Mobius High

Mobius High

Well, I've already made a character book and a page. Now here is the actual story! Sorry if OCs and Sonic Characters are not acting like themselves, this is my interpretation of them. Not all the characters will be mentioned in each chapter. Thank you for reading!

published on April 21, 2014200 reads 32 readers 48 not completed
Chapter 1.
Rosalia's first day.

Rosalia's first day.

*Rosalia's P.O.V.* Well, here it is!
I looked at the high school I was transferring to. It seemed like a normal high school. Why was I sent here again? I pressed a button on my watch and the screen showed the boss.
"I've arrived at Mobius High." He smiled.
"Good. You remember your mission, Agent Thorn?"
"Of course. I will report to you once the target is in sight. Agent Thorn, out." I pressed the button again and the watch screen returned to normal. I'd better go inside.
I entered the school and signed in. My paperwork was already done, so I didn't have to worry about any of that. Looking at my schedule, I walked into the classroom for my first class and took a seat at an empty desk. The teacher was a hedgehog with Pink quills and a red dress. My schedule said that she was 'Miss Amy Rose'.
I tuned in to the other students conversations. A Black bird wearing green was talking to a brown rabbit with orange hair.
"What extra classes are you taking this semester?" The bird asked. The rabbit replied,
"I signed up for Chao Care, I hear the teacher's pretty hot!"
"I'm taking engineering, and geology. Maybe something else as well."
The bell rang, and everyone stopped talking and faced the front. Suddenly, I heard fast footsteps. A black and white cat, no, a hedgehog....Wait, what?
Anyway, he ran into the classroom and sat at the desk next to mine.
"Sorry, I'm late!" He said. The teacher looked at him and sighed.
"Mark, no running in the halls, and you need to start arriving on time. That's the third time this week!" He looked more and more ashamed as she spoke, then said quietly,
"I'm sorry, Miss Rose, I'll try harder." A purple wolf with red hair snickered. So, this boy was named Mark.
Amy Rose cleared her throat.
"I'd like to introduce a new transfer student," She looked at me and I stood up.
"My name is Rosalia the Hedgehog. I look forward to working with you." The teacher nodded and I sat down. She began to explain things like slope and intersects on a line. I sort of zoned out because I already knew this and it was boring. I snapped back to reality when I heard someone whisper.
"Psst! Rosalia!" I turned my head to see Mark with a note in his hand. He held it out to me while Miss Rose's back was turned. I took it and opened it up.

'To: Roseallia
I'm Mark the Hedgecat. Welcome to Mobius High! You seem quite cool, will you be my friend?'

Oh, he wants to be friends. That also explains what he is, he's a halfbreed. Well, there are nicer ways of putting it.....
I wrote back:

'Sure. Thank you for the compliment. By the way, my name is spelled Rosalia.'

I passed it to him and waited for class to be over.
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The bell rang and all of the students got up and left the classroom, including Mark. He seemed determined to not be late for his next class. I walked up to Miss Rose.
"Excuse me, but, where is Professor Sonic's classroom?"
"It's room 16, just walk down the hallway and make a left turn, it should be visible!"
"Thank you!" I exited to hear a girl's voice say "Halfbreed!" followed by some laughing. I turned to see Mark and three girls. One was the purple wolf from before, the other two were an orange echidna and a pink rabbit with blue hair. Mark was looking at the ground, his ears flatten against his head. Suddenly, a green hedgehog that I didn't even realise was there stepped between them.
"Leave my brother alone!" He demanded. The pink bunny rolled her eyes.
"Oh yeah? Well, technicaly you're a halfbreed, too. You just don't show it!" The hedgehog growled and glared at the three girls. "What are you going to do about it?" He grunted and grabbed Mark's hand. I watched him walk away from them, purposely bumping into the wolf on his way. The girls smirked.
"You did it again, Alice!" The Echidna said. Alice looked at her phone.
"I just got this great new message!"
"forward it to us!"
"Alright!" The echidna pulled out her cellphone and laughed, but the purple wolf was searching her pockets.
"Where's my phone?" She started to sniff around and walk away with an angered expression. A little while after they left my view, the bell rang and I snapped out of it. It's a bad habit of mine, I'll start watching and listening and soon, I don't think of anything else but their conversation. I ran to the classroom and walked in. I wasn't late, luckily it was the warning bell. Mark wasn't in the classroom. He's going to be late again if he doesn't hurry....
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Lady_Artemis
Awwwww! May found her own Chao!!!
Jackie: KAWAIIIII!!!!!!!
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Frostgoddess
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on February 13
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on February 13
Lady_Artemis
*sing-song voice*
I want to see another chapter in here!
We had a deal that you can't break!
I want to see another chapter in this story,
I'LL ONLY NAG YOU MORE AND MORE UNTIL I SEE THAT GODDAMN CHAPTER WROTE! See More▼
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Frostgoddess
I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING!!! ALL THE IDEAS THAT COME TO ME ARE STUPID! DX XD
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on February 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
@FandomLover You can help. ^.^ Any help is welcome
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on February 23, 2015
SnakesVenomSans
Aww... I wanted to help
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on February 23, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Talk to me in PM about them, we'll come up with something together
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Frostgoddess
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on May 10, 2014
JustineTheCat
Before I got to chapter 4 I was like "who the hell is the target?!" then I read it, and I'm like "O.o WHAT'S A HUMAN DOING THERE!" LOL
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on May 10, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Look, the whole halfbreed thing is because Mark is half hedgehog, half cat. Basically his dad is Manic, who met a hot cat, they got together, and had Mark and as a result Mark is a hedge-cat.
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on May 06, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Frost, Chapter 4 is NOT lame, stop letting yourself down will ya??
Besides, having a secret spy student in the school following someone different is sure to lead to a big event!
Ya heard it from me peeps, chapter 4's only a lead-up to a big event!
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on April 30, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Oh if this applies to me I am sorry
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on April 30, 2014
Frostgoddess
***PLEASE DO NOT PRESURE ME*** My sisters and I agree that chapter 4 is the worst chapter. This is because I didn't have many ideas on what to have happen, but people kept pressuring me.
Nonstop: 'YOU NEED TO WRITE CHAPTER FOUR!' and 'Is chapter four done yet?' and things like that. -_-u
So Please do not pressure me to continue my stories. It just makes them See More▼
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on April 29, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Chapter 4 is so awesome!!!
If you wanna find out about the battle, it's all in Mobius High - Hayley's Story in Chapter 5 - Wrath of Sheena
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on April 27, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
I Like it!
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on April 27, 2014
Frostgoddess
Ok. but I'll have t give Mark his chao sooner or later XD
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on April 26, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
The second option Lighting asking Evenstar out
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Which one? *tilts head*
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on April 26, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
I Like that one better. You should do it
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, simply Lightning asking Evenstar out.
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on April 26, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
That should be one. The other idea?
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Well, one of them is when Mark gets his Chao.
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on April 26, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
What are they?
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I have two ideas, but I don't think they should happen in that chapter......
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on April 26, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Our roleplays can be inspiring?
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on April 26, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Maybe you can look at our roleplays?
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on April 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
I'm making it, but I'm having a bit of trouble with inspiration -_-u
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on April 25, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
I love it!
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on April 24, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 24, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Can't wait for more
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on April 24, 2014
Lady_Artemis
LOL Mark's just all "WHY AM I A HALFBREED?!"
He needs to chill down like hell xD
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on April 23, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Going great!
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on April 23, 2014
Frostgoddess
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on April 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Plus, I wonder who the target could be...
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on April 22, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thanks!
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on April 22, 2014