Crimson the hedgehog

Crimson the hedgehog

I decided to make a story about my OCs Crimson and Dusk.I may add other peoples OCs if they allow me to which they may not.I am only a mild Sonic fan so sorry if things are not that good.Making the prologue then anything else.

published on April 01, 2014136 reads 25 readers 36 not completed
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Chapter 4.

Chapter 3:The dream (Note first part is a bit..well feel free to skip it..)

I was in a dark and dim lit room that looked like a cell.At the very end of the cell, I saw a hooded figure with stitches as a smile.I blinked and it was suddenly closer.i could see The thing had blood stains on the robe when it came close.It raised a a sharp butchers knife above my arm.I tried to scream but no sound came out,The
thing only smiled seeing my attempt revealing long pointy yellow fangs sharper then any teeth I have seen before.I managed to somehow kick it in its face as my feet were not shackled by iron cuffs unlike my wrists.

The hood came off revealing..Dusk? It was my brothers face however he had no eyes! I could see a red pupil in the black sockets. Its face was thin and it only barely shared the resemblance to Dusk.I wanted to scream, to scream at it and run but I was shackled and i knew screaming would not do anything.I kept quiet not wanting to look at him, no not him he no longer was normal or my brother.It smiled even more and cut my arm cleanly off somehow.Blood poured out and I winced as the pain hit me.It hurt, it felt like I was stabbed in the heart a thousand times, no it felt worse."Slow and painful or fast and quick." Something said in a alien like raspy voice. I realized it was it,I picked up my courage."Quick a-and fast" I murmured still in pain.As soon as I finished my sentence without warning it stabbed me in the heart making the blade go all the way through and then ripping it back out.I screamed but still no sound came.I closed my eyes, the world turned dark grey and then faded to void black.The last thing I heard was something or someone laughing.

"wake up..." i heard a voice repeat getting louder and louder.I saw a flash of white and woke up with a gasp.It was just a dream,just a dream..I looked out the window, it was still night.I got changed and walked onto the balcony taking in the cool breeze.I looked up at the moon and smiled slightly.It looked so beautiful at night in the sky with its luminous yet faint glow and the stars that twinkled in the sky around it.I started singing quietly to myself.

"Your a beautiful singer you know" I heard someone say, I turned around and saw my parents."M-mum? d-dad?" I looked at them with a mix of fear, curiosity and anger."yes its us,"Dawn said with her usual smile.I ran up to hug them but they disappeared as soon as I touched them."We are ghosts.." Dawn said looking at me with a small smile."We need to go now," My father said looking at the moon,"Know that we are proud of you no matter what"Dawn said and they both disappeared

I sighed and changed into something more suitable before going inside and walking downstairs.Was I hallucinating? It felt like they were really there..I couldn't get them off my mind so I went to the couch and did what everyone else would basically do, watch the T.V, The news..again even though it was expected.I grabbed the remote and was about to change the channel when more news about 'Auralis' was said.Apparently he stole a few secret weapons in progress from one of those big companies .Auralis looked so much like Dusk...I hoped it wasn't him yet I had this feeling that it was.I have no idea what egghead did to him but..If he could change someone like that..well just the thought scared me. i turned off the t.v since they were moving onto another topic.With nothing else to do I drifted off into a sleep with Dusk on mind.

I had no idea how much time passed before I woke up from having the same reoccurring dream.I could hear chatting upstairs as Rose,Gina,Sapphire and Alexis walked down the stairs.Something or someone knocked on the door." i'll get it!" Sapphire said before running downstairs and opening the door.A pink hedgehog , a fox,a dark blue hedgehog and a cat along with a..wolf? With wings? Alexis looked at them and welcomed them in. "Do you..by any chance know each other?" I asked although I already knew the answer."This is Jackie,Julie,Storm,Bailey and Luna" Sapphire said gesturing to each. I looked at Luna with slight curiosity."Umm..what exactly..are you?.." i asked before thinking it may of been rude."Sorry if that seemed rude" i immediately said soon after." its alright and I'm a moonwolf" Luna said with a small smile and at that moment I knew we would be friends.

Just as I was about to bring them to the main room the power went out.I heard Sapphire let out a scream but it was muffled before Alexis was heard, followed by Luna and then a growl.Something or someone covered my mouth and I let out a muffled scream and I felt the barrel of a gun to my head.My wrists were tied together and i was chucked into the back of a vehicle of some type, probably a truck from its size of the back.I looked around and saw Jackie,Alexis,Sapphire,Gina,Luna,Bailey and Julie but no sign of Storm.The girls were all unconscious and tied up as well.I felt something hit me hard on the back of my head and I blacked out.
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Jason_the_hedgehog
I love this no matter how old this is
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Cristallite
Working on the rewrite.
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Cristallite
Thank you, though.
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on January 16, 2018
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on January 15, 2018
Noescaping
Can't believe this was so long ago, god damn
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Cristallite
Lol, I know xD I'm planning a partial rewrite xP.
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Cristallite
Mm, the rewrite may or may not mention other OC's, and it's more of a series of short drabbles based on Crimson's life. It's not a full out chapter kind of story, unfortunately. In it, Crimson's a Demoness, though, as she's in Mobius, she takes the form of a hedgehog.
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on January 09, 2018
Noescaping
If you do my oc isn't a hedgebat anymore, she's a phantom and her brother is a Lucicriphilis. I hope you do rewrite it, I'd love to read it
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on January 09, 2018
sapphirethehedgehog
It's been ages since you updated this, and left it with a cliffhanger?! Come onnnnn XD I want moreeeee
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Noescaping
Ikr
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sapphirethehedgehog
It's fine XD
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on April 01, 2017
Cristallite
Sorry. But uh, not really that into the Sonic fandom anymore. I mean, I may rewrite thid dtiry entirely. I wouldn't want to ruin the fandom though because I know next to nothing about it.
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on April 01, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
aaaAHHHHHHH Kay
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on March 31, 2017
Cristallite
This story is possibly on hiatus. Or being discontinued. Sorry.
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on March 31, 2017
Cristallite
Sorry Sapphire. There is this other story I am working on as well and I have been on Quoted more then Qfeast but I will try.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hiiiiii! :D
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on October 02, 2015
Cristallite
Hey Sapphire!
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on October 02, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
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on October 01, 2015
cassiesanime
my cousins name is saphire lol
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on October 01, 2015
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on May 31, 2015
Noescaping
Thanks. :D
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on May 29, 2014
Cristallite
Your welcome
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on May 26, 2014
Noescaping
Yay you added my cousin Julie. :D
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on May 25, 2014
Cristallite
Im working on it, also you mean a character for this story?
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on May 02, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more! How do I create a character?
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on May 02, 2014
Cristallite
thanks
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on April 28, 2014
Cristallite
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on April 18, 2014
Cristallite
I know how I want the story to end
But I dont know where to start
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on April 18, 2014
Noescaping
:D
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on April 18, 2014
Cristallite
Aww thanks
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on April 18, 2014
Noescaping
:P this is so good. 8D
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on April 18, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks
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on April 14, 2014
Cristallite
I try it's probably not the best story out there and chapters may not come out fast but yeah
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on April 06, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks.I am trying
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on April 06, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks
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on April 02, 2014
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on April 01, 2014
Stars_In_The_Sky
Nice story so far!
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on April 01, 2014