ChokolatLover - Page 5

Hi, I love chocolate and I love making friends. My favorite sports is soccer and I would like to be either an actress or a doctor! I have a black cat named Mimi and I sing along to See More▼
Meeting another Taylor
Meeting another Taylor
Liam P.O.V
"Harry! Hurry up! We're gonna miss the movie!" I shouted angrily. Harry was taking forever in the bathroom. He's been in there for quiet a while now, maybe an hour? "Coming!" He ran down the stairs but tripped on a piece of clothing making him fall on his bum. He cursed under his breath and put his shoes on.

We arrived at the cinema ten minutes later and were fifteen minutes late because Harry couldn't choose between coke and fanta and because he had to go to the bathroom agai...
on October 05, 2013
The End
The End
So there you have it, the end of the story. I know, why did she die? And how? Well I never really explained why she died in the story. Well remember that bullet? Yeah THAT bullet. Well, they left something untreated so I guess it killed her. I'm not really good with deaths and explanations but that's what's killed. An untreated wound left by THE bullet. Anyways, from now on, I'll be updating my other story, The Diary (Liam Payne Fan Fiction) I you guys wanna check that out, feel free and BTW,...
on October 04, 2013
You Always Will Be My Summer Love
You Always Will Be My Summer Love
Zayn P.O.V
Millions of fans screamed our name and the guitar started playing. My heart dropped and I couldn't help but cry. I was to sing first. "Zayn, ready?" Liam asked. I nodded quickly so he couldn't see the tears in my eyes. "Can't believe your packin your bags, tryin so hard not to cry, had the best time and now it's the worst time, but we have to say goodbye." Harry started singing. "Don't promise that you're gonna write, though promise that you'll call, just promise that you won't fo...
on October 04, 2013
Pls don't leave me
Pls don't leave me
Zayn P.O.V
"Zayn." She stopped breathing and stared into space. I called 911 and panicked. She couldn't die. What was wrong with her? They arrived and hurried. I followed behind. I wanted to know what was happening. After three hours of waiting, a doctor came out. "Mr. Malik?" "Yes." "You may see her." I smiled. I went in the room and saw her, looking more hurt than ever. "Angela!" "Zayn! It hurts, everything." "I know babe, I know." I stared into her beautiful green eyes. "I love you." Tear...
on October 04, 2013
A disastrous wedding
A disastrous wedding
Angela P.O.V
I was super nervous. Liam's dad agreed to walk me down the isle since my parents were dead. Liam's dad smiled at me and I took his hand. "Good luck." He whispered. The doors then opened and the piano started playing here comes the bride. Everyone stood up and Liam's little niece was throwing flowers. Liam smiled at me and I saw Danielle looking sad. I smiled at Liam and we began. The priest talked and talked till our moment came."Will you have this woman to be your wife, to live...
on October 04, 2013
Amazing Grace
Amazing Grace
Angela P.O.V
I dragged him out of the water and put his lifeless body on the ground. He wasn't breathing anymore so I did CPR. I did everything I could but he showed no signs of life and he wasn't breathing anymore. Come on Zayn, make it, please. I stopped and knew he was gone from this world. I did the only thing that came in mind, I sang. I knew I was bad but I sang.
"Amazing grace, how sweet the sound that saved a wretch like me. I once was lost but now I'm found. 'Twas blind but I see,...
on October 04, 2013
I lost part 2
I lost part 2
Zayn P.O.V
The lake was beautiful. I used to come here whenever Angela and I had a fight. It was nice and calm here. I loved it. It made me at peace. I threw some stones in the lake and watched the ducks swimming and flying. I sat on a bench. I lost. I lost Angela. I stared at the water. Don't Zayn. Don't do it. No I have to. I took off my shirt and my jeans as well as my shoes. I sighed and took my phone out and wrote a letter.
DEAR ANGELA
I'M SO SORRY. I SHOULD HAVE NEVER TREATED YOU LI...
on October 04, 2013
Doubts and unexpected surprise
Doubts and unexpected surprise
Angela P.O.V
I saw Liam talking to a girl with curly hair. She was very beautiful. He was checking out her arm and I saw the sparkle in his eyes. He said something and they laughed. He looked so happy with her. I looked at my ring and frowned a bit. "Miss Trees, you're awake?" "Yes." Liam saw me and stood up. "Angela!" He shouted. I saw the girl frown but I didn't care. "Liam." "How did it go?" "I feel a lot better now." "That's good." "Tell me who she is in the room, ok?" "Who?" I pointed a...
on October 04, 2013
A person from the past
A person from the past
Liam P.O.V
I took a seat in one of the chairs and checked the time. In a few hours, she'd be back. When she said yes, I felt like the luckiest man alive. She was my whole world. It was a bit stupid that I planned the wedding before and arranged everything even though she could have said no. But I knew she'd say yes. I had a feeling. Everything was planned. From the guests to the after party and honeymoon. After she says yes, the music will start. We'll dance while I sing. She'll love it. At ...
on October 04, 2013
The proposal
The proposal
Angela P.O.V
"I love you Angela, forever and always." I smiled. His phone went off. "Hello. Yes this is Liam. It's ready? Thank you. I'll pick it up." He let go of me. "Sorry Angel, I need to pick something up. Okay?" I nodded. "Sure." "Oh yeah and Angela, prepare yourself for the operation, ok?" The operation? Right, it was today. "Ok." I washed my face and stared in the mirror. My hair was sticking out everywhere, my face was pale and there were bags under my eyes. How could Liam love me? ...
on October 04, 2013
 I love you, forever and always.
