Silvermoons story

Silvermoons story

This is my first MLP FiM fic no idea why I'm writing it but yeah sorry if it may be short.If anyone can create a cover art that would be appreciated since i am not that artistic. Constructive criticism is fine.

published on March 30, 201421 reads 11 readers 27 not completed
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Chapter 4.

Chapter 3:The Journey begins

"We have to make the journey though.If the ancient enemy destroys Equestria none of us will survive.If the Celestial beings destroy Equestria i'm sure that there magic is powerful enough to fix it again as well as us being able to survive so its worth a chance"I said.The other two chosen ones nodded. "What do the Elements of harmony think?" Princess Celestia said."Go ahead sugarcube"AppleJack said."Well its better then nothing so you simply should darling"Rarity said."It...sounds...AWESOME!"RD said."Umm...you should go...if..if thats alright with you." Fluttershy whispered quietly barely audible."OOH! Yeah and when you return I can throw a Welcome Back and Thanks For Saving Equestria Party!" Pinkie Pie said starting to plan the party already."Good Luck!"Twilight said."You three should get a good nights rest before starting that way you can gather supplies.We have prepared three rooms"Celestia then said seeing as the Mane Six all agreed on letting them go."Thank you Princess Celestia" we said as we headed to our rooms.My room had the walls looking a lot like the starry night with the beautiful moon.The bed was covered by a transparent veil with tiny stars and a couple of eclipse shaped moons.It was quite fitting in my opinion.Before I went to bed I heard a knock on the door.I opened it and saw Princess Luna standing there.I invited her in.

"Thy know thy probably will get thyselves killed when you go on the quest right?"She said."Probably but I believe that if we do survive and succeed,it will be well worth it"I told her.She smiled at me."Princess Celestia knew that this day would one day come.She prepared some powerful armor for each of thou infused with some power of thou's Celestial sign.Thou is the moon and SunShine is the sun whilst ShootingStar is the stars." She then said.I nodded.The Princess of the Night then exited the room.I went to bed.

I woke up but the room was nowhere to be seen.I heard my voice being called and turned around to see my two best friends.They looked at me.We then had a group hug."You are the chosen ones."A mystical voice said.We turned around to see a transparent Alicorn with stars that looked just like the veil on my bed back at the room except with no moon."Of course I don't have a moon young one.I am Starlight,The one of the stars and one of The Celestial Beings."She said as if reading my thoughts."Yes I can read your thoughts."She said with a sigh."Are you four done?" A different voice said impatiently.A brilliant white Alicorn with a long flaming mane and tail,No really,It was  on fire."Who are you?" Sunshine asked."I am FlamingSun,The one of the sun and one of the Celestial beings."She said."Seeing as you have already met my other two sisters let me introduce myself"Another voice said.Another Alicorn stepped forward.It looked exactly like me except its mane was and tail was flowing like Princess Luna's."I am Eclipse the one of the moon and one of the Celestial Beings"She spoke with a calm voice.

"Where are we?"ShootingStar asked."Why isn't it obvious? your'e in a dream"FlamingSun asked impatiently waiting for this to be over and done with."why are we here?"I asked."You are here because you are the chosen ones and it is the time to receive powers so you can complete the quest.You already have the items given to you by SilverMoon's father."Eclipse said.With that said there horns glowed and covered us with that same glow as before.When it was over we looked at ourselves.Nothing changed but I felt more powerful like I could do anything."Indeed.The powers we gave you was just to enhance your abilities"Starlight said.I then remembered a question I wanted to ask."Why did my father have the items?"I asked."Your great grandfather was chosen by us since he had a pure heart.Your family has been the protectors of the items ever since till you chosen ones came.Your father though had sworn a oath that he could not tell you what they were and why he had them."Eclipse said."Now we have to return back to the items but remember we will be with you to guide you along your journey"Starlight said before along with the other Celestial Beings ,turned into a little ball of glowing light and then entering the item they were.I then woke up from the dream.

