Silvermoons story

Silvermoons story

This is my first MLP FiM fic no idea why I'm writing it but yeah sorry if it may be short.If anyone can create a cover art that would be appreciated since i am not that artistic. Constructive criticism is fine.

published on March 30, 201426 reads 11 readers 26 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prolouge

My name is SilverMoon.I have a midnight black coat as well as a silvery colored mane and tail that shimmered in the moonlight.I also have violet eyes just like my mother.My Cutie Mark is a Silver Moon surrounded by clouds. My mother 'Midnight Shadow' had a deep blue coat with a black mane and tail as well as beautiful violet eyes and a Cutie Mark of a shadow of the moon. She was a unicorn who was related to royalty. When I was born she shunned me and my father disgraced because she gave birth to a pegasus and was expecting a unicorn like herself. She should of at least expected a pegasus though, she did marry a pegasus after all.My father 'Lunar Wing' was a pegasus with a silver body,dark blue mane and tail and icy blue eyes as well as a Cutie Mark of the moon with a silver wing sticking out of it on each side. My father loved me very much however he barely saw me since he was busy with his job being in the night guard and all but when he did have time he made the most of it. These days I live in a house on the clouds right above PonyVille.I came here three years ago after the 'incident' in Manehatten and have been living here ever since. What was the 'incident' you may wonder?,Well I would rather  not talk about it, but anyways this is my story

I feel like the chapters will be really short..This is a one shot also sorry if the characters are out of personality this is my first story.in the comments post if you have a OC that I could maybe use.

OC form:
Name:
Mane and tail:
Coat:
Eyes:
Any scars or marks:
Powers or skill:
Race(NO ALICORNS):
Cutie mark:

I need a assasin oc for the fourth chapter.
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silvermoon43344
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silvermoon43344
o im just bored that's what i mean when i make this face sorry about the confusion this story is a great story
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The_Panda_Otaku
Oh, thanks! This story is kind of on hiatus though since I have no ideas and a bad sense of writer's block, that and I'm working on something else.
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on December 21, 2015
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on December 19, 2015
The_Panda_Otaku
I wrote this a while ago for one of my OC's. I just created that name because it would suit it. I honestly am not proud of it and will probably edit it next time I have time. Please do not be offended because of it's name. This story has nothing to do with about you. It is about my OC.
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The_Panda_Otaku
Hey @StickerLord
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on December 19, 2015
SnakesVenomSans
Hey! :3
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on December 19, 2015
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on December 19, 2015
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on December 15, 2015
The_Panda_Otaku
Thanks CD(mind if I call you that?)
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on June 15, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I'm not an MLP fan but this is good!
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on June 15, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Working on it!
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on May 13, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
I can't wait for you to add more
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on April 15, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Ok sorry if i dont add chapters to my stories for a while.I assure u I am working on them
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on April 06, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Skills: Very intelligent. Can solve almost every problem a pony give her.
Personality: Very Brave. Naive. Outgoing. Can be nice and sweet unless you get on her bad side.
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on April 05, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
I will give it a try.
Type: Pegasus
Name: Dazzling Moon
Mane: dark blue
Coat: violetish color See More▼
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on April 05, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Hmm Crystals younger sister perhaps:

Possible names: Flare,Ember Storm,fire,cloud (you can combine some of these words like firestorm)

Eyes:Sky blue,firey orange,deep blue,crimson red
Cutie mark ideas:something to do with a storm cloud,regular cloud,fireballs,fire,orange,phoenix
Coat ideas: Dark yellow,Red(any shade),orange(any shade), white or something else. See More▼
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on April 01, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Umm couldn I just say what could happen? Maybe shes good but then the villians gain something precious of hers say for a sibling or something special and threaten her to act as a spy for them until shes found out and the main characters forgive and she gains the thing back?
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Cool so is Crystal evil good or changes from one side to he other and if so what side did she begin with?
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
If so I will try to put it in the next chapter and tell me what alignment she or he is.Like if shes good or working with the villain and if she ever changes side.
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Do you still want the oc from before?
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Anyone have any OC I could use or they want me to use and please try to get others to read this if possible
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Also sorry if I got some info wrong and I am still not used to how Lunq speaks so that may be wrong but I tried.
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Thanks and i will
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on March 30, 2014
Pinkie123
I like it you should post the next chapter
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Might as well post the next chapter
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Also I have the first three chapters done
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
I will continue if you guys like it
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on March 30, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Tell me what you think like i this is my first story.
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on March 30, 2014