head, a pained expression on his face.
"COME TO YOUR SENSES!" Herald hissed. Wait, he hissed? I've never seen him do that, but he IS half cat....... Mark looked ashamed and Herald expression changed from anger, to surprise. "I-I'm sorry, Mark..."
"No, it was my fault, I'm an idiot..." He then put his earphones back in and walked away. His brother facepalmed himself. I feel sorry for Mark.....The bell rang and Reccess was over. What do I have next again? Oh yeah, Engineering with Tails. I walked to the classroom, thinking about what just happened.
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Weiss_Schnee
Awwwww! May found her own Chao!!!
Jackie: KAWAIIIII!!!!!!!
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Frostgoddess
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on February 13, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
*sing-song voice*
I want to see another chapter in here!
We had a deal that you can't break!
I want to see another chapter in this story,
I'LL ONLY NAG YOU MORE AND MORE UNTIL I SEE THAT GODDAMN CHAPTER WROTE! See More▼
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Frostgoddess
I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING!!! ALL THE IDEAS THAT COME TO ME ARE STUPID! DX XD
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on February 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
@FandomLover You can help. ^.^ Any help is welcome
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on February 23, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Talk to me in PM about them, we'll come up with something together
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on February 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
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on May 10, 2014
JustineTheCat
Before I got to chapter 4 I was like "who the hell is the target?!" then I read it, and I'm like "O.o WHAT'S A HUMAN DOING THERE!" LOL
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Look, the whole halfbreed thing is because Mark is half hedgehog, half cat. Basically his dad is Manic, who met a hot cat, they got together, and had Mark and as a result Mark is a hedge-cat.
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on May 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Frost, Chapter 4 is NOT lame, stop letting yourself down will ya??
Besides, having a secret spy student in the school following someone different is sure to lead to a big event!
Ya heard it from me peeps, chapter 4's only a lead-up to a big event!
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on April 30, 2014
Frostgoddess
***PLEASE DO NOT PRESURE ME*** My sisters and I agree that chapter 4 is the worst chapter. This is because I didn't have many ideas on what to have happen, but people kept pressuring me.
Nonstop: 'YOU NEED TO WRITE CHAPTER FOUR!' and 'Is chapter four done yet?' and things like that. -_-u
So Please do not pressure me to continue my stories. It just makes them See More▼
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on April 29, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Chapter 4 is so awesome!!!
If you wanna find out about the battle, it's all in Mobius High - Hayley's Story in Chapter 5 - Wrath of Sheena
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on April 27, 2014
Frostgoddess
Ok. but I'll have t give Mark his chao sooner or later XD
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Which one? *tilts head*
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, simply Lightning asking Evenstar out.
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, one of them is when Mark gets his Chao.
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I have two ideas, but I don't think they should happen in that chapter......
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I'm making it, but I'm having a bit of trouble with inspiration -_-u
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on April 25, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 24, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
LOL Mark's just all "WHY AM I A HALFBREED?!"
He needs to chill down like hell xD
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Going great!
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on April 23, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 22, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Plus, I wonder who the target could be...
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thanks! :D
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on April 22, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Cool! I might make one for my character! So awesome, Frost!
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on April 22, 2014
Cristallite
Cool story
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Yeah....
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on April 22, 2014
nursefunfuncake
What about me? FYI I'm not a human I'm a witch u saw my profile on the page rite?
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
thanks. :) More coming soon
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on April 22, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Good Story
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thank you :D
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on April 22, 2014
Stars_In_The_Sky
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Also, if you find out who Mark and Herald's mother is, IT WAS MY LITTLE SISTER'S IDEA! Sooooo, yeah. Hope you enjoy!
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on April 21, 2014