High BEN And Balloon Rush

High BEN And Balloon Rush

This was just a random story I came up with. It might help me with my Writer's Block if I write something so random and creative like this... So, why don't you get started on reading this craziness?

published on July 01, 2014117 reads 24 readers 40 not completed
Chapter 1.
Luigi's Death Stare

Luigi's Death Stare

"BEN, literally. Stop being such a child." I heard Jeff say.
"SHUT UP JEFF!!!", BEN yelled as I walked into the living room.
"Rush," BEN jumped up, grabbed me by the wrist, pulled me over to the T.V., made me sit down, and handed me a controller.
"Oh, so I suddenly walk into a room, so now I have to play games?"
"Yes..." BEN giggled for no apparent reason. I was confused. What was up with BEN now? What did Jeff do if he did something?
BEN started and I instantly knew what we were playing. It just so happened to be Mario Kart 8. How we got this, I don't know, but I was eager to play anyways. He chose Luigi and I asked, "Why him?"
"Because he's special...."
"Oh god," Jeff said as I noticed he was still in the room, "That stare..."
"Stare?" I was instantly confused... AGAIN!
"THANKS FOR BEING A SPOILER, JEFF!" BEN shouted sarcastically.
Jeff answered, "You're welcome! At least he doesn't know what it is, so it's not fully spoiled. Rush! Pick your character already!" I quickly clicked, uhh.... Who should I click?! I chose Dry Bones quickly. After choosing cars, BEN chose a random stage and we got started. And it got weird quickly. I started in 5th and BEN started in 7th. Since he started back there, I heard him shout, "YES! I'M BEHIND YOU!" How is that a good thing? That just means I'll win, right?
"As I pass you, watch my face! I mean, Luigi's face! YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! Just watch!"
BEN quickly sped up the kart and zoomed past me, but as he passed I watched Luigi's face, and it gave me the most ominous stare I have ever seen, causing me to speed up my kart and stare back ominously. (Author's Note: The picture is a real picture from Mario Kart 8, and it's Luigi's Death Stare.) I followed along side of Luigi, staring back until he finally sped away.
"Amazing... Why did they add that into the game?"
"Why did you stare back the whole time? Luigi isn't looking at you, Rush, he's looking at Dry Bones. And Luigi isn't real so there was no reason to stare back."
"Jeff, you're ruining the fun! Anyways, how do you know Luigi isn't watching?"
"BEN, don't even try and creep anyone out. It's not gonna work." But BEN went on.
"He might be in each and every game with Luigi's character in it watching the player. Maybe he is. Maybe he isn't..."
That sent NO shivers down my spine... But it did sound somewhat creepy... Aren't we all though?
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Cristallite
Crimson:g(creepy pasta dimension) SHIP!!!
Me: ..this..will be interesting. GRAB THE POPCORN
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on July 20, 2014
Frostgoddess
AWESOME!
Kate: *snickering* Ah! I think I hear the fangirls coming!!!!*nearly dies laughing*
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EverymanHABIT
Wow, I updated it only like... 5 minutes ago and you've already read it? Now, that is awesome!
Rush: *Narrows eyes* You'd better watch it, Kate. I've always had a knife with me.
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Frostgoddess
Kate: I do! XP
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: Nothing stops Jeff.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
Kate: *giggles* That doesn't stop Jeff.....*thinking aloud*
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: Because... I'm not going to kill another Pasta... If you weren't a Pasta, you'd be dead by now.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
KAte: And why won't you? *raises eyebrow* [Turns out he isn't as angry as I thought. :P]
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: You're lucky I won't actually kill you....
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
KAte: :3 Thankies!
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
(Okay, good.)
Rush: *Looks over at it and sighs* At least your drawing isn't bad, especially for being on a computer.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
(Yeah! XD)
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
Kate: *tries to whistle innocently, then remembers she can't whistle* Take a look. :D (don't worry, it wasn't inappropriate)
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
(You know, you should really make a BENxXxRush picture and post it on the Shipping and Roleplay page!!! XD)
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: Nothing. Just... One question... What was in the picture?
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
KAte: Been what? *innocent face*
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: It better not have been... Actually, you know what, no.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
Kate: *giggles, then finishes the art and posts it online* XP MWAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!!!! Now EVERYONE shall know!!!!!!!
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: I don't care anymore. I'm done. I quit. I'm just gonna say nope.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
KAte: *goes back to working on the fanart*
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: Nope. *Turns away* Nope, nope, nope, nope, nope.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
Kate: *starts laughing really hard* YOUR FACE!!!THAT'S PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: *Looks over at what she's doing* SCREW YOU! I QUIT! I'M DONE WITH LIFE! I'M DONE!
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
KAte: *Starts making Ben X Rush fanart*
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: *Sighs and rolls eyes*
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
KAte: Ok! Just let me get on the internet REALLY quickly...... *starts 'sneaking' over to the computer*
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: Apparently not you. Don't start shipping BEN with me. You have been warned.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
Kate: *sticks her tongue out at Rush* Who cares?
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on July 18, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Rush: You don't have to be scared of them for them to hurt you.
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on July 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
XD
Kate: I'm not scared of knives! >:)
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
creepypastaHAWT
OMG I need to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plus BALLOONS ARE AWSOME
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on July 09, 2014
Frostgoddess
Kate: *reads the note at the bottom* awwww! *pout* I know they aren't gay but a bit of yaoi would be funny! XD
It WAS funny!
Kate: XD Yeah! GIVE ME DA BALLOONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*brings out a packet of balloons*
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on July 01, 2014
Frostgoddess
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kate: 8D This reminds me of that tie Ben practically drowned me in alchogol.... I don't know what happened, but I think Jeff said I was dancing on the table singing weird songs and tackling people......
^.^U I remember that....... then you tried to kill Offender with the bottle.
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EverymanHABIT
Rush: I'm not gonna be a spoiler... But as I said, it gets worse.
I'm updating for Rush right now! :D
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EverymanHABIT
Well, it's updated now! :D
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on July 01, 2014
Frostgoddess
kk!
Kate: I can't wait to see what happens next! >:)
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on July 01, 2014
EverymanHABIT
XD Wow... I should've been there!!!
Rush: I wish I was there! THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN HILARIOUS!!! But... This story isn't over yet, and it gets worse... How high did BEN get?!
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Frostgoddess
Good point, how high DID he get?!
Kate: O_O I get the feeling he's going to do something really weird. XD
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on July 01, 2014
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on July 01, 2014
Cristallite
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on July 01, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
LAUGHING SO HARD AND I DON'T KNOW WHY! :D that was so random!
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on July 01, 2014