The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012248 reads 29 readers 34 not completed
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Chapter 4.

Chapter 4

Bella's Point Of View:

Scade wipes the rest of the foam off his face with my tissue.
"What name did you book us in with?" he asks.
"You're John Smith and I'm Sarah Smith."
"We're married?!"
"No you dolt, brother and sister."
"What number room are we?" he asks.
"Sixty five," I reply curtly, walking ahead of him down the corridor. "Here we are..." I unlock it and we both look at the room in disbelief. A moth eaten sofa sits in the corner. Paint peels off the walls, the carpet is a moldy green and...there's only one bed.
"Well, I bags the bed," I say quickly and leap onto it with delight.
"No way!" Scade cries. "I am not sleeping on that sofa!"
"Looks like you're gonna have to," I say, fishing my iPod out of my pocket and turning on the music. Firework, Katie Perry.
"Man, I hate this song," Scade grunts as he walks lazily to the sofa.
"So do I, I'll change it." I flip through all the different songs and finally settle on Blue Orchid by White Stripes.
"Hey this is the same people that did Seven Nation Army right?" Scade says.
"Yeah."
"Put Katie Perry back on," he groans.
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Comments (34)

TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on August 12, 2014
TheGirlwiththeYellowpencil
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on October 09, 2013
Clove
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
Rainbow_Bird
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
girlonfire
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
girlonfire
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
girlonfire
so so so talented
x
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on April 07, 2013
Clove
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Clove
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
EvilAngel1490
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Clove
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Nobody.07
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
MaddieBear95
Cool
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on December 19, 2012
Storyteller10
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
CarlMontclaire
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on December 04, 2012
SarcasticRipred
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
SarcasticRipred
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on December 04, 2012
SONAMY12345
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Beauty784
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Beauty784
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Beauty784
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Clove
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
Runaway
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Clove
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
Nobody.07
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Clove
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
ARTPOP
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
Clove
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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