It was morning.I headed out to go prepare for the probably long and dangerous journey ahead of us.I saw SunShine and ShootingStar on the way our and waved to them.After we had prepared all the things necessary, We went to go tell Princess Celestia  that we were leaving.When we entered the throne room we saw Princess Celestia and Princess Luna talking.Princess Celestia noticed us and motioned with her hoof for us to come over."Ah there you are.I have something to give you three"She said before presenting us the armor that Princess Luna told me about.SunShines armor was a golden color with the same gem that was on her necklace at the front.ShootingStars was the exact same except with a oval shaped diamond and that it was a snowy white color  as well as a hole for her wings.My armor was a silvery color with a sapphire that also had a hole for my wings.It also had a silver strap where I attached my sword.The strap magically tightened when I put the sword and the sheath in.ShootingStar had a blue strap for her bow and quiver.The strap also magically tightened when she attached her bow and quiver.SunShines Magic necklace went over the armor.

We then headed out.ShootingStar and I took to the air and flew at a new speed that would make RainbowDash look like a rookie.SunShine cast a spell that gave her flaming wings and she also took to the sky except she stayed a bit lower to the ground.When we arrived Sunshine was waiting for us.Her flaming wings had disappeared.I  then began trotting over to our destination.PonyVille.Since this was where the last attack was.We were going to try to track down the enemy and find out their base.

Authors note: Chapter four probably wont be don for a while. still accepting OCs
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caspertheminorman
If you want, I could draw you a cover. I really have nothing else to do, anyways.
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caspertheminorman
Also, even if you say no I’m making one >:0
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Cristallite
Np, thank you so much
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on May 08, 2018
caspertheminorman
It looks bad, but I finished it yesturday.
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on May 07, 2018
Cristallite
oof. You're more than welcome too uwu Thank you~<3
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on May 07, 2018
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on May 06, 2018
silvermoon43344
-.-
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silvermoon43344
o im just bored that's what i mean when i make this face sorry about the confusion this story is a great story
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Cristallite
Oh, thanks! This story is kind of on hiatus though since I have no ideas and a bad sense of writer's block, that and I'm working on something else.
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on December 21, 2015
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on December 19, 2015
Cristallite
I wrote this a while ago for one of my OC's. I just created that name because it would suit it. I honestly am not proud of it and will probably edit it next time I have time. Please do not be offended because of it's name. This story has nothing to do with about you. It is about my OC.
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on December 19, 2015
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on December 15, 2015
Cristallite
Thanks CD(mind if I call you that?)
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on June 15, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I'm not an MLP fan but this is good! :)
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on June 15, 2014
Cristallite
Working on it!
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on May 13, 2014
Cristallite
Ok sorry if i dont add chapters to my stories for a while.I assure u I am working on them
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on April 06, 2014
Cristallite
Hmm Crystals younger sister perhaps:

Possible names: Flare,Ember Storm,fire,cloud (you can combine some of these words like firestorm)

Eyes:Sky blue,firey orange,deep blue,crimson red
Cutie mark ideas:something to do with a storm cloud,regular cloud,fireballs,fire,orange,phoenix
Coat ideas: Dark yellow,Red(any shade),orange(any shade), white or something else. See More▼
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on April 01, 2014
Cristallite
Umm couldn I just say what could happen? Maybe shes good but then the villians gain something precious of hers say for a sibling or something special and threaten her to act as a spy for them until shes found out and the main characters forgive and she gains the thing back?
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Cool so is Crystal evil good or changes from one side to he other and if so what side did she begin with?
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
If so I will try to put it in the next chapter and tell me what alignment she or he is.Like if shes good or working with the villain and if she ever changes side.
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Do you still want the oc from before?
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Anyone have any OC I could use or they want me to use and please try to get others to read this if possible :D
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Also sorry if I got some info wrong and I am still not used to how Lunq speaks so that may be wrong but I tried.
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Thanks and i will
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on March 30, 2014
Pinkie123
I like it you should post the next chapter :D
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Might as well post the next chapter
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Also I have the first three chapters done
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
I will continue if you guys like it :D
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on March 30, 2014
Cristallite
Tell me what you think like i this is my first story.
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on March 30, 2014