Mobius High

Mobius High

Well, I've already made a character book and a page. Now here is the actual story! Sorry if OCs and Sonic Characters are not acting like themselves, this is my interpretation of them. Not all the characters will be mentioned in each chapter. Thank you for reading!

published on April 21, 2014152 reads 35 readers 34 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Mark and Herald

*Mark's P.O.V.* Herald grabbed my hand and pulled me away from the girls. He bumped into Jessica and I saw him slip her cellphone into his pocket. Good one, that should teach her. We turned the corner and he let go. I began to cry.
"Why do I have to be a half breed?" Herald looked at me with a concerned look on his face.
"Don't call yourself that..."
"But It's true! I don't want to be a half breed! Why did Mom have to be a cat!? How come you look pure hedgehog!?"
"Mark, it's alright."
"No it's not! You look just like Dad, no one would guess that you were half cat! For me? For me it's obvious!"
"Mark! Stop that!" He grabbed my shoulders and looked me in the eyes. "You're letting them get to you! That's what they want! If you satisfy them, things will only get worse!"
"Yeah right!" Herald hissed and then covered his mouth. "You're letting your cat side show."
"Just....Come on!" He began walking to Dad's classroom. He wasn't teaching any classes at the moment, so we just walked in. He was at his desk.
"Oh, Herald! Mark! What is it?" My older brother held up Jessica's phone.
"Here, they were being mean to Mark." He looked at the cellphone and smiled.
"Great job! and they didn't notice?" Herald shook his head.
"They didn't notice."
"You've improved!" Herald gave the stolen phone to Dad. The two looked so much alike! If only I looked more like him and not Mom......
"Mark?" Dad's voice brought me back to my senses. "Are you alright? You're spacing out."
"Yeah, I'm fine!"
"Well, I'm going to confiscate the phone until they come to get it. So, who's is it this time?"
"Jessica's"
"Well then, she'll be here pretty s-" The girls burst in. Dad was right, they did figure it out quickly. Jessica spoke first.
"Professor Manic, may I have my cellphone back?" I quickly hid, they didn't seem to notice. The warning bell rang. Oh no! I had to hurry! Dad looked at the clock.
"You should get to class, I'll give you your phone after second hour."
"Ok," They left. That was close.....
"You should get to class too." Dad was talking to me now, and Herald had already left.
"Oh, right! Sorry!" I fast-walked out of the classroom and headed to Uncle Sonic's class.
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Well, I was late for English, and then for Science. I don't know why, but something always seems to happen to make me tardy. I face palmed myself on the way to History class. Couldn't I do anything right? The warning bell sounded and I sped up. If only I was as fast as my uncle, oh well. I entered Professor Silver's classroom right as the tardy bell rang. Just made it! I quickly sat down at my desk and half listened to the lecture.
"So that's how General Darren defeated the Shadow Walkers in the First Dark War. I want you all to write a report on his strategy and what you would do if in his place." Professor Silver concluded. Wait, what? It's already been that long? When I started paying attention, class was almost over. I didn't know we were talking about the First Dark War! That's my favorite time in history! Oh well, I missed the lesson and now it's time for lunch.
I mentally slapped myself about a thousand times. First I'm late for almost all of my classes, and now this! The girls are right, I am worthless......

*Herald's P.O.V.* I sighed and walked to the cafeteria. Miss Rose gave us a lot of homework, but that wasn't my concern. The bullies' effect on Mark was getting worse. I wonder if he's doing alright. I looked over to the table where he usually sits alone, to see an unfamiliar white hedgehog talking with him. Now that I think of it, didn't I see her in the hall earlier? She's kind of cute.......
I got my food and sat next to Mark like I usually do, but he doesn't seem to notice. He's too focused on that pretty girl.
"...and General Darren sealed the leader away, ending the war. Although, it took all of his strength to do so, and he died about three days later." She was saying. She then noticed me and asked Mark, "Isn't that your brother?"
Mark turned around and nearly jumped when he saw me, I guess he really hadn't noticed. Mark turned back to the girl.
"How did you know he was my brother?"
"He called you his brother earlier, didn't he?"
"oh yeah..."  I then decided to speak.
"Who is your new friend?"
"Her name is Rosalia, she just transferred today." Rosalia, huh? It's a nice name.
"I'm Herald the Hedgehog" I held out my hand and she shook it and smiled. Ok, Herald, look away before you get drawn in...... I smiled and shrugged the thought away. Never mind that, Mark has a new friend. I'm happy for him.
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Weiss_Schnee
Awwwww! May found her own Chao!!!
Jackie: KAWAIIIII!!!!!!!
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Frostgoddess
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on February 13, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
*sing-song voice*
I want to see another chapter in here!
We had a deal that you can't break!
I want to see another chapter in this story,
I'LL ONLY NAG YOU MORE AND MORE UNTIL I SEE THAT GODDAMN CHAPTER WROTE! See More▼
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Frostgoddess
I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING!!! ALL THE IDEAS THAT COME TO ME ARE STUPID! DX XD
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on February 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
@FandomLover You can help. ^.^ Any help is welcome
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on February 23, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Talk to me in PM about them, we'll come up with something together
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Frostgoddess
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on May 10, 2014
JustineTheCat
Before I got to chapter 4 I was like "who the hell is the target?!" then I read it, and I'm like "O.o WHAT'S A HUMAN DOING THERE!" LOL
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Look, the whole halfbreed thing is because Mark is half hedgehog, half cat. Basically his dad is Manic, who met a hot cat, they got together, and had Mark and as a result Mark is a hedge-cat.
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on May 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Frost, Chapter 4 is NOT lame, stop letting yourself down will ya??
Besides, having a secret spy student in the school following someone different is sure to lead to a big event!
Ya heard it from me peeps, chapter 4's only a lead-up to a big event!
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on April 30, 2014
Frostgoddess
***PLEASE DO NOT PRESURE ME*** My sisters and I agree that chapter 4 is the worst chapter. This is because I didn't have many ideas on what to have happen, but people kept pressuring me.
Nonstop: 'YOU NEED TO WRITE CHAPTER FOUR!' and 'Is chapter four done yet?' and things like that. -_-u
So Please do not pressure me to continue my stories. It just makes them See More▼
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on April 29, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Chapter 4 is so awesome!!!
If you wanna find out about the battle, it's all in Mobius High - Hayley's Story in Chapter 5 - Wrath of Sheena
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on April 27, 2014
Frostgoddess
Ok. but I'll have t give Mark his chao sooner or later XD
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Which one? *tilts head*
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, simply Lightning asking Evenstar out.
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, one of them is when Mark gets his Chao.
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I have two ideas, but I don't think they should happen in that chapter......
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I'm making it, but I'm having a bit of trouble with inspiration -_-u
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on April 25, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 24, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
LOL Mark's just all "WHY AM I A HALFBREED?!"
He needs to chill down like hell xD
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Going great!
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on April 23, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 22, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Plus, I wonder who the target could be...
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thanks! :D
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on April 22, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Cool! I might make one for my character! So awesome, Frost!
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on April 22, 2014
Cristallite
Cool story
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Yeah....
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on April 22, 2014
nursefunfuncake
What about me? FYI I'm not a human I'm a witch u saw my profile on the page rite?
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
thanks. :) More coming soon
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on April 22, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Good Story
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thank you :D
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on April 22, 2014
Stars_In_The_Sky
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Also, if you find out who Mark and Herald's mother is, IT WAS MY LITTLE SISTER'S IDEA! Sooooo, yeah. Hope you enjoy!
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on April 21, 2014