My poems.

I will be adding on to these soon, please do rate, I want to know if I'm good or not.

published on April 12, 20148 reads 6 readers 8 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Waves.

The oceans endless waves.
Roll through months and days.
For thousands and thousands of years.
Creating hopes, creating fears.
Many famous pantings there’s been.
Showing us what people have seen
Sunlight on ocean, moonlight on sea.
Sailing over and filling us with glee.
To feel happy to rock and roll.
On the waves that stool man’s soul.
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threebeltking
I do have way more poems but I don't want to type them all!!!
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on June 07, 2014
Cristallite
I may of accidental clicked since I go on qfeast mostly on a ipad not computer..its harder to rate certain things..
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on April 18, 2014
threebeltking
I'm deleting my bullying poem because it might aggravate or just really upset people.
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on April 18, 2014
threebeltking
Why is it rated 2.8 if you are complementing it? Weird...
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on April 14, 2014
Cristallite
Cool
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on April 12, 2014
Elleyd
i really like you! im so jealous! i suck at poetry!
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on April 12, 2014
threebeltking
Thanks!
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on April 12, 2014
DontJudgeMeByMySocks
its good!
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on April 12, 2014