I love you, forever and always.
Angela P.O.V
I woke up and the light blinded me. Liam was asleep. I tried moving out of his grip but he was too strong. "Liam, I need to use the bathroom." I said in his ear. He moaned and opened his eyes. "Liam, I really need to go." He stretched and let go of me. I can't believe the nurses let him stay the night. I went to the bathroom. I flushed the toilet and washed my hands. I came back and Liam was already up. "Liam?" "Good morning Angel." I gave him a confused look. "Oh right. I was g...
on October 04, 2013
I lost part 1
I lost part 1
Zayn P.O.V
I drove home and opened the door. I then slammed it shut. "Hello there. Wow. Someone's mad." Niall backed away and I ignored him. I threw the car keys on the couch and ran to my room where I locked it. I couldn't take this anymore. What's wrong with me? First, I confess my feelings to Angela and we almost got together but Liam just had to be in the picture. Then I see them kiss and feel jealous even though I knew this would happen since I never visited Angela. I punch him and then...
on October 04, 2013
I hate him and he hates me.
I hate him and he hates me.
Angela P.O.V
Louise came in with a bunch of cookies and smiled. She was wearing a short summer dress and she looked really beautiful. I was almost jealous, ok maybe a bit. She waved and sat down. "Hey." She cheerfully said. She grinned widely. She was very excited. This made me laugh a bit. "Angelaaaaa!!!!" A funny voice shouted. A boy with red skinny jeans and red stripes entered. Louis. "Louis!" Louise gasped and tried to hide her excitement but didn't really succeed. "Well hello there be...
on October 04, 2013
Hi! :)
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ChokolatLover
Ok :)
on October 07, 2013
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Writerunner
You are so nice! I'm LalaLucy... If you want, you can check out my old profile... (Sorry I was kinda dramatic about those stories...)
on October 06, 2013
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ChokolatLover
Hi :)
on October 04, 2013
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on October 04, 2013
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created a personality quiz
Talk to One Direction
personality
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Hey guys, so I've decided since you really liked talking to my friend Niall Horan, why don't you meet his mates?? What do you think Niall? Niall: YEEESS!! But I'm hungry! Make me lunch? Me: Niall!!! Fine! Niall: Yay!
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on October 03, 2013
Hey JKRowling, I'm not sure when they will be more but I'm trying to update soon.... Will inform you when there's more and thank you for reading my story!!!
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ChokolatLover
I updated!!! Finally and BTW, I'm not sure you'll like the updates cause it's mostly bad news, lol :)
on October 04, 2013
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ChokolatLover
Sure :)
on October 03, 2013
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JKRowling
Yay to the quiz. I'm I'm love with ur story and I hope u update asap
on October 03, 2013
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ChokolatLover
And BTW, I'm making a one direction quiz
on October 03, 2013
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on October 03, 2013
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Look what personality I've got! I'm Justin Bieber even though I'm a girl! :) What about you?
Justin Bieber
You like pranks, seriously! You like making people laugh and smile too. You are loyal to the people you love, especially your other half. You are always thankful for every single thing. Nice!
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on October 02, 2013
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Hey. Thought I would introduce myself. I'm one of @JKRowling's friends!
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ChokolatLover
And I love One Direction too, my favorite song is They don't know about us and after that Summer love and then... Idk! They're so many songs to choose from! And I followed you :) Ok, peace out Directioner xxx CHOKOLATLOVER
on October 02, 2013
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ChokolatLover
If you need any help with something, ask me :)
on October 02, 2013
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ChokolatLover
Oh hey! What's up? Sorry about not answering, I Thought I was offline but I wasn't and I haven't checked Qfeast for a while since I was on a two day trip with my class. It's nice to meet you by the way :)
on October 02, 2013
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on October 01, 2013
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I've added new chapters to my One Direction Fan Fiction and I wanted to give you credit because I've been inspired by some of the things you wrote. Thanks!
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JKRowling
oh thanks. its not as good as yours
on September 30, 2013
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ChokolatLover
Awww... Don't thank me, thank you! :) I'll read your fan fiction right away! :D
on September 30, 2013
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on September 30, 2013
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added a new chapter to One direction Imagine
Emily Mae and Niall
Emily Mae and Niall
Emily Mae
Dad is dead. You couldn't believe it. You were so depressed and never ate or drank. "Emily Mae, sweetie! Please go eat?" Your mom asked. You wanted to protest at first but you knew that she was right and you should go eat but where? Nandos. Yes, your favorite restaurant. "I'm going to Nandos mom." You muttered and left. You arrived at Nandos and could smell the delicious warm food. You ordered and waited. The lady came back and gave you your food, you turned around to leave when s...
on September 29, 2013