I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20143031 reads 96 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 4.

The truth spills out

Jeff's POV

Something was wrong. She acted like nothing was wrong. I kissed her. She gave a weak smile.
"Tell me.
"Fine, it's kind of. A Secret.......I can't let Toby or Ben hear this." I ran and checked on them. They had there eyes fixed on the tv.
"Well, do you wanna talk about it while we take a walk in the woods?"
"Sure I guess." She whispered. I stood her up and we ran outside. She still had my hoodie on. She looked so cute wearing it.
"Ok so when you left to get the charger and your sweater, they kind of raped me. Not in that way, forcing me to kiss them. That kind of rape. So Ben pinned me on the wall and made out with me. When he was don't, Ticci-Toby then kissed me.... They said if I told anybody, they would kill me." She sobbed. She wiped a tear in the hoodie. She was scared. She was shaking. I hugged her. When we got back, I went to bed, waiting to deal with it in the morning, I was so freaking tierd.

~Next morning~

"Hey Ben, Toby, come over here.... I got presents for you. When they came in, I locked both doors to the kitchen.
"W-what?" They said.
"Mother- f***ers. You made out with Crystal?"
"N-No." Toby said twitching. I pulled out my knife, stabbed the both in the arm. I knew Toby couldn't feel the pain but Ben could. Ben cursed. Jeff picked up Ben, unlocked the door, and threw Ben in is room.
"Now, Toby......"
"Yes?"
"WHAT DAFUQ IS WRONG WITH YOU BASTERD!! I trusted you...." A tear ran down my face.
"J-Jeff."
"Get the F**k away from me. I said, running to my room crying.
"Jeff, don't cry."
"No, I trusted Toby. Ben, most of the time on drugs. I'm not that worried with him. But Toby, I trusted him."
"What happened?" She asked "to you and Toby?"
"Well when he killed his dad, and his sister died, we took him. We had to patch him up. He had scratches all over that could get infected so we had to sew stitches into him. He was nervous. He had his shirt off because we were doing his back. I had my shirt of too. He had his hands on to my shoulders. He kept twitching, cursing, yelling, all of that. I had to calm him. We had are heads together, his hands were still on my shoulders it was like head butting each other. I told him, "after we're done, well get waffles. After we're done we'll go on a killing spree. That worked. When Ej was done with the stitching, Toby's back was sore. I did him everything I asked. We grew closer. Best friends. I told him many secrets, and embarrassing secrets. So did he. He never told anybody. I told him stuff and he never told anybody. When I said "when I get a girl, promise not to rape her."
"Promise" he said. I said that because sometimes he can't control himself. Now he can. He choose to do that to you."
"Jeff...I love you, dot let one person ruin I you." She kissed me. Then when I went down stairs something stabbed me. I saw Ben before I blacked out.
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bakugo
CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014