Calypso

Calypso

Calypso is a Greek Myth -- the daughter of Atlas, a Titan defeated in the war between Kronos and the gods. When he was defeated, Calypso was cursed to spend the rest of eternity on an island. Every once in a while, a hero will wash onto the shores. It's always someone that has to leave, someone who still has battles to be fought. No one ever finds the island twice, and no one can leave unless she falls in love with them. It's an unending cycle of torture for Calypso. Read her tale... Maybe she'll even find love! (This is based off of Rick Riordan's 'Percy Jackson and the Olympians' and 'Heroes of Olympus,' although I took the liberty of changing it up a bit.)

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Chapter 4.
The Story of Percy - Part 3

The Story of Percy - Part 3

Night. I tried to think of how long it's been since Percy came, but I couldn't. I wanted to throw something in frustration.
Percy suddenly emerged from the cave. He stares out at the skies.
"Percy, what do you see?"
He looked down at me. After a few seconds, he managed, "I was just looking at... Uh... I forgot."
I laughed a little. "Well, as long as you're up, you can help me plant these."
I retrieved my small spade and started digging. I handed him a small flower, and he stared at it stupidly.
"That's moonlace," I explained. "It can only be planted at night."
He looked at it for a few more seconds, and I turned back to my patch of ground. "What does it do?"
I glanced at a bushel of moonlace. "Do? It doesn't really do anything, I suppose. It lives, it gives light, it provides beauty. Does it have to do anything else?"
"I suppose not."
After firmly pressing the dirt around my first stem, I reached out for the one he was holding. Our hands touched for a moment. I quickly planted the final stem and stood back, admiring my work.
"I love my garden," I murmured.
"It's awesome," he agreed. "Back home, my mom always wanted a garden."
"Why did she not plant one?"
"Well, we live in Manhattan. In an apartment."
"Manhattan? Apartment?" The words felt strange on my tongue, and I wasn't entirely sure that I pronounced them the same way he did.
He stared at me. I tried not to feel awkward. "You don't know what I'm talking about, do you?"
"I fear not. I haven't left Ogygia in..." I waited for a second, then gave up. I couldn't remember the number of years. "A long time."
"Well, Manhattan's a big city, with not much gardening space."
I frowned. "That is sad. Hermes visits from time to time. He tells me the world outside has changed greatly. I did not realize it had changed so greatly you cannot have gardens."
"Why haven't you left your island?"
I looked down and tried to shove away the pang of hurt. "It is my punishment."
"Why? What did you do?"
"I? Nothing. But my father did a great deal. His name is Atlas."
As expected, I noticed the shiver. Everyone knew Atlas. No one liked him. This was the moment when he shoved me away and begged to leave.
"Still," he said hesitantly, slowly. "It's not fair to punish you for what your father's done. I knew another daughter of Atlas. Her name was Zoe. She was one of the bravest people I've ever met."
I just stared at him, stunned.
"What is it?" he finally asked.
"Are--are you healed yet, brave one? Do you think you'll be ready to leave soon?" I tried not to choke as I spoke. I knew that this wouldn't work. He had to leave. I didn't want another heartbreak, but I'd get one anyway. Might as well suffer it sooner rather than later.
"What? I don't know." He moved his legs stiffly. "You want me to go?" he asked softly.
"I..." my voice cracked. I forced my heart to back off and continued. "I'll see you in the morning. Sleep well."
I ran towards the beach, hoping that some cold air and frigid water could clear my head.
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Dei_Dei
R.I.P Jake
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Dei_Dei
Rest in pieces*
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LoneSoul
I ONLY READ THE FIRST CHAPTER AND I LIVE IT *screams in excitement*
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vive_la_revolution
XD Really?
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vive_la_revolution
Well, thanks! WARNING: Reading past first chapter may result in reading some very cringe-worthy crap. Proceed with caution.
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LoneSoul
Yeah!
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Queen_of_Narnia
....THIS IS SO GOOD!
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vive_la_revolution
XD Not really, but thanks.
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Queen_of_Narnia
You'll see.
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vive_la_revolution
I hate when qfeast does that.

Like what?
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Queen_of_Narnia
Okay, Qfeast is saying I'm spamming. *Sighs*

But I have so much to say to you!
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vive_la_revolution
I dunno, my head is just really jumbled right now. Could you read the latest post on my wall?
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Queen_of_Narnia
Don't know what? That you're a super awesome and amazing writer?
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vive_la_revolution
I don't know...
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

But seriously, don't doubt your writing skills.
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vive_la_revolution
For real, it's not really. XD
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Queen_of_Narnia
Not really? Are you kidding me? This is amazing!
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ELINAviolets
It's cool, I would really want to know how it continues. You got a new follower for the series, success ^-^
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vive_la_revolution
:D Thanks so much!
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vive_la_revolution
Sure! :) And I definitely will. :)
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ELINAviolets
Won't every writer think like that XD well, your cool. we should be friends, if you want to ^-^

well I can tell you you are pretty fast in writing it, already chapter 11, pretty fast. I hope to read it to the end and if you ever need a basis for another story, message me X3
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vive_la_revolution
Thanks for the offer! If I ever do need help, I'll definitely ask. And yeah. At least, I think. Some people say I am. Sometimes I love my writing, other times I think that it is the worst rubbish ever written. And I will! :)
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ELINAviolets
Your welcome, if you need help I'd be happy to help :) well, I never actually read what got you inspired but I do think I could help if needed

are you a good story-writer on your own? I'm pretty bad on my own cause I can only imagine a basis, and after a few minutes of writing I get bored of it...

but still, success with continuing the story ^-^
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