My poems.

I will be adding on to these soon, please do rate, I want to know if I'm good or not.

published on April 12, 20148 reads 6 readers 8 not completed
Chapter 1.

Adventure.

Good-bye we call to home and all,
Though we may try we still might fall.
And if return we would go through,
Adventure hard adventure true.

For will is strong and so our hands,
Avoid the thieves and evil bands.
In a battle fist or blade,
Wound may hurt but slowly fade.

Travel through a dragons lair,
Meet two kings, one mean, one fair.
A giant’s cat’s fierce growl,
A demon bird on the prowl.

Wind will blow and freezing rain,
In the woods or on the plain.
Walking ‘round and passing by,
All the things under the sky.

Tale may end from west or east,
To a medal or a feast.
Then is not the time to jest,
It is best to go and rest.

SO WHAT ADVENTURE SHOULD I CHOSE?
AND WHAT ARE THE TOOLS I SHOULD USE?
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Comments (8)

threebeltking
I do have way more poems but I don't want to type them all!!!
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on June 07, 2014
Cristallite
I may of accidental clicked since I go on qfeast mostly on a ipad not computer..its harder to rate certain things..
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on April 18, 2014
threebeltking
I'm deleting my bullying poem because it might aggravate or just really upset people.
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on April 18, 2014
threebeltking
Why is it rated 2.8 if you are complementing it? Weird...
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on April 14, 2014
Cristallite
Cool
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on April 12, 2014
Elleyd
i really like you! im so jealous! i suck at poetry!
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on April 12, 2014
threebeltking
Thanks!
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on April 12, 2014
DontJudgeMeByMySocks
its good!
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on April 12, 2014