I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20143031 reads 96 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 5.

Oh No

Crystal's POV

I went down stairs to see Jeff on the floor, blood running from is back. He was passed out. Slenderman isn't here, I'm gonna have to get somebody.
"HOODIE! EJ!! MASKY!!! Come down stairs!!!! HURRY!!!!" I screamed.
"WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED!!" Screamed EJ.
"I-I don't know, I just walk down here to find this." I took Jeff's sweater of of me, and lifted his back a little and put the hoodie under it. I couldn't pick Jeff up, I had to ask well, Toby. O.o
"What happened or him?" He asked. I didn't want to answer him but I had to,
"I don't know." I answered
Toby lifted him up and went into the spare bedroom. All of them, EJ, Masky, Hoodie, and Toby. Hoodie came into my room.
"He's gonna be ok, but he needs rest." Hoodie said in his computer like voice.
"T-thanks Hoodie. For helping me with J-jeff." I gave him a hug, tears running down my face. Toby brung Jeff into his room, and plopped him on the bed.
"Jeff?" No answer. He was still blacked out.

                                                                       1 hour later

Jeff's POV

"What the hell happened?" I looked next to me and saw my crystal sleeping next to me, clinging my arm. It looks like she's been crying. She woke up.
"J-Jeff your awake." She kissed me, stroking my hair.
"Don't move baby, well that much, someone stabbed you, and you were bleeding."
"I know who stabbed me," I let out a small chuckle.
"Who?"
"Ben." I let out a smile. I got up, and went to bens room. Sure enough he was passes out, with Vodka in is hands.
"Hey little Benny." I laughed. I picked him up, brung him in the bathroom, put him in the bathtub, and put the shower on, freezing cold water. He  jumped, and yelled
"WHAT DA FUQ!?!?" I got him out, took of his hat, shoes and shirt, and wrapped him in a towel. I picked him up. He looked so scared, shivering, I felt bad for him. So i got him to his room, he put new clothes on, I picked him up.
"J-Jeff?" He asked shivering.
"Yes?"
"Why did you d-do that t-to me??" He asked.
"For kissing her, I'm not that mad, because you were on drugs that night." He was in my arms, he looked so sweet. I brung him to my room, and before I could put him on my bed, he was already asleep in my arms.
"H-How? How can he do that?" I asked, very shocked. I brung him down stairs and put him on the couch. I covered a blanket over him.
"Crystal," I said, walking up the stairs.
"Yes??" She said that when I was sitting down on the bed.
"I don't really know what to do with Toby, he's been in his room all day."
"All day? Not all day."
"Huh?" I asked.
"Well when I found you on the floor bleeding, I had to get Toby to lift you up to the spare bedroom because he was strong. He fixed you up,"
"Wait what?" I was shocked.
"Yes. He did that because he cared about you."
I grabbed her phone.
"What are you doing?"
"I'm texting Toby. If I text from mine he'll think I want to kill him. So I'm pretending it's you."
The text read: "Toby can you meet me behind that big tree with a carve on it?"
"Tell me when he answer." I said to Crystal.

                                                                          5 minutes later

"Jeff he texted!" She said to me.
"Well what did he say?" I asked her.
"Ok, I'm out here." The text from Toby said. I grabbed my white hoodie, my knife, put on skinny jeans, and slipped on my converse.
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bakugo
CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014