Slave part 2

Slave part 2

Hi this is because of all the commenters asking for more. Next is about the running away

published on May 28, 2013148 reads 41 readers 22 completed
Chapter 1.

Running

I pound down the road my legs starting to give away. I knew that this would hurt but I dont know If i can literally  do it. I slide by a big oak and sit there pannting, when I hear noises. Men sayng my name and saying "Come out wherever you are and we wont hurt you,"
"It will turn back to normal," I slid in a bush and wait breathlessly untill the voices die away. I release my breath then get a sharp pull from my shoulders. My arms are pinned to my side as I see Jace.
"Get of me!" I tell him
he tightens his grip "No, I thought you loved me," He shouts
"I do," I reply
"Why did you leave?" He asks
"Because, I dont want to be a slave any more,"
"I dont excatly treat you like one." He tells me
"I know I am sorry," I aplogise. His lips brush mine as he pulls me closer. I kiss him and we both are at each in an instance. He wraps his arms round my waist and kiss. He smells like peppermint and lemon. It is freezing but we don't care. Then a small snowflake falls on our joined hands and we look upwards. Tiny little snowflakes drift downwards and I mutter "Beautiful,"
"Come home," He begs "I wont let them hurt you."
"ok," I say reluctantly
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Comments (22)

Reploid_Zero
I think the ending was...disappointing...
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on February 20, 2015
Lovelyperson
Such a sad but good story!
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on July 08, 2014
Tributefrom12
SAD but a great story!
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on June 18, 2014
xxwhoviangirlxx
So sad );
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on April 25, 2014
quizzergirl4242
I wrote the 2nd chapter for her to use! I'm so happy!!
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on February 09, 2014
BasicCactus
So awesome!
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on January 04, 2014
quizzergirl4242
plus aaaww it ended. GOOD STORY THOUGH
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on December 10, 2013
quizzergirl4242
yay you chose my idea!!
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on December 10, 2013
Thehost
Sorry guys its finished
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on November 27, 2013
quizzergirl4242
WRITE A BOOK GOD GLAMMIT
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on November 09, 2013
Thehost
Sorry i cant think of anything more
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on October 23, 2013
MEGS0316
make more wat happens next!!!!!!! write a friggin book!!!!!!!!
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on October 23, 2013
ChokolatLover
I won't say it again but MORE!!!!!!!
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on July 30, 2013
RosenEliza
Awesome please make more
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on July 09, 2013
RylieB
love it
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on June 30, 2013
kattie
More
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on June 21, 2013
Equri3
For real please make more!!!
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on June 16, 2013
Equri3
Ok this is a really good story!!!
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on June 15, 2013
Equri3
MORE! Come on please add more more more more more MORE just add more plz.
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on June 15, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
please add more!
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on May 31, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
great so far!
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on May 30, 2013
catesonskates
But he tracks her and locks her in a dark cold room with no bed! How is that not treated like a slave? That's worse then most slaves!
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on May 28, 2013