Notice Me

Notice Me

Mia was the most nociable girl in Adeki high. After all, who wouldnt be interested in her? All of the students, and even a few teachers, were interested. All, save, for Sesa. (Short story)

published on May 22, 201769 reads 16 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 3.
Crazy

Crazy

Mia gritted her teeth.
Again.

It was Valintines day, and Sesa was ignoring her.
Again.

"Please take my card." She said, smiling and trying to hand him a pink envelope.
He rolled his eyes, got up, then walked outside where he sat beneath the sakura tree.

She huffed, stomped her foot, then crossed her arms.

Why was he so stubborn?!?


She stomped to him, pulled out the envelope, then stood in front of him, so, so, so incredibly pissed off.
He glanced up at her, then decided to try to leave.

"Oh, no you dont!" She says, sitting him back down and opening the envelope, reading its contents.

"Sesa, you have been going to school here for a few months now, and I realized why youre so mad:
You need a girlfriend. I need a boyfriend.
Please be my Valintine."

She looks up to see him gone, walking away with his hands in his pockets.
She screamed, long and hard.
Mia had been trying to get him to notice her since... August..? December? She didnt even know anymore.

He stopped, frozen in place.
He knew that kind of scream.
And it terrorfied him.

"Sesa Okomota, you listen to me right now!" She screamed, catching everyones attention. "Thats right, listen up! I am in love with him, and he wont freaking notice me! What kind of person does that?!"
Everyone looked at Sesa, who was glowing red in embarrasement.

Why now of all times to do this?!?!

"Thats right, I said 'Love'!" She screamed, her voice echoing. "And I swear, before the year is out, he shall be mine!!!"  
He gulped.
Not this bullshit again..!

"Sesa, dude, she obviously likes you." A boy says, a hint of jealousy in his voice.
"Sesa, please go out with her!" A girl says, comforting a crying Mia.

Sesa felt his anger rising.
He ahd been through this shit once.
He didnt need this again.

He just sighed, then pushed his way through the gathering croud and towards home.

Mia felt...
Dead.
Hollow.

Needing.

"Dont worry, Mia." A boy says, smiling awkwardly and trying to comfort her. "He'll come around."
Mia looked at the boy, realizing he was right.
"Oh, he'll come around." She says, wiping her eyes.
Even if I have to beat it into him.
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Comments (32)

The_Mad_Hatress
I love Yandere stories!
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on October 08, 2017
TylerWay
Woah!! Unexpected!
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TylerWay
Lol XD, but true
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Smug look*
Thats why Im the one, the only,
Motherfuggin Emo King!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
NNNNNNNNOOOO SESA DON'R FALL ASLEEP!!!
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TylerWay
Oh the evil laugh.....
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TylerWay
Good bye Shiki-kan!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Ikr?
Im about to go to lunch. See ya then!
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
I thank thee, for the story. Inspiration. It can happen any time.
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Meh. Ill be buisy all week, so I thought,
'Dude, why not say screw it and write just one more?'
Then boom, Notice Me twas born.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Ans it was a great story
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yep
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
There. A 5-chapter love story
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
And I will try to come read them!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
I know. Ill try to write this summer if I can.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yay. Man, I'm going to miss your stories
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Heheheh soon my friend soon.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Not as crazy as the others. I want to see her level of craziness
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Just wait. She's not as crazy as the others, but she still crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Mia is dangerous
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TylerWay
Yep. Sesa is going to get beat..
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TylerWay
Get killed? 0_o Woah
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Or worse...
;)
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Someones in for iiit...
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Some ones in for it...
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Love is strange
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup. Wait till Valintines day
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TylerWay
Valentines Day...Everything get's crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
This time the girl is the popular one!
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on May 22, 2017