Mobius High

Mobius High

Well, I've already made a character book and a page. Now here is the actual story! Sorry if OCs and Sonic Characters are not acting like themselves, this is my interpretation of them. Not all the characters will be mentioned in each chapter. Thank you for reading!

published on April 21, 2014152 reads 35 readers 34 not completed
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Chapter 4.
Rosalia: Day two. Target located! Attack?

Rosalia: Day two. Target located! Attack?

*Rosalia's P.O.V.* Day two. Well, yesterday went fine, but I didn't see the girl I have to watch. I don't even know what she looks like, or even her name. The boss just said that I would know her when I saw her, that she was........different.
I entered the school and walked to my locker. The brown rabbit from yesterday opened the locker next to mine and got out some books. He hardly looked at me, but why should I care? My job isn't to make friends. The warning bell rang and I entered math, took a seat, and looked around. Mark wasn't here, if he's late again he'd be in big trouble. He was late for almost every class yesterday.
Something caught my eye, a girl in the hall. Someone I hadn't seen before, but she passed quickly. I peered out of the classroom and saw her at her locker. She had light purple hair, and she was, a human. She's a human, that must be her! I checked to be sure that no one was watching, then pressed the button on my watch.
"Target identified." I pressed it again just as Mark came running towards the classroom. Well, he'll probably make it this time.
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I kept an eye on her all day, 'till she healed a girl and collapsed. I lost track of her afterwards. Until I walked outside later that day. There she was, with Professor Sonic. After a moment, everything looked dark
I saw several......things. They looked only half alive, and their leader was a cloaked figure who seemed to know my target. I don't know who or even what they were, but they didn't seem friendly. The army was suddenly all over the place, and some of them spotted me. That's just great!
Now that I got a closer look at them, I think I know what they are. These things are probably voiders.
A voider began to attack me, and I kicked it away. More approached, and I quickly pulled out my hand gun. I shot the two voiders closest to me, and more attacked. They seemed to keep coming, and I kept shooting them. One came up behind me and I kicked it away, wheeled around and shoot it in the head. I glanced at the girl and Sonic to see they were just fine.
I managed to defeat the last of them, I was glad my handgun is silenced, and my target sent the others running. She was really good. Sonic turned and saw me. I quickly put my gun away as he told the girl, who then approached me. She seemed to recognize me.
"Hello, you must be new here," She said, "I'm Hayley."
"I'm Rosalia the hedgehog." I replied. Hayley glanced over her shoulder nervously.
"Did you see that?" She obviously meant the voiders.
"Yes,"
"Well, I can't explain it, so can you please just keep this a secret?"
"Sure" Of course I wasn't going to tell anyone! I'm an agent! :P
She sighed and smiled at me before heading back to class. Oh, right, I need to get to class, too.
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Weiss_Schnee
Awwwww! May found her own Chao!!!
Jackie: KAWAIIIII!!!!!!!
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Frostgoddess
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on February 13, 2016
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on February 13, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
*sing-song voice*
I want to see another chapter in here!
We had a deal that you can't break!
I want to see another chapter in this story,
I'LL ONLY NAG YOU MORE AND MORE UNTIL I SEE THAT GODDAMN CHAPTER WROTE! See More▼
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Frostgoddess
I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING!!! ALL THE IDEAS THAT COME TO ME ARE STUPID! DX XD
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on February 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
@FandomLover You can help. ^.^ Any help is welcome
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on February 23, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Talk to me in PM about them, we'll come up with something together
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on February 23, 2015
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on February 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
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on May 10, 2014
JustineTheCat
Before I got to chapter 4 I was like "who the hell is the target?!" then I read it, and I'm like "O.o WHAT'S A HUMAN DOING THERE!" LOL
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Look, the whole halfbreed thing is because Mark is half hedgehog, half cat. Basically his dad is Manic, who met a hot cat, they got together, and had Mark and as a result Mark is a hedge-cat.
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on May 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Frost, Chapter 4 is NOT lame, stop letting yourself down will ya??
Besides, having a secret spy student in the school following someone different is sure to lead to a big event!
Ya heard it from me peeps, chapter 4's only a lead-up to a big event!
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on April 30, 2014
Frostgoddess
***PLEASE DO NOT PRESURE ME*** My sisters and I agree that chapter 4 is the worst chapter. This is because I didn't have many ideas on what to have happen, but people kept pressuring me.
Nonstop: 'YOU NEED TO WRITE CHAPTER FOUR!' and 'Is chapter four done yet?' and things like that. -_-u
So Please do not pressure me to continue my stories. It just makes them See More▼
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on April 29, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Chapter 4 is so awesome!!!
If you wanna find out about the battle, it's all in Mobius High - Hayley's Story in Chapter 5 - Wrath of Sheena
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on April 27, 2014
Frostgoddess
Ok. but I'll have t give Mark his chao sooner or later XD
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Which one? *tilts head*
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, simply Lightning asking Evenstar out.
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, one of them is when Mark gets his Chao.
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I have two ideas, but I don't think they should happen in that chapter......
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I'm making it, but I'm having a bit of trouble with inspiration -_-u
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on April 25, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 24, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
LOL Mark's just all "WHY AM I A HALFBREED?!"
He needs to chill down like hell xD
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Going great!
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on April 23, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 22, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Plus, I wonder who the target could be...
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thanks! :D
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on April 22, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Cool! I might make one for my character! So awesome, Frost!
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on April 22, 2014
Cristallite
Cool story
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Yeah....
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on April 22, 2014
nursefunfuncake
What about me? FYI I'm not a human I'm a witch u saw my profile on the page rite?
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
thanks. :) More coming soon
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on April 22, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Good Story
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thank you :D
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on April 22, 2014
Stars_In_The_Sky
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Also, if you find out who Mark and Herald's mother is, IT WAS MY LITTLE SISTER'S IDEA! Sooooo, yeah. Hope you enjoy!
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on April 21, 2014