Poems (4)

Poems (4)

This is a collection of the first poems I have posted here, and I created them at a writing camp I went to in 2012. It was called Young Author's Camp, or Camp Write-Away. Hope you like the poems!

published on April 05, 201319 reads 14 readers 7 not completed
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Chapter 5.

Another Poem... (I'll add more later... he he)

Constraints are:
- 4 quatrains
- no adjectives, adverbs, or similes,
- the word "lime"
- alternating lines of 8 and 10 syllables



Yonder Sky

A lime in the sky, there yonder
The moon, a glowing orb of seething light
Glowering up in the Earth's skies
Upon me as I walk in the moonlight

A shadow crosses over me
Almost covering my entire face
An owl, perched on a branch, spots me
And glides off into the night's depth

I watch him as he flies, soaring
And long to be free, free like the heaven's sky
But now I fall into despair
I will never be free, but stay forever.

Forever will I long to fly
But alas I will never touch the sky
Here I am grounded on the Earth
But to stare up in wonder at the sky.
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Comments (7)

Mcdazzle2000
By the way, there's more vocabulary words if you want me to add them.
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on January 16, 2015
Mcdazzle2000
Thank you.
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on January 03, 2014
HellRaiserPrincess
I love your poem. It's peaceful and beautiful as you talk about the Rose Blossoms.

-Steph<3=)
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on April 17, 2013
wolfness
Pretty good. :)
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on April 06, 2013
Mcdazzle2000
Really? You like it?
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on April 05, 2013
Beauty784
Wow, awesome! Write more! (;
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Mcdazzle2000
i wrote more.... a little late, but i did XD
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on December 15, 2014
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on April 05, 2013