Notice Me

Notice Me

Mia was the most nociable girl in Adeki high. After all, who wouldnt be interested in her? All of the students, and even a few teachers, were interested. All, save, for Sesa. (Short story)

published on May 22, 201769 reads 16 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 2.
Emo

Emo

Sesa was arguing with himself.

Dude. Not cool.
Screw you, I did what I had to.
By being rude?
Yup.
Youre hopeless.
Duh.

Sesa sighed.
He hated this place already.

The girl ran up to him, walking next to him and smiling.
"Hello, I dont believe we met." She said, smiling and stopping in front of him. "Im Mia Amito. Welcome to our school!" she added, sticking her hand out for a handshake.

Sesa glared at her hand, then proceeded to walk around her when she stopped him again.
"Listen, I think we had a rough start. Can I show you around the school?"

Sesa snarled, then smiled smuggly.
"You can show me where the exit is." He spitefully stated, pushing her out of the way and making her heart skip again.

Why was he being mean?
All she did was-!
The boy stops, then walks back to her, making her smile again.
"I forgot to do this." He says, flipping her off and walking away again, mumbling, "Stupid preppy."

She gritted her teeth, forcing a smile and walking with him regardless of his obvious attempt to be rude.
"I might be a preppy, but at least Im a pretty preppy. Arent I?" She asks, slyly checking him out.

Beanie, black do-rag around the neck, band tee, black leather jacket, chains on the hips...
She couldve sworn he was a Punk if she didnt know any better.

"Nope." He said, making her physicaly flinch.
Did he just...?!
"Wait wait wait, hold up!" She said, stepping in front of him again. "You dont think Im pretty..?" She asks cautiously, feeling herself begin to tear up.

He sighed, rubbed the bridge of his nose, then stated, "Look, Im not interested in how pretty or smart you are. You dont interest me in the tiniest bit. Now, leave me alone or you might learn something about me you would rather forget."
He pushed past her again, only this time he was a bit rougher.

She quietly hitched her breath again, feeling her heart beat faster.
Every time that had happened, she had been...
"In love..." she said, holding her heart and falling to her knees. "But we just met today..."

He is...
Perfect.
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Comments (32)

The_Mad_Hatress
I love Yandere stories!
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on October 08, 2017
TylerWay
Woah!! Unexpected!
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TylerWay
Lol XD, but true
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Smug look*
Thats why Im the one, the only,
Motherfuggin Emo King!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
NNNNNNNNOOOO SESA DON'R FALL ASLEEP!!!
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TylerWay
Oh the evil laugh.....
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TylerWay
Good bye Shiki-kan!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Ikr?
Im about to go to lunch. See ya then!
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
I thank thee, for the story. Inspiration. It can happen any time.
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Meh. Ill be buisy all week, so I thought,
'Dude, why not say screw it and write just one more?'
Then boom, Notice Me twas born.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Ans it was a great story
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yep
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
There. A 5-chapter love story
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
And I will try to come read them!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
I know. Ill try to write this summer if I can.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yay. Man, I'm going to miss your stories
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Heheheh soon my friend soon.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Not as crazy as the others. I want to see her level of craziness
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Just wait. She's not as crazy as the others, but she still crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Mia is dangerous
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TylerWay
Yep. Sesa is going to get beat..
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TylerWay
Get killed? 0_o Woah
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Or worse...
;)
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Someones in for iiit...
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Some ones in for it...
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Love is strange
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup. Wait till Valintines day
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TylerWay
Valentines Day...Everything get's crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
This time the girl is the popular one!
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on May 22, 2017