Slave part 2

Slave part 2

Hi this is because of all the commenters asking for more. Next is about the running away

published on May 28, 2013142 reads 40 readers 21 completed
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Chapter 5.

Chapter 5

He just looks then takes off my dress and I glare at him. He smiles then leaves. I shiver from the cold and realise a fan has been put on just by me. Great I am just going to freze and have a annoying noise. But even then I fall asleep.
I wake to Jace next to me with a knife. I dont flinch. He comes up and puts a hand on my breast. He brings his knife to it and cuts it. I can almost see the blood pouring into the eggcup. The pain I am immune to but his closeness is intoxicating.  He brings his lips to mine and his hands run around my body. I cannot move and this is how  he must like it. Him in control were I have no nothing.
He slits my neck and I die drifting peacefully into heaven

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Comments (21)

Reploid_Zero
I think the ending was...disappointing...
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on February 20, 2015
Tributefrom12
SAD but a great story!
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on June 18, 2014
xxwhoviangirlxx
So sad );
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on April 25, 2014
quizzergirl4242
I wrote the 2nd chapter for her to use! I'm so happy!!
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on February 09, 2014
BasicCactus
So awesome! :D
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on January 04, 2014
quizzergirl4242
plus aaaww it ended. GOOD STORY THOUGH
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on December 10, 2013
quizzergirl4242
yay you chose my idea!!:D
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on December 10, 2013
Thehost
Sorry guys its finished
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on November 27, 2013
quizzergirl4242
WRITE A BOOK GOD GLAMMIT
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on November 09, 2013
Thehost
Sorry i cant think of anything more
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on October 23, 2013
MEGS0316
make more wat happens next!!!!!!! write a friggin book!!!!!!!!:D
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on October 23, 2013
ChokolatLover
I won't say it again but MORE!!!!!!!
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on July 30, 2013
RosenEliza
Awesome please make more
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on July 09, 2013
RylieB
love it
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on June 30, 2013
kattie
More :P
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on June 21, 2013
kerorelly
For real please make more!!!
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on June 16, 2013
kerorelly
Ok this is a really good story!!! :D
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on June 15, 2013
kerorelly
MORE! Come on please add more more more more more MORE just add more plz.
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on June 15, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
please add more! :D
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on May 31, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
great so far! :)
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on May 30, 2013
catesonskates
But he tracks her and locks her in a dark cold room with no bed! How is that not treated like a slave? That's worse then most slaves!
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on May 28, 